I Have a World of Cultivating Immortals

This is one of the top five best online novels I have read in the past 20 years. There are so many chapters from the first chapter to more than 800 chapters. The storyline, character descriptions, and dialogues are all wonderful, reasonable, and engaging, without a single word count.

I have just read over 300 chapters, and I am getting a little tired of reading it. You can clearly feel that this book has changed from a slow-burning book to a fast-paced one. After reading the book reviews, they all say that it gets worse as it goes on. I can accept splitting something that can be told in one chapter into two chapters. After all, it makes money, but is it a bit too much to split it into three or four chapters? Reading books costs money, and our money doesn't come from strong winds.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that the subject matter is quite good, but there is no excitement or ups and downs. It is similar to a running account but not quite. Moreover, I cannot feel the personality of the protagonist. It is said to be a robot but does not look like a robot. I cannot feel the emotional fluctuations of the protagonist. It is difficult to be involved.

You can find books for free, but it's not worth spending money on.

The author pays attention to the details of the price! Currently, the third-level mid-grade Six Yang Divine Fire Mirror has less than 30 million good deeds, but the Three Treasures of Foundation Establishment has 5 credits and the price is 800,000-1 million. So 100 credits is close to 20 million good deeds. Who would buy a ball and gamble? Moreover, a spiritual stone has ten thousand good deeds, and a worker can earn that much in a year. Wouldn't it be nice to directly use human power to power the machine? Currently, money and finance have basically collapsed. Although I don't care much about this when reading novels about cultivating immortals, there are too many bugs. I hope the author will pay attention to them.

Written like this, is the author sure that he can hold it? 🙄 The story also needs to be progressive in cycles. It has already described 10 major stages at the fifth level of transformation. The story is getting bigger and bigger. Infinity means that the author's writing rhythm is getting more and more chaotic.

I don't know what other people think. I think back then, when I was young and frivolous, I didn't know the depth of the author. I tried the water two years ago and was often persuaded to quit. No way, those 40 good deeds impressed me so deeply. Until recently, people always have moments when they are short of books. I can only say that there is a reason for nearly 10,000 monthly votes. I once refuted the darkness of the starting point, always feeling that only what I saw was the light, and that I was ignorant. How to say it? I think everything I have read up to the latest chapter is quite powerful. As some readers said, this book is only interesting if you read it continuously. If we continue to read it, we will feel very painful. We are addicted to the fantasy of the novel, but we cannot bear the intermittent phantom pain! First of all, the author portrays a very innocent young man (first of all, I didn't say he was single-minded). The protagonist is responsible for his own feelings. Of course, what made me a little speechless was the handling of Yan Bingxuan. If there was no cold treatment of her by the protagonist in that episode, I think it would be much better. Because apart from this paragraph, I think the protagonist has a sense of responsibility for every confidante. Of course, the protagonist's cultivation is the most important. From a certain perspective, the protagonist is also a person with a strong heart, and he is not limited to the personal relationship between his children. Then it depicts the protagonist's fighting talent. I think the author may have described it from the side a lot, but generally speaking, he didn't often directly say that the protagonist's fighting talent is amazing. This will lead some readers to say that the protagonist is admitted to the Fourth Avenue Academy, so what... That he does not deserve to be admitted to the Fourth Avenue Academy. In fact, in front of everyone, the protagonist can rely on his low-level strength and fighting talent to overpower the opponent. In fact, we can already see something. We cannot say that this thing does not exist just because we have not seen it. Although we have not experienced the civilization of cultivating immortals, in our real society, are there no geniuses with such a photographic memory? Is it not possible that some ancient painters could remember something at a glance and paint it in two or three years? The protagonist actually showed some fighting talent in his first battle. Not many people can dig holes and kill the insidious old man in a sudden situation. If it were you, could you do it? In a sense, the protagonist deserves to be awesome. Behind the details that we have not seen in the novel, it may be that the protagonist is busy day and night. We see that the protagonist has always been very humble, saying that his qualifications are very poor. We readers all think that the protagonist is indeed humble, and he is actually very awesome. In fact, is there no hard work of the protagonist behind it? No one will continue to practice diligently and diligently when they have a world of cultivating immortals as their background. When practice becomes a habit, it will become a boring pain. We only see the joy of the protagonist's two realms. It seems that he can give up in any realm. If he doesn't do well in one realm, he can just abandon that interface and live in another world forever. But the protagonist didn't do this. He forced himself to become a master of time management. He wished he could break his time in half and spend it. Do you want to do this? Of course, there is also a lot of thinking in it, the imagination of various supporting characters and protagonists, there are also many coincidences, and many elements of luck. Without the help of Qingnu, the Qingling Enlightenment Pill, the Replenishing Spiritual Water... The protagonist would not be where she is today (I can only say that she has a good housekeeper, a timely help! The first female protagonist!!). Without Yan Bingxuan, Nascent Soul would not be so easy. ... And all of this is the result of the protagonist's character. If the protagonist has a cold temperament, the protagonist's future will not be as bright as it is now. These four confidantes have given the protagonist a lot of help, and the protagonist has also given back a lot. As the protagonist said back then: "In this world "Only you can accompany me to the end, so I believe you can do it too." Although this sentence seems a bit scummy, as if I feel that it has a similar meaning. He seems to have said it to the four confidants, but I have to say that the protagonist is quite innocent and straight. The author is also very good at handling things in the two worlds. The East Barren side is about farming, and the Fairy Gate side is about the mainstream style of genius characters and invincible flow with many women. In fact, it is really about screening readers, and then the author chooses all of them. Some readers like to watch the plot of Donghuang, because they may prefer farming stories, watching the protagonist develop the sect, the city defense system, the immortal sect system, the currency system, and the small sky network system on a macro level; on the micro level, he cultivates step by step and upgrades step by step, including the foundation-building elder, the golden elixir boss, and the Yuanying ancestor. There are also some readers who like to watch the plots of the Immortal Sect, such as the Taoist Academy plot, the plot of graduation and hard training, and the plot of the knotting of the baby and the slap in the face. In fact, I think that the plots of the Immortal Sect, starting from the golden elixir, have begun to become secondary. The protagonist is quite stubborn, I like it very much, that's it!

I opened one for comment. A family of three can make money. The two parents earn 4,200 per month. The main character can cut paper for 1 yuan an hour. Even if the main character does it once a day, 30 a month is fast. However, the mother of a protagonist whose first-level high-grade spiritual pulse costs 40 yuan a month actually bought it for half a year after her child went to school. A few years ago, I used a mid-range one, which cost 20 yuan a month. Everyone also knows that after cultivating in the advanced spiritual veins, it takes almost a month for the protagonist to be able to support himself with determination. This is a big poisonous point. It's like the college entrance examination is about to take place in high school, but there is a tutoring class that allows you to pass one exam as long as you go. If you don't go, you can only take three or two exams, and it only costs 40 yuan a month. Well, the author may think that 40 is too expensive to let his children go. Only this explanation can make sense. In other words, the author thinks that my child is a genius, but he just hasn't figured it out yet and has to wait a few days before the college entrance examination before he can explode.

I feel that the problem with this book is that the protagonist is a bastard who is just getting by. No matter when, the protagonist's thoughts are that I must not be able to do it, I must not be able to do it. Life is already difficult enough. Reading this novel is too depressing.

It can be regarded as a wave of support. I will treat it as the end and let it go. I will not read the follow-up to avoid further disappointment.

Each task in this book is very well described and detailed. Even the small characters can be described very well and written in detail. However, the biggest problem is that the emotional scenes are very poorly written. I read from the author that some people like harem stories and others don't, and maybe to satisfy both parties. , In the later period, a female protagonist wrote about a relationship, but by handling it this way, you failed to write a good harem story, and you also failed to satisfy the heroine story. You were a little greedy and wanted too much. The biggest failure overall was the emotional scene. The writing was neither good nor bad. It was true that you picked up sesame seeds and lost the watermelon. It's rare to see someone write like this, either there is no heroine, or there is only one heroine, or a harem story, and you write it and then break up, etc., Hey, the emotional drama is too long, I have read hundreds of chapters, there is not much emotional drama, there is a little ambiguity, the main character is written as if he does not understand emotions, the main character is written stupidly, hey, the writing in this area is neither good nor bad, you can write a single or no harem or a harem, don't write these things that are only a harem but not a harem, it is really uncomfortable.

(Personal opinion, critical reading) The rhythm of narrating events (divided into fast rhythm and slow rhythm) does not determine the twists and turns of the plot of the event. What the rhythm apparently determines is the length of time it takes to describe the event. What determines the twists and turns of an event's plot is not the rhythm, but whether the nature of the event itself is a straightforward narrative or a magnificent event. Based on this tone, set the pace of describing this event. If it is a slow pace, maybe a certain event will be written for a month and a half. Of course, if you update quickly enough, then pretend that I didn't mention it. If it is fast-paced, then an event will be written quickly, and certain aspects will be written quickly. Rhythm is essentially determined by the number of words spent describing a certain event. If you write at a slow pace and the tone of the entire novel is slow, then the novel may be able to write more than 10 million words, or even more. If most of your novels are slow-paced, it may be more than 6 million words. If your novel adopts a fast-paced approach as a whole and uses a slow-paced part to soothe the reader's mood, then it may be 2 million words or more. When narrating a certain event, the overall time it takes to narrate the event is inversely proportional to the rhythm (the slower the rhythm, the longer it takes), and inversely proportional to the amount of updates (the smaller the amount of updates, the longer it takes). Research References:

This book is really rubbish, illogical and confusing. The subject matter is quite good, but the writing is terrible.

👀Look, I didn't even take time off for scolding 😆

1. Resource channels have not been written yet. I know that the more perfect the world is, the more ways to make money will be written in the criminal law. However, in order to suppress too many bugs, the rhythm of resource exchange has not yet been opened, even if the author's outline is there. 2. The difference in difficulty of promotion between the two worlds is the same. The theoretical achievements in this world must be higher and more, that is, the real-world exercises are far-reaching across the world, and there must be legendary supreme theoretical exercises that everyone knows. The author has taken into consideration but not deeply. There are so many talents in this world who are cultivating immortals, but they have no recognition of the essence of cultivating immortals, and they have always been vague about cultivating immortals? Moreover, it's not that the few who transform into gods are low in talent or extremely talented, but that they have few resources. If the resources were enough, 18 million infants could become gods every minute, or even everyone could transform into gods! After all, they should have no doubts about the theory of transforming into gods. Even above the transforming gods, there may be a lot of complete theories waiting for the conditions to advance, and they have thousands of times the war potential of crossing the world!

The subject matter and writing style are good, and the story is also very interesting. But there is a huge flaw! ! ! The update is too slow! Too slow! ! Too slow! ! ! Don't expect to update 10,000 words a day. Like Gunmei, you can have a stable update of 6,000 words a day

The setting of this book is very good. The author carefully conceives of two worlds. The descriptions of each stage of cultivation are also very good. It is not easy to embody cultivation. Whether it is a scientifically advanced modern foundation or a resource-rich world foundation, it is difficult to reach the sky. Very nice to look at. There are so many settings in it that are good. It's not the same as other monster-fighting upgrades. Of course, the mirror novel has a great setting. The setting of the family's flow of refining qi is even more shocking. They all enrich the world of Mortal Flow.

It has been about 20 days since I prepared for a battle between colleges. It's too tiring to keep up with one update a day. If you really want to see it, I suggest you wait for half a year.

(It's so long that I don't know when it will be released, or if it can be released.) Modification: The author said that due to the lack of control over the details due to rushing, he directly canceled the interference link. It is no longer the interference that succeeds with just a few pills, but directly. Take "Failed to Conceive a Baby"; As for the reasonableness, it depends on personal opinion. Personally, I think it is better to interfere, but the method needs to be changed, such as giving a fourth-level formation-breaking magic weapon by a Jinfeng Ancestor or a fourth-level pulse-breaking bead that has shown divine power on the top of the mountain. New Chapter: It is quite a fake baby ending. The method is a bit foreshadowing, coming from the background of Chapter 387, but the source of the two fake baby props is very "magical", they just happened to come from the storage bag of the attacking ghost cultivator... Well, it is a bit abrupt, but at least it is a less discouraging ending. Looking at the author's message, I think there may be difficulties. I have been updating continuously for several days. In the rush, I may have forgotten how much success I have paved for hydrology; Yesterday's update was also rushed out in a hurry. The details are not in place and it is normal for it to be abrupt. Personally, I will continue to follow it. I have been updating it in the past few days, and I have responded and revised it after the accident. I think it is a bit sincere; I have been chased by stars all the way. Come on, I hope there will be more good articles to read in the future; but this split plot is still a bit boring, and the behavior of a certain "true love fan" in the past is really discouraging to quit, at least for a while.

As a bookworm for more than 10 years, I found that many novels start well, but in the middle and late stages, the plot begins to deteriorate, the combat power collapses, etc. Although this novel does not have the excitement of the early stage, it is still quite good for steady farming.

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I can't stand it any longer, so I'm directly spoiling the ending. The seemingly grand and perhaps reversal ending is actually the core of a family ethics drama. After watching it from beginning to end, I can only say that the characters are fragmented. Is this really the 28th chapter about Lord of the Stars? . .

Please correct me if you have deduced it by yourself: Sheng De overcomes the last luck: in the age of the end of Dharma, saints will rise; The last luck overcomes the fate: under the final calamity, all living beings are reckoned with; Fude overcomes the luck of killing: people with merit are not stained with the murderous intention; The way to mend the sky is intermittent; Intercepting luck overcomes Yin De: the way of heaven collapses, cause and effect are not open; Yin De overcomes disaster luck: a ray of Yin virtue survives the disaster; Jie Luck Conquers morality: The Tao is one foot high, and the calamity is one level deep; Morality constrains luck: People can promote the Tao, but not Dao can promote people; Qi luck defeats the saintly virtues: Individual karma cannot be reversed, and the common karma cannot be reversed, and magical powers cannot match the number of days. ; Second edition: Sheng Deke overcomes the bad luck: in the age of the end of the Dharma, there are saints; The late bad luck counteracts the Fude: under the end of the calamity, all living beings are reckoned with; Fude overcomes the murderous luck: people with merit are not stained with murderous intentions; The way of heaven is intermittent; The interception of luck overcomes merit: the way of heaven collapses, and good and evil are not spread; The merit overcomes calamity: merit accumulates, and survival in calamity; The calamity overcomes luck Morality: The Tao is one foot high, and the calamity is one level deep; Morality overcomes luck: people can promote the Tao, but not Tao and others; Qi luck defeats saintliness: individual karma cannot be reversed, and the common karma cannot be reversed, and magical powers cannot match the number of days;

Current spiritual root situation: [Gold 27, Wood 53, Water 44, Fire 100, Earth 100] Spiritual root change record: ① The last complete record of Xiao Chen's Five Elements Spiritual Root in the original text is found in Chapter 838, specifically [Gold 24, Wood 50, Water 39, Fire 100, Earth 88], which was achieved after eating 1 loquat fruit (+1 gold + 1 wood). After the same chapter, Xiao Chen ate 3 more loquat fruits to reach the upper limit of 4 loquat fruits. Therefore, the five element spiritual roots after this chapter are [27 gold, 53 wood, 39 water, 100 fire, 88 earth]; ② The fairy earth spiritual root is achieved in Chapter 958, and the "innate earth element essence" is obtained. Therefore, the five element spiritual roots after this chapter are [27 gold, 53 wood, 39 water, 100 fire, 100 earth]; ③The record of the last spiritual root change can be found in Chapter 988. After tasting the banquet prepared by the major families in Soochow, I added 5 points of water spirit roots (thanks to the book friend "Lost Time" for the tip). Therefore, the five elements spiritual roots after this chapter are [27 gold, 53 wood, 44 water, 100 fire, and 100 earth]. In order to complete the goal of the Five Immortal Spiritual Roots, according to the plan in Chapter 1060, Xiao Chen used Heavenly Pure Water to raise the Water Spiritual Root to 100. After Gold + Wood Spiritual Root = 100, he used the Immortal Technique·Bending the Sky Water Spiritual Root to replenish the Golden and Wood Spiritual Root. Finally, he used Heavenly Pure Water to fill the Water Spiritual Root to 100 to achieve the Five Elements Immortal Spiritual Root. Currently, Xiao Chen has one bottle of heavenly purified water on hand, and another bottle in Qingnu's hand. The last record of Qingnv's Water Spiritual Root can be found in Chapter 761. After the record of 88 points, Qingnv took 1 Xiandao Fruit, so Qingnv's Water Spiritual Root reached 89. The same chapter also records that Xiao Chen arranged to increase the amount of water spirit roots for Qingnu to eat, but did not say how many points of water spirit roots were added. Because Xiao Chen gained 5 points after just one banquet, so here we will treat it as an increase of 5 points. That is, Qingnu's water spirit root before refining the heavenly water purification was 94. Therefore, Qingnv can have 80-6=74 points of heavenly pure water left. But I think the concept of the Five Elements Immortal Spirit Root can be further optimized. Because every time the immortal spirit root enters enlightenment, if Jin and Mu attain enlightenment at the same time, due to limitations of spiritual power and spiritual consciousness, they can only attain enlightenment once (unless there is any special effect of simultaneous enlightenment). So I put forward a recommended plan: when gold + wood = 98, water = 100, use the immortal technique·Butian to replenish the metal and wood spiritual roots to 99, and then take the heavenly materials and earthly treasures or practice secret techniques (such as the "Philosophy of Gold" mentioned in Chapter 5) to replenish the metal and wood spiritual roots in batches. In this way, both metal and wood can achieve enlightenment once. Manjin can comprehend the Jietianxianxianxingshengjianyi or the Heavenly Book of "Taiyuan" (I guess), and Manmu can use the Water Spirit Talisman to comprehend the "Changchun Gong" or the Heavenly Book of "Life and Death". (Updated on 2024.9.2) Chapter 1094, the protagonist practiced 3 levels of alchemy (+3 gold) and drank the blood of a small dragon (+12 water). (Updated on August 30, 2024) In Chapter 1101, the protagonist has obtained a fifth-level large chun fruit that can increase the wood spirit root by 60 points. The plan can be optimized like this: The protagonist's current spiritual root situation: [gold 30, wood 53, water 92, fire 100, earth 100] totaling 375, 375+125=500. The resources held by the protagonist: Qingnv's remaining heavenly pure water (38 water spiritual roots), Xiao Hei's remaining half bottle of heavenly pure water (40 water spiritual roots), and the fifth-level large chun fruit (60 water spiritual roots), a total of 138. (Updated on September 2, 2024) Steps to implement the new plan: ① Refining the heavenly pure water to fill up the water spirit root, and the fairy water spirit root will realize enlightenment once. [Gold 30, Wood 53, Water 100, Fire 100, Earth 100] The total is 383, the remaining 38+40-(100-92)=70 heavenly pure water, 60 large chun fruits. ② Use Immortal Technique·Butian to fill up the golden spiritual roots and leave 40 wood spiritual roots. The immortal golden spiritual roots will realize the Tao once. [Gold 100, Wood 40, Water 43, Fire 100, Earth 100] Total 383, remaining 38+40-(100-92)=70 heavenly pure water, 60 large chun fruit. ③ Refining the Great Chun Fruit to replenish the Wood Spirit Root, and the Immortal Wood Spirit Root will be enlightened once. [Gold 100, Wood 100, Water 43, Fire 100, Earth 100] Total 443, remaining 38+40-(100-92)=70 heavenly pure water. ④ Refining the remaining 70 points of heavenly pure water, the Five Elements Immortal Spirit Root will realize the Tao once. [Gold 100, Wood 100, Water 100, Fire 100, Earth 100] Total 500, remaining 70-(100-43)=13 heavenly pure water. Remarks: The final step of completing the fairy root is placed in the water spirit root because the water spirit root has two opportunities to fill the fairy root, one for single water spirit root enlightenment and one for the five elements fairy root enlightenment. In this way, each spiritual root can enter enlightenment once, and then can enter the Five Elements Enlightenment, making full use of the 6 enlightenment opportunities of the fairy spiritual roots.

In the early Yuan Dynasty, the Five Elements were opened, and the Immortal Gate Dance Instrument spread its fame. Lying high in the ninth heaven of the earth, thirty thousand purple energy gathers. Virtuously crossing the two realms to hold the immortal treasure, wandering around the world to hold the divine sect. The golden bell rings thousands of times, and the jade sword stretches thousands of miles. The three flowers on the top face the Huangting, and the five qi in the chest circle the middle of the belly. The blade of the sword below his waist is filled with purple lightning, and the fairy robe on his body is burning with blue flames. I was once a guest of three thousand people in Zixiao, and was passed down by Taoist Master Tian Zun. The Three Qing Dynasties and the Four Emperors are all old friends, and the Five Emperors of the Five Directions are all friends. The True Spirit of Tongsheng condenses the sky, and the Five Elements are refined to prove the Hunyuan. The sun and the moon gather in Beiyuan Palace, far away from the eastern horizon of Tianhe. After turning into immortal fire to eliminate demons, he killed the old dragon with three swords. The Xuantian Turtle Immortal is inherently sexless, and was created as a pure Yang named Qing Emperor.