Hogwarts: Magical Elegy

The writing is good. Choosing this time period away from the original work means that the author wants to write something of his own. For now, the ancient magic texts, the exploration of ruins and the general background of the ending of the Dark Lord and the growth of the second generation of the Dark Lord. There is really no similar fanfic at the moment. The finished book is basically a masterpiece. . But to be honest, it gets harder and harder to write as you get to the end. There are thousands of Harry fans, and less than one tenth of them have been completed. I hope the author can work hard.

The most useless thing in Harry Potter is Quidditch, what do you think?

The protagonist has two lives, shouldn't he follow the two little girls and cause mischief? Normal people are in a state of war when the whole world is at war, and they themselves are in a weak state. Shouldn't they improve their strength? Although the protagonist's body is eleven years old, his mind should be that of a person in his twenties or thirties, right? But the book properly describes him as a child.

The protagonist Bubai is written as too smart

Everything else is good, except for the protagonist, a mature male time traveler who writes it for you like a sissy.

🤫🤫 I have always felt that the IQ of the Harry Potter wizarding community has been cut. Pure-blood wizards may not bother to learn the techniques of Muggles, but there is no shortage of Muggle-born wizards among wizards. As long as there are ambitious wizards who pursue power in order to break the class shackles of pure-blood wizards, Muggle-born wizards themselves will embark on the path of combining magic and technology. Such people are impossible. For example, as long as wizards with normal IQs understand the development history and plans of Muggle civilization. The concepts of computer technology, artificial intelligence, and magic technology that combines it with magic have great prospects. We can see the destructive power of nuclear bombs and replication spells. It is terrifying to think about it. It does not reduce the IQ of the wizard group. Mortals have no way to play. Wizards can also learn to do what mortals can do. It will take the entire civilization of mortals to devote their efforts to what wizards can do. I don't know how long it will take to achieve it. Just a transformation spell can kill the physics that mortals have spent thousands of years building to the ground.

Read the introduction, make a complaint, and be born in an orphanage. . . That's pretty shitty.

Needs some poison resistance Overall ok

In fact, in HP's world view, the background and story of this era are the most exciting. After all, compared to the savior's battle against the intelligent Dark Lord, this period is obviously more exciting. During the Second World War, the wizarding world was on the verge of being exposed; Grindelwald, who was raging across Europe and stirring up trouble in the wizarding world; Voldemort, who was lurking in Hogwarts and plotting immortality, and whose IQ was at the peak of his appearance as a boy. This is a turning point that truly determines the future of the magical world. It can be said that the protagonist in this context is the real savior, the arrival of the Son who ends chaos. Support the author! Well written!

I don't know how you look and feel, water or dry. I want to write a novel like watching a movie _(:зゝ∠)_

Find a girl online! Please let me know if there is any infringement! ! I really don't know where the picture came from! ! ! Specially posted in the discussion thread! ╭☞( ￣ ▽￣)╭☞

Giant poison makes me want to vomit after looking at it

When I wrote about the protagonist at the beginning, it didn't show anything special about other people. In the current online environment, it's hard to read slowly... (Only my personal opinion)

How do I remember that Dumbledore knew Legilimency? And it's still top-notch. How could you not know what the protagonist is thinking.

Don't you think it's really weird? There are three female protagonists.

Learn to live, learn to love this book, everything is worth it🤓

Although not many people read this book, I still want to say something, author, come on, don't give up, keep writing, just write your thoughts, don't let other elements interfere with your thoughts, write a story you like, then I will subscribe

Forced heroine? A whole vase

I like it very much. It's very difficult to find good hp fanfics without system nowadays.

I'm in the first grade of school. Love love love. 🤫🤫🤫

This is a romance novel, the judgment has been completed

The group account is in the introduction... If someone joins the group, it shows that you are a risk🙃 So I haven't given it to you🙃 It is recommended to change the number or make a note why, if the account has been stolen or something... That's it~

The creativity is very good, but the writing is too poor. Many times the protagonist looks like a childish ghost, which is a bit unbearable!