Prince of Tennis: Emperor of the Court

To be honest, I feel that the writing is so-so. There is not much to watch at the 4th or 50th chapter. I will give you some suggestions and the author will consider them himself 1. Compared to the setting of the characters, the plot outline and writing style are more important 2. Don't write about China, because no matter you win or lose, it is a failure. No one will read this genre br>3. Except for the protagonist taking the initiative to recruit people to change the plot, try not to modify the original historical plot (referring to those who transferred schools in advance) 4. The protagonist's image is not obvious Everyone's playing style in the world of Net King is different. In this kind of group portrait novel, the character's skills and personality complement each other and determine the character's image. In a certain form, skills are a reflection of personality "Offense" and "Defense" are already a complete and powerful set of theories, which are enough to support a character image. This can be applied to a supporting role, but not to the protagonist. Because it is too monotonous and has no sense of substitution, the protagonist cannot conquer the world with just these two moves, so there must be an extension of his skills, but the extension can be placed in the later stage, just like Fuji's understanding of new counterattacks in the national competition Those "gentlemen have no weapons" you wrote, The connection is too far-fetched. If we copy some from other classics and doctrines in the future (such as non-attack, inaction, etc.), It will be even more confusing, but it will reduce the style of both offensive and defensive moves Finally, Feng Lin, Huo Yin and Thunder were added to the protagonist's skill library. I have to say that this is a failure. In this kind of group portrait writing, it is best not to repeat the character skills if possible. Unless it is a system, spiritual inheritance (similar to the pillars of Qingxue) and imitation of magical skills, otherwise do not learn other people's tricks They are all from the Sanada family, and they also rely on the art of war. Wouldn't it be better if you use an eight formation for the protagonist? New settings are always more attractive to readers, and Distinguish the image of the protagonist and Sanada There are three types of eight gates, which can be written as the evolution of skills, and can be written twice, and there are many moves, so the number of words is more convenient 5. If you really want to write about the Chinese team, you can add the special culture to fantasy tennis, but do not mix the culture of other countries, such as the Seven Deadly Sins or something Oh, never, let's just talk about some of the more common and representative ones: Weapons: swords, guns and bows, for example, guns are for penetration, bows are for precision and long-range attack Sects: Six Arts of Confucianism, Taoist Carefree + Wuwei, Six Paths of Buddhism + Buddha Appearance, Seven Arts of Guigu Yin Fu + Vertical and Horizontal, Yin and Yang Five Elements + Astrology Arts: chess (data and control), medicine (Five Animals Play), poetry (textual intention), opera (deduction and imitation) Each of these is enough to fill in the skills of a character. See if you think about it, or just copy it from the game, animation, and novel. For details, you can check Baidu 6. Come on, author

Long Ya's natural ability is so abnormal, it can be deprived and devoured. As long as you play with Long Ya, you can directly turn the opponent's skills into your own, and the opponent will permanently lose this skill.

Isn't it right that you, Rikkai Dai, are not strong enough? During the Byodoin period, Rikkai Dai had no rivals in Kanto, but Seigaku Daiwa was a third-rate player during his time. He had never been in doubles in the Kanto finals, so he was so strong?

Tatekai had won 13 consecutive victories in Kanto before Yukimura, why don't you feel like it's not enough?

It feels like the author has changed a lot of things from the original settings. For example, Mori Juzaburo obviously studied at Shitenhoji Temple and transferred to Tatekai University in the second year of junior high school. Genichiro Sanada and the others were in the first year of junior high school at that time. By the time the protagonist appeared, Mori had already entered U17.

The writing is quite good. U17 hopes not to join the Chinese team because it is easy to collapse. Just follow the original work and it will be fine.

No, isn't Echizen Ryuya in the United States? Why did you end up in Japan? Long Ya probably didn't go to middle school in Japan, right?

It's impossible for ghosts to transfer schools. Ghosts play tennis because they want to make children happy, not to win.

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To be honest, anyone who has read the manga knows that even Byodoin doesn't dare to fight Ryuya easily. You are so powerful. The protagonist often fights Ryuya.