Cultivation Simulator: Starting at the Low-Martial Level

What a conscientious author! Saving all the best parts before publication is like offering the novel to everyone for free. I'm so touched. Consider the subscriptions for the first few chapters after publication as payment for the previous ones. Goodbye!

To be honest, the first part of "Innate" was very well written; it truly had a unique style and profoundly depicted the difficulty of cultivating immortality. However, once the cultivation realms were introduced in the later parts of "Innate," I lost interest in reading it. Why? It's top-heavy.

After reaching the late Golden Core stage, the protagonist forgets his master after changing locations. Only in the late Golden Core stage does he think about returning to his original sect, only to find that his master has died. He raises a bird that can be fed dozens of spirit stones every day and makes a lot of money as an alchemist, without ever thinking of visiting his master.

This book is a typical example of an author whose IQ equals that of the protagonist. No matter what level the protagonist is at, what he has done for many years, or how many years he has lived, he is always an ordinary person, or even a below-average one. Especially after his ascension, it is written like a story about a mountain village boy with superpowers going to the city.

Having read up to chapter seventy-six, aside from Xiao Zhao's death, there's nothing particularly noteworthy. Since advancing to the Innate Rejuvenation Realm, the protagonist has completely changed, as if separated from the mortal realm by the heavens...

Damn, how come it's this Qi Refining Foundation Pill? So all that hard work to break through to the Innate Realm is a joke? Since you've already written it like this, at least make it a classical cultivation story. If you're going to practice Qi cultivation, then practice Qi cultivation; if you're going to practice Golden Core cultivation, then practice Golden Core cultivation. I thought I'd found the magic herb, what a rip-off!

This is a classic case of a high opening followed by a decline. My advice is to wait until it breaks through the initial resistance level. If you don't believe it, there's nothing I can do. 🥱

Author, your writing is terrible. You're a sadistic, overly compassionate author. The plot is bad, the logic is flawed, and you deliberately make the protagonist make irrational choices. It's disgusting. You should be punished. You should apologize. Author, your writing is extremely bad. You've done a very bad job. Author, your writing is extremely bad. You've done a very, very bad job.

At first glance, it seemed quite good. But the more I read, the less I liked it. The protagonist's mental state was terrible. Given that he transmigrated from Earth, even a few years of experience on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) would have prevented him from becoming so foolish. Furthermore, the later descriptions and plot became increasingly weak.

However, the book essentially ended when the innate level was achieved; from that point on, it was considered over in my mind.