Rising in the Wind of Rebirth

There is no problem with female characters. After all, realistic novels must respect logic, and everyone has their own opinions on this point. But it is really hard to understand that he let go of the thugs who attack him and even plan to do evil things to the women around him. It only gives people the impression that the protagonist is timid and fearful, and is even willing to sacrifice his own friends to calm things down. Not only does it lack any literati's magnanimity, but it makes the protagonist seem wretched and greasy.

This is an underrated work. To say that it is underestimated is because in the cliché title of rebirth, it covers a lot of the author's work and thinking on traditional culture and the evolution of Sichuan and Sichuan literature and history. This is not a simple materialistic novel. I haven't finished reading it yet. I will elaborate after reading it.

After two lifetimes of not knowing what you want, do you suddenly have a great enlightenment? There was no foreshadowing for this turning point, it was just forced. And what is said is that you fall in love with the ideal person, so shouldn't you see the difference after getting in touch? Don't you feel awkward being together for so long? Jiang Shuyi didn't understand it when she was 17-18 years old, and neither does a reborn person. How can we force ourselves to be together if they don't love each other? Isn't this nonsense? Forget it, it's going to rain and my mother wants to get married, it's up to you.

A rare rebirth novel that truly pursues personal happiness. Most of the reborn people are crazy about pursuing money, status, and beautiful women, but after obtaining all these, are they really happy?

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Only after reading your book did I realize that you are 20 miles upstream of me. People from Songji passed by

Every female character who is described as having a good relationship with the male protagonist at the beginning becomes someone else's, and it's too toxic to describe it in so many ways.

Being reborn as a scholar is a subject that is so unpopular that it cannot be more unpopular. It is really unique and interesting. When reading new literature, there will always be people who comment, "You are all reborn, so why don't you just sit around in high school classes, engage in e-sports, be an actor, engage in literature, and be a doctor? If you don't seize the opportunity, why not be a pig in the spotlight?" I'm not saying that the dream of being a pig is not good. Who doesn't like money? But, it is because of the golden finger of rebirth that money is no longer a problem that binds the protagonist or us. Only then can we have the time and energy to realize our true dreams and values. Reading novels is also an opportunity to learn about subjects outside the circle! The author writes very well, the writing style is good, and the three views are also correct! It almost brought tears to my eyes. Some comments say that they can't understand the doctor's rebirth article. Can't you understand the introduction of medical knowledge? I have also read articles about major countries, heavy industry, and military affairs. In fact, I don't understand them, but that doesn't stop me from reading them with great interest. I think there is nothing wrong with the way of writing. Maybe the author can consider it when introducing his own academic research in the future. Like Luo Xiang, that would be good 😁 Come on!

Demining! The heroines who have a lot of roles are in supporting roles. After the protagonist is troubled by the gang, he has to give him medicine and alcohol to retaliate. Ju Lei, who can read the novel and feel so aggrieved?

After taking a look, I started writing more than 900 chapters in my second year of high school, and I just graduated from high school. Oh my god.

The protagonist in the author's works is a saint who has no desire for men or women. No one will be impatient listening to his long lectures on popular science. He influenced all the relatives and friends around him to become outstanding people, and no company had any problems due to management. The author's narrative writing style is very good and he has some ideas, but he doesn't know how to capture the readers' emotions. He writes for his own pleasure.

The author should exercise restraint and add some drama! ! ! A little bit of drama! ! ! ! 😰

The author's writing style is very good and powerful, but it is not suitable for writing online novels. There are many problems with the structure of the characters, especially the emotional aspects. The female supporting characters all have more distinct and likable personalities than the heroine. After reading about 200 chapters, every female supporting character is more suitable to be the heroine than the heroine. Every female supporting character that readers like, turns out to be someone else's. This is the biggest taboo in writing urban novels. The author's novel is too picky for readers, and the content is dull and boring. The author said it was a slow-burning novel, but not only did it not become popular in the end, it became more and more cold. A random little character and a small plot can only be one chapter. If the author does not want to pursue wealth and fame, he can continue writing according to his own preferences. If the author wants to pursue these two things then I advise the author to abandon this book. Stop and read a few other urban novels with a well-known starting point. Understand which online novels are taboo and which ones are absolutely untouchable. If you start a new book, I believe with the author's writing style will definitely become popular.

I originally read the novel just for fun, and I subscribed to about 500 chapters along the way to support the author, but after reading these chapters 540-543, it was really frustrating Writing novels must follow basic logic, right? What was it like in 1992? A foreign woman whom I just met and had limited understanding of, after a dinner where they mainly talked about food and allusions, a few words were directly integrated into the protagonist's multi-million dollar investment, and the next day they directly started to intervene in all aspects of life? When your teacher invites you to a meeting and you don't even know what to talk about, you can just bring your own daughter to the meeting, but why don't you bring irrelevant people too? Do you have any sense of boundaries? The whole novel is written about traditional culture, history, antiques, etc. Don't you know that if the king is not secretive, the minister will lose, if the minister is not secretive, he will lose his virginity, and how many things will be harmed if he is not secretive? The protagonist is originally a time traveler. You can write that he has a golden finger, that he has accumulated talents and is proficient in everything in two lifetimes, that he loves to make friends, and that he travels across mountains and ridges like a bag of things. But what did you write about the plot related to this foreign woman that you shoehorned in in these chapters 540-543?

I want to ask about that chapter 175 when some gangsters came over with knives to beat the protagonist and molested his girlfriend. Why did the protagonist let him go without saying anything, but then gave him money, called him brother, and didn't explain anything later? What kind of operation was this?

I feel like the heroine Jiang Shuyi is not likable, and the scenes related to the heroine are not very interesting 🤤, but the others are pretty good.

First of all, I have to admit that the author's literary quality is extremely high, which I could not match before. But this book is not as attractive as the valley so far. The plain writing style cannot be said to be bad, but it is too plain, too popular science, and neglects to tell the story. It is like a film made by some great directors, which is called a highbrow film. I just can't understand it. The author also has this tendency. So I have a suggestion for an author I rarely like, and I hope you can consider it. Also, I can't really like the heroine. I know the author is foreshadowing, but the author can make the heroine in his novel extremely unlikable. It's really true. . .

The front is good, but can you please stop being a teacher in the novel all the time. In less than a hundred chapters, the number of people you have educated is not twenty but fifteen... You were not engaged in education in your last life. There are still thousands of chapters, so that's okay. Can you stop a little bit? If you want to influence others, then you might as well become Dad Ma and replace him as the richest man in China and the richest man in the world. Then you can educate and influence at least hundreds of millions of people in China, no, in the world. Let's keep it a little bit... In addition, when I saw the first love in my previous life, I thought it was so unforgettable, but it turned out to be a pure love process of falling in love in high school, going to college in a different place, and breaking up after graduation... Judging from the writing, the main love is still with her. After the few strokes, I feel that the author can't write this thing well, and the awkwardness is obvious... Is there anything interesting to talk about after catching up?

After scrolling through the table of contents, what should I say about this book? First, the author's writing style is very good, which is among the best online articles. I like it. Second, he has solid professional knowledge and extensive knowledge. However, due to the special nature of this category, the audience is not large, so it is not popular enough. It just seems that the author is deliberately trying to imitate Xiao Jiuchong Kang and my father-in-law is Kangxi. The daily life is very trivial, but the side plot conflicts are not enough, the main plot progress is too slow, and non-experts cannot understand it. It is a bit bloated, and the tiger cannot be compared to the dog. Of course, I am not qualified to comment. I read the book very carefully at the beginning, and the further I got to the back, the more I read the chapters. But I only saw about 400 chapters, and I no longer had the desire to continue reading. It was still a sneak peek.

Please write less detailed content in this kind of literature. Doesn't anyone think it will affect the reading experience?

The writing seems to have the stale air of an old scholar. The sour smell is very strong.

I read more than 50 chapters in one go! Why turn it over instead of watching or reading it? It's because at least 40 chapters or more are popular science! It's popular science! It's popular science! Three important things to say! I really admire the author for his popular science in large sections and even whole chapters! More than 550 chapters have been written, and the protagonist is still a sophomore in high school!

I've read Chapter 400, and the protagonist is not yet in the second semester of high school! The plot development is a bit slow, and there are too many documents...

This book is suitable for reading slowly, and the unpopular subjects chosen by the protagonist are also very good. The study of traditional culture in the urban rebirth article - exegesis is the first time I saw it. Strongly recommended😜

The writing is okay, but there are too many emotional scenes and the heroine is too pretentious.

I'm wondering if it would be better if the author broke this book into several volumes of two to three million words. Just like Xu Gongzi Shengzhi, make a series. Each book has a different but similar theme, and different protagonists observe that era from different aspects. Otherwise, the book will seem cumbersome and readers will feel tired when reading. Nowadays, readers who like this kind of books are probably quite young.

The author updates from time to time, it's so Buddhist

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