As a Mortal, I Am a Disciple of Spirit Beast Mountain

It took me 2 days to catch up to Chapter 283. I personally think the author's writing skills are very strong, but I feel that the protagonist is too smooth, a bit like an invincible halo, and the damage caused by the backlash is almost negligible. Although this is a novel, I can only criticize it. The disease has shortcomings, but the setting of the plot and the emotional direction of the characters are still relatively successful. Regarding the original work Han Paopao, I don't think it is necessary to describe it too much. There is also the behavior of wooling, which can easily write off the future of the book. It is feasible to take the path of a mortal, but you have to have your own Characteristics, it is best to have a plot with twists and turns to be exciting. From the current point of view, anyone who comes to this other world can achieve the status of a protagonist, but it lacks that kind of convincing point. To simplify it, I hope that in the follow-up, some twists and turns and bizarre plots can be opened, and the little character can be It's said that it reaches a climax, and then the cheats can be stopped. Personally, I think it's a bit outrageous. The more cheats come later, the more outrageous the cheats are. Originally, your definition is not a cool article. I don't know why the direction is getting more and more biased. Your characteristic is that it is slow to heat up, but the more I read, the more it feels like you have a cheat. It's easy to end up writing this way, and you can basically guess the rest of the plot. If you like it, don't follow the cool and invincible style. (I still like books that develop slowly)

I read it overnight and I feel good. I just feel that the main character Goldfinger is a bit too "human". And do you plan to open a zoo as a spiritual pet? How many contracts do you have to make? It is better to set a large level and only one is better. Also, this book is a fan book after all. The general environment in this book is great. The protagonist is also a bit naive, but you can continue to pursue it. Come on, update (ง •̀_•́)ง

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In fact, I have never been able to understand it. No matter what everyone is staring at the Palm Vase, is it difficult to make up a cheat? I can make up five in ten minutes. For example, low-level spiritual stones can be synthesized into a bag of high-level spiritual stones, and several Breitling Herbs can be synthesized into a box of high-level spiritual herbs. Some kind of powerful physique, such as affinity with monsters and beasts, enhanced physical fitness, or enhanced spiritual consciousness. If you open the gold finger bigger, you can also create a system or something, such as adding herbs will ensure the success of alchemy. How can I make up a fan's cheat sheet? As long as the character's IQ is online and the logic makes sense, you can take a look. As for the Heaven Palm Vase, just find a reasonable reason why you can't get it. Personally, I just don't like the golden finger that is too strong. If the golden finger is too strong, it will make the protagonist's efforts lose points. After all, I like hard-working protagonists. So don't mention the matter of holding the sky bottle to me anymore, I'm really speechless.

This is the most comfortable new book I have read in the past few months. The logic is reasonable, the protagonist has a likable personality, knows etiquette, speaks elegantly, has no messy modern dialect, and the supporting characters have high IQs. You really feel comfortable no matter how you look at it, work hard and hopefully become one of the representatives of Mortal Fandom

After reading Xianxia novels for so long, I'm really convinced that I don't have any spiritual roots. They are all five spiritual roots and three spiritual roots. I am really QQ😅

I will explain clearly to everyone the relationship between the Demonic Spirit Control Sect and Spirit Beast Mountain, so that everyone can understand better. If you compare Yulingzong and Spirit Beast Mountain to companies A and B. A is a large company across the country, and B is a subsidiary of A that is responsible for a certain province. One day, A went shopping with two other large companies, and its strength was greatly reduced. Its subsidiaries became independent one after another. Among them, B did the most ruthless thing. Not only did he kill all the lower-level management personnel from the head office and monopolize the province's business, he also prevented any company from entering the provincial market, including company A. More than ten years later, company A has recovered its strength and is ready to deal with company B. What should B do? This is the situation in Spirit Beast Mountain

So kind, this is not mortal at all! False mortals, friendly teachers and modesty, sect unity. Real mortals put interests first and are ruthless. There are no relatives or friends on the road to eternal life, and you can kill in the face of interests!

It is becoming more and more intellectually intensive, and many plots are about lowering the IQ of supporting characters to develop the plot. For example

There are too few updates, we still need to keep up

The plot of this girl arranged in recent chapters has the flavor of an urban romance drama, which is bearable, but not very comfortable to watch.

There is no female protagonist in the fic, so what kind of fic should I watch?

Didn't you agree? Don't touch the little green bottle. You still rub it. Say one thing and do another. I was disgusted to death when I saw that part.

The biggest problem with this book is that the author did not write it according to the setting of the novel... It is an anime fanfic, and it has added secondary settings. Some parts seem nondescript and awkward. Ignoring these, it's still watchable. The writing is up to standard, but the plot design is a bit mediocre.

After reading dozens of chapters, I read it back and forth several times and just couldn't stand it anymore. The author sets the protagonist to be the Five Spiritual Roots. The plug-in can double the cultivation speed, 50% mana recovery and spell damage, and has the top ability to comprehend spells. He is a genius in spells, talismans, and weapon refining. The settings are based on comics. Some of the settings are weird because I haven't watched them for a long time. For example, after breaking through the first level of Qi training, you will have divine consciousness and can fly with a sword for half an hour. The protagonist is a 10-year-old Talisman Master, and his cultivation speed is comparable to that of Tianlinggen. . Hey, why didn't Mao set up such a qualification in his early days? The author also said that he would not write about becoming a god. Then why set up five spiritual roots? Every time I see a lot of fan novels that set the protagonist's qualifications to be poor, because there are plug-ins, he can cultivate faster than the Tianling Root, which makes me speechless There are also family members who can go to the family when they reach the Qi refining stage. The family receives spirit beasts, and the spirit beasts basically break through to the foundation building stage stably, and a small number break through to the core formation stage. After hundreds of years, the family's strength is not scary to death, this is just a spirit beast mountain family This book is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. If you have not read the original work, you can still accept these settings, and it looks good.

Did you see the author throwing the bottle and giving it to the old devil to thank you? Are you treating us as a joke by forcibly lowering your IQ?

I don't understand, why did you arrange that woman?

This book is a bit like a spring outing article

I can't understand that the family is so powerful at drawing talismans and making alchemy, but the family has no explanation? Is this a member of the family? Ye Xiu is so powerful and someone is trying to win him over. Is your family going to be dispersed soon? As promised before, the clansmen will protect their weaknesses and unite, is that all? The family didn't train a genius who practiced elixirs and talismans at all. Later, when he was fifteen years old, he asked, "Do you want to be the family's elixir and talisman practitioner?" When it comes to leaving later, if the family says let it go, then let it go. How did this family inherit it, or is it the Jindan family?

It's hard for me to deny that this book is not popular. Currently, the most popular ones among mortal fans are scientific immortality and casual cultivation. They have certain ideas, such as the spiritual pressure of scientific cultivation, and the concept of casual cultivation, such as the choice of the heroine. But this book is better. The above two books revolve around Han Paopao. This book is a re-creation, basically using only mortal settings and writing wonderful stories.

It was okay at first, but later on the golden finger turned into a portable grandpa.