Who Is Still a Killer These Days?

Generally speaking, it's okay. There aren't many poisonous points in the protagonist's character and the protagonist's sect. The key is that there are too many poisonous points in the plot. Especially when working as a bodyguard for some female characters, the plot of Su Yue is the most poisonous to me. After all kinds of saucy manipulations, the official staff would only protect her if they were mentally ill. The killer doesn't need to work too hard, he can just point a sniper rifle at the target. Finally, I advise the protagonist not to have much contact with these female characters, and it is best not to show even their faces. Anyway, in my opinion, these female characters are sometimes unreasonable and will identify who they are as long as they suspect someone.

Overall the writing was okay, nothing too bad. What I like particularly well is that when new proper nouns appear, a long paragraph of explanation will not be given to explain the number of words. But are there too many hidden lines thrown in at the beginning? Dongtian is the main line at this stage, there is one line on the church side, one line on Alice's side, one line on the dark web side, and there may be another line on the virtual shield accessory. I am a little worried about whether the author can keep these lines in place. One more thing, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. The proportion of female characters feels a bit high. The author also spent a lot of pen and ink to describe it, which gave me the feeling of a harem novel. Author, you have to think carefully about whether you want to go in this direction. In the end, the book was okay, but too few. When I recommend a book to someone, and if they ask, it is only 200,000 words, they are not willing to read it.

The first volume is over. Let me briefly talk about some issues. Some readers said that the protagonist is too passive? In the early stage, yes, this is also an effect I want. Because I believe that first of all, a qualified killer should prioritize tasks in everything, be cold-blooded and ruthless, and never create extraneous matters. They are just useful "tools". If they were disobedient tools, they would have been disposed of long ago because they have no use value. Secondly, there is actually a force secretly trying to control everything in this world, and there are some unexplainable "coincidences" between various events. Just like the title of the volume, the tree wants to be quiet, but the wind doesn't stop. The protagonist Lu Yuansheng wants to be quiet, but the world, or someone won't let it, so the early development will definitely appear passive. Lu Yuansheng's "retirement" will naturally not be smooth sailing. This retirement is not a literal retirement, but a process of breaking the shackles, from passive to active to... (I won't spoil it here). In short, this is definitely not an early story. If the early stage has not met your expectations, I hope we can meet again in subsequent chapters.

Totally unappealing. Some places just poisoned me to death. Some girl Su's father was locked up in the security bureau and killed, but nothing happened. It's like a person was locked up in a police station and killed by others. The country didn't dare to say a word about it. The structure is too small, and the story has always revolved around the protagonist. The author has completely reduced the power of the country. From the beginning to the end, it seems that apart from the protagonist and his group, the decent ones have no fighting power. Moreover, the protagonist has always been a dog for others, a dog for his own people, and a dog for the villain. There is nothing that would make me happy to say it now. In the book, you created Dongzhou as one of the three major countries. Except for the people around the protagonist, they have no fighting power. Riyuezhou is just a small piece of garbage, but with a shadow, he can attack in the military stronghold. Even if you write that there is a rocket camp, the shadow can actually sneak in. It's not like Gao Xiaobo has mastered nuclear weapons in others, and the great power of Dongzhou has a few small killers, and they can tyrannize any egg secret meeting, right?

After watching the first mission, I stopped watching it. I didn't like the protagonist being too passive. As long as you use your brain, you will know that retirement is definitely not possible. Otherwise, he would use the death of his senior brother as a trigger. It's not that the book is not good. It's just that I don't like this type

The protagonist only kills evil people, how can he still survive?