Mystery: Order and Disorder

There is a very interesting thing about mysterious fanfics: 99% of them can't write about Sequence 2, let alone King of Angels, Sequence 0, Pillars, etc. Then, in Sequence 9, I am very confused about which Tarot has the same sequence, and which sequence has God at the top. In the end, the eunuch at sea chapter couldn't even hold back a demigod.

It seems that it has become a consensus among Mystery fans that the lawyer cannot become the Black and Yellow Emperor, and the reason lies in Russell. Becoming the Black Emperor means Russell's complete death. In addition, becoming a black emperor must be hindered by his daughter. But as a rule-maker and an expert in finding loopholes, as well as the source of essence, can Huang Tao's life be preserved? There is another way to move up the ranks, regardless of Huang Tao's death and the obstacles of his daughter. Many people may criticize this. But we can't let Huang Tao occupy the manhole all the time.

The original female protagonist is boring, it would be better to have no female protagonist. I feel that the original female protagonist has violated a common taboo and will make people subconsciously feel that it is not worth watching.

Let me complain: Today I suddenly wanted to open a mysterious fanfic, "Lawyer: The Goal in Life is to Marry Audrey". Of course, the sequence path can be changed to other ones.

I just realized that the protagonist is so mean, using the original owner's body and spending the original owner's money, and then saying that the original owner's revenge for killing his father has nothing to do with him.

If you can't write about aristocrats, don't write about them. What a nobleman writes is like a gangster.

There is a question. As the master of the Fog of Uncertainty, why is the protagonist obsessed with joining the Tarot Club? The previous master of Source Castle had just sealed the consciousness of the Son of Chaos, but as a result, you prepared your mental body to enter Source Castle carelessly, and you were a bit desperate. Aren't you afraid of triggering an independent counterattack from Origin Castle? Even if you can hide it from Origin Castle, aren't you afraid of Tianzun's back-up plan? When Tianzun sealed the Djinn, there must be insurance to prevent the Son of Chaos from escaping his consciousness, right? Besides, if you want to participate in the plot of the original work, you don't need to drive it yourself. The main characters of the original work, such as Xio, Audrey, and Fors, are all accessible and can exert their own influence. If you find this troublesome, it would be better to just let one of your subordinates go in instead of going by yourself. Having so many subordinates will always come in handy, right? If the protagonist wants to become the emperor, he must have his own loyal team. This is also in line with the characteristics of the second path of order. I think it is more reasonable than the protagonist joining the Tarot Society himself.

I still can't stand it. When did a Viscount become so humble? He has a mysterious world view. A baron can point at a police chief and scold him. You are still a Viscount. Although you have no real power, you still have a position in the House of Lords! And if someone dies, do I need to notify the police? It's okay to just throw it into the sewer. Don't think too highly of the nobles.

Thoughts after viewing Let's talk about the shortcomings first 1. The protagonist's character is unclear and does not have a sense of nobility (this can be explained by the modern thinking of time travellers) 2. The development of the story is unreasonable. He secretly gave Audrey the potion without understanding Earl Hall's position, and the potion itself for the protagonist is also green. If he got it from Earl Er, it would be a bit ungrateful, and he has not considered the possibility of Xiao Ke dying suddenly in the future. Audrey has a minimum of Sequence 9, plus two Sequence 7s for the Hanged Man and the protagonist who are desperate to get together. It was difficult to pull an ordinary person and Sequence 7 in the original book, but now he really can't die suddenly. And an angel suddenly appeared later. I said it directly. It is possible to have demigods, but there are absolutely no angels in Runen except those in the original work. Otherwise, Qiao San's promotion will definitely bring this help. There may be many demigods, but there are definitely not many angels. 3. The protagonist's thinking is irrational. Before there was no memory of the Uncertain Mist, it would be no problem to learn Tarot. But after you have the memory, you still have the Night Emperor in your body. What use will Tarot be? Anyone who has read the original work knows from the early intelligence that the potion formula contains the Night King, and your most important goal is to gain favor with Xiao Ke. Then if you go to Tingen to save the captain, you will definitely be favored, and it also fits your title. The maximum level of the True God is Sequence 4, otherwise the ashes cannot be suppressed. In addition, Ince is at Sequence 5. If you have a Sequence in your body, don't mention it. If you directly report the location of Ince, a wanted criminal, to the church or MI9, everything will be fine. And the current person is the Uncertain Mist. If you go up to Source Castle, will it really not cause any overreaction? 4. The promotion process is unreasonable. In the original work, Xiao Ke had to perform divination verification after the potion was mixed. Originally, he directly intuitively told him that this was the potion. If his intuition was so easy to use, there would be no out-of-control people who mismatched the potion. 5. The sealed objects are unreasonable. The protagonist has too many sealed objects that have strong abilities but weak side effects. The sealed objects themselves are items that have too strong side effects and can only be used reluctantly. Occasionally, one or two items are okay. The protagonist has complete sets. If it is so easy to use, it is not called a sealed object but a magical item. 6. The character of the protagonist is not clear. I can't sum up the character of the protagonist in one sentence now. For example, Xiao Ke is "kind, gentle, responsible and poor (laughing)", but I can't summarize the protagonist of this book Let's talk about the advantages 1. The time-travel design is reasonable and introduces the outside gods, making the origin of the protagonist's time-traveler clear and unambiguous. 2. The fighting scenes are very exciting, and the depiction of extraordinary abilities is also very good. 3. The royal family has some restrictions on the nobles' hiring of extraordinary people, and the royal family's attitude of turning a blind eye is clearly depicted.

I still don't understand how the protagonist, who has two level 0 sealed items and two level 1 sealed items, is chased and beaten by a group of people in the middle order? Is the protagonist too useless to fight, or is the author too bad to write?

I feel that the author was influenced too much by Xiao Ke in the original work. First of all, the protagonist of this book is a noble or a viscount (although not as good as Audrey). He has the ability and means to obtain various low-sequence resources. However, the protagonist written by the author still needs to go to various gatherings to find it.

If you want to be the Black Emperor, why not write Augustus as the protagonist. The protagonist's three methods of the Black Emperor's ritual, theft and grafting are still somewhat feasible. I thought carefully for a long time, and then I thought about setting up a small country in the colony. Is it serious? The title "Emperor" is so simple. A powerful country as big as Loen cannot just slap its head and proclaim itself emperor, but chooses to take the Balan Crown. Being an emperor must also adhere to the Basic Law. It is impossible for the protagonist to succeed in building a country by himself and calling himself the emperor. Everyone will treat the protagonist as a joke. This method is impossible - to associate one's name with the title of emperor and become common sense among the people.

If you have a question, just ask if you don't understand. Why does the protagonist always use his fists to equalize A every time he fights even though he has a secret chain that can record his skills? I can't figure it out. I have a bunch of good cards in my hand, but I'm still playing badly. I really can't figure it out.

I don't know how the author wants to write the emotional drama with Carol after becoming a god in the later period. Love comes out of nowhere. In the last few chapters, the moral level of the protagonist is far from that of Kemeow. He is just one of the selfish majority of people. How much humanity can he have in the end? The portrayal of the heroine is too poor, and the image of her is that of a tool. She writes emotional dramas purely for the sake of writing emotional dramas. But the author must write, either he can write well, or he must be prepared to be read and written for "kind comments".

Something's wrong. I've seen a mysterious time travel game where you'll definitely die if you don't have a cheat, but the protagonist doesn't die. Didn't I watch it carefully?

From between the lines of your words, I only feel the wretchedness of the protagonist. Can you stop being so disgusting and licking the dog, as if you have never seen a woman before?

Are you planning to take the official route? But Black Emperor, you are doomed to have no chance. Not to mention that the first and second royal families will not give you a chance. Your biggest chance is when George III dies. I remember correctly that you have to repair the tomb and change the laws and other ceremonies. I wonder if the relatives of the emperor will support you later. It is also possible that the Seven Gods will become allies. Just one, either you have to establish your own kingdom or you have to rebel. If you become a judge later, you have to face the royal August family directly. From the fifth to the first, they are all members of the royal family. If you go directly to the south, you have a high chance of success. The question is whether your allies of the seven gods and the third and above are strong enough.

It feels very awkward to write a fanfic with an original heroine. To be honest, it is not a big problem to write a mysterious fanfic with a female protagonist. Audrey, Folse, Hugh, Huang Beibei, Huang Jiajia, Sharon, these and that cannot be discussed, even if I talk to the goddess of the night, there is no problem. But here comes an original. What I read is a fanfic, not the original. To read the original, I might as well just read the original text.

It's very annoying to match others at will. There is no need to get into this muddy water. Do you think it is possible to fall in love with the temperance acting method? (No malice, just personal opinion, please be patient first.)

Didn't Earl Hall support the new party? How could it be the Conservative Party? Did I get it wrong?

Post to collect the names, functions, and causes of magical items and sealed objects.

Inheriting everything from Gray Lint, your enemy has nothing to do with you. Just a random mouse, stealing your extraordinary characteristics, committing suicide after giving birth to a little mouse. Do you feel guilty?

Although the introduction of the book is sad about the tragedy of the original work, there are also some toxic feelings about the original work that are unacceptable. One wants to kill Huang Tao and become the Black Emperor, and the other wants to kill Bernadette.

Wow, raising a baby rat is disgusting and useless. Apart from defrauding the young animal into upgrading its food for ten or eight years, can it be reasonably upgraded?

The lawyer path doesn't feel good at all. It takes a lot of time to get promoted, especially at high levels. You still have to be the king and the head of a country, and you still have to divide manpower and material resources to build nine large tombs.

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Now I am very curious about how to write the second part of Squid. There are so many fan novels. He wants to write new ideas and write exciting ones Hurry up and get more fans to force him to death.

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I 👀 have read 3 books, they are of the same substance or sequence, and the writing is exactly the same.

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