The Peerless Sun of Tang Sect

I downloaded this software specifically for the author. I have to praise the author for his good writing style and details.

Because I recently discovered that the original ending of the protagonist walking into the universe alone is not suitable, so I have to change it. After the change is completed, it is best to add a female protagonist. Please give me your opinions. Wang Qiuer will not have to think about it, because her original body, the Emperor's Auspicious Beast, has other functions in the book. If it is changed, it will affect the subsequent plot. Also, I found that a few book friends like Silver Dragon King very much. Are they too old?

Dual protagonists, both protagonists have wives in the end, no ♂♂, the first dozens of chapters are all the plot of the original work, the adaptation is not big, but the book starts to enter the state later, so don't just abandon it when you see so many original plots in the early stage. When the protagonist makes some decisions about Huo Yuhao's behavior, the narration will describe the author's feelings about the Douluo series. Readers can take a careful look and don't let their own subjective prejudices lead them to think that this is very poisonous. This book is good, and according to the author, it is impossible to be a eunuch.

It's hard to read what I wrote before. How can the Ultimate Martial Spirit be at level 7? It doesn't matter if you say it is born at level 10 and then healed to half a level. Also, the protagonist's surname is Xu and he has a Sun Martial Spirit, but just because he doesn't look dark, he doesn't think of the Sun and Moon Royal Family at all. Do you think Shrek is a fool?

Suddenly I understood the author. If the current Dou Er fan fiction is generally divided into two categories: those with the original protagonist as the protagonist and those with the self-created protagonist as the protagonist, the nanny novel will be a type that will not please either end. In this case, it is really not easy for the author to persist in completing the novel.

Huo Yuhao's male mother, very warm feeling

I personally feel that the plot is okay, but the skills of the protagonist are a bit low-priced. The fireball technique and warm wind are all out. Can't we make it more awesome? Flares, solar storms, the magnetic field of the sun itself, the gravity of the sun, if it is not possible, another helium flash supernova will make this awesome.

The first part was okay, but when the protagonist became apprentice to Long Xiaoyao, it became a bit unbearable. Long Xiaoyao and the group of evil spirit masters are in cahoots, not to mention they are of the same kind. I don't know why the protagonist can think of him as a good person. As for pairing Huo Yuhao with a would-be war criminal, it's nothing compared to this.

After reading the previous part, I don't understand why the protagonist wants to stay at level 30 and leave Shrek Academy for two or three years after Shrek Academy has shown that it has given up on the protagonist. Doesn't the author think it's outrageous to write like this?

After reading Chapter 20, I was caught off guard and took a big sip of poison. The martial spirit was too strong and the soul-devouring power was stuck at level 30, unable to be upgraded. The Douluo version of "Ancient Holy Body" is boring

When I looked at it, I felt it was very strange. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? Should he prevent the Sun and Moon Empire from unifying the continent and then unify the continent himself, or should he wait until the Sun and Moon Empire has finished unifying the continent and then rebel and overthrow the nobles to create a new world? Why do I feel that I am so desperate now that I want to help the original Three Empires fight against the Sun and the Moon, and then steal the Three Empires' butt to rebel and then fight against the Sun and the Moon? I've read a few words, and the biggest discomfort I feel right now is that the protagonist doesn't have a very clear direction of action (personal opinion, not necessarily comprehensive)

Can we write about Bu Le, Yu Xiaogang, Dai Mubai, and Ma Hongjun doing the ultimate insult to Tang San later?

There is no need to make up for the setting. Douluo Continent is really a worse world. The reality is unequal. If you still expect the false equality in the book, you will not survive.

The protagonist is really a loser He is born with a soul power of level seven or above, but he only reaches level 16 when he is twelve years old! Awesome!

Opinions on the author's novels I have read a lot of fan novels about Peerless Tang Sect, Peerless Light, Three-Eyed Demon Pupil, Alien Dragon, Glory of the Sun and Moon, and many more. But in the mainstream, they can be regarded as helping Huo Yuhao, because among the protagonists in Douluo IV, to be honest, Huo Yuhao is the only one who is okay in terms of character. It's because he listens to people's actions and has very few opinions of his own. He originally had a teacher in his mind, but he disappeared. Those soul beasts are like otakus and otakus, and they don't understand so many things. As a result, Huo Yuhao lacks a lot of teachings, but at least I can see that the author's writing skills are pretty good. Maybe this is the first book I've seen written by Huo Yuhao and Orange! , After all, in the original novel, the only ones who really liked Huo Yuhao were Wang Qiuer and Orange, but neither of them had a good outcome. One of them was directly sacrificed, and their souls were not recovered. Orange was also determined to break up with Huo Yuhao, but felt that he could not forget it, so he stole its seeds and gave birth to a child. Huo Yuhao didn't know about it, how should I say? Suddenly knowing that he had a child, it felt quite confusing. It was almost towards the finale that Huo Yuhao knew that he had a son. After Sangou left, Orange directly made the relationship clear. Although he has your blood, he is completely my son, because he didn't know that you existed at all. Father, Xu Yunhan was living a pretty good life, at least when he was younger than his father, so it didn't really matter whether he recognized him as his father or not. But compared to Xiao Yan next door, he had a relationship with Medusa and gave birth to a daughter, but he still raised a daughter well. To be honest, marrying one more woman would kill you! , Oh yes, there are three 🐶

The adaptation of Qiankun Wenqinggu is really the most exciting part of the book so far! ! ! Directly surpassing the original work, hammering it on the ground ………… Although it is indeed very popular 🔨🔨🔨🔨

I feel that I can make the protagonist's martial soul skills more powerful, and it doesn't have to be attack skills. If it doesn't work, just make the first five rings passive skills. Otherwise, your soul rings don't feel worthy of Taiyang's strength.

After reading part of it, I only have one feeling. As the name suggests, the novel is too dry. 😅

Your character writing is too out of the ordinary, just like a second-rate person

You have to write about pig's feet. Why do you keep writing about Huo Yuhao?

Who is the protagonist? You wouldn't be able to write it if you didn't follow the original plot, right?

It's so beautiful. Why are there only 5 discussion posts?

Is this a nanny article? I didn't notice it at first, why is there a label?

As a refreshing article, I enjoyed reading it. Although it had flaws, I still felt "satisfied". And there are new things adapted by the author himself, rather than directly patching together and adjusting the original work. It's almost the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day, so write as hard as you can for me. It's best to write until the finale 😁

I'm afraid you won't write anymore, so vote three times to encourage me.

Soul Contract does not find level 10 subjects for experiments. It is not rigorous enough and has no universal applicability.

When asked, we agreed that there would be one soul beast per person, but in the end the restrictions were broken. This is a special situation for everyone 😓🤔

It's so bad at the back, it's just a waste of money.

What is the use of this monthly ticket?

I originally thought it would be finished on New Year's Day