Pirate Bloody Hand Mary

First of all, this is one of the rare books that makes me excited to read. This book is wonderfully written. Whether it is the arrangement of the plot of the book or the character creation of the original characters, every point is impeccable but absolutely reasonable. There are no holes or bugs (at least I haven't seen them in the latest part). There is not much direct description of the character's personality in the book, but more character behaviors are chosen to tell readers what kind of character this person is. In terms of the character's image, the book can be said to be lifelike, as if such a person originally existed. In particular, Kuhlman's exit has sublimated his character image, and it is also an expansion of the book around the protagonist Mary's concept of justice. Kuhlman showed us his concept of justice in the Impel Down incident: for the sake of justice, life can be sacrificed at any time. I feel that the only flaw is the description of some details in the plot. When I wrote this post, it was Chapter 189, just after the war. At this time, the protagonist's combat power has reached semi-emperor level (or pseudo-emperor level, which usually exceeds the short-term emperor level of the emperor's deputy, and is still at the bottom), and the events experienced by the protagonist at this time include East China Sea, Alabasta, headquarters training, Shampoo Land, Devil's Triangle, Second Alabasta and the Top War (including Impel Down City). As I mentioned before, the plot arrangement of this book is still very reasonable. There is no such problem as the protagonist just running around and crushing him. The plot collapses and the combat power collapses. All the "effects" in this book can have their "causes" found earlier. But up to this point, the book has written so many events, including many wonderful descriptions, that the book has only written 790,000 or 800,000 words. For a book in which the protagonist has experienced 7 major and minor events, the word count of this book is stuck in a slightly embarrassing place: it is less than a long story, there are not enough details, and the characters are a bit abrupt (it is understandable that Shanks brings the golden lion to fight at the top, but it feels a bit awkward); there are more than short stories, and the pace is not fast enough. Maybe the author has his own considerations in the number of words he describes. I just don't want there to be any mistakes in this book. (Personally, I don't like to read novellas. I always feel like I have unfinished thoughts. If I read too much, I will feel uncomfortable.) In short, I think the biggest highlight of this book is the confrontation between "justice" between different positions and different characters. The navy has the justice of the navy, and the pirates have the justice of the pirates. It also controls the general direction of punishing evil and promoting good. Some concepts can also be learned from us in reality. Summary: Personally, I think this book has three flaws 1. Fan works limit the height of this book, which is destined to not become a popular book 2. The theme and system of justice of the protagonist Chaos also limit the height of this book, covering up some of the book's insights on the concept of justice br>3. The word count and description issues mentioned before, some of them are stuck in the middle, which makes the audience feel unhappy at both ends (Purely personal opinion, I don't know if anyone really abandons the book for this reason) Finally, I hope that the author can make this book more exciting, and I also hope that the author can write a good book that everyone knows as soon as possible.

For those who subscribed to this book after reading the introduction, the frequency of the system appearing is too high and it is too dramatic, the system has too many redemption capabilities, a lot of buggy capabilities, and the combat power is out of touch. I also exchanged for other powerful anime characters, but I have no desire to watch them anymore, which is too bad. We already know the plot, but I feel there is nothing innovative about it. Just the few places where the anime appears, there is nothing interesting about it. If the system just appeared at the beginning, gave away the fruits and then left, and the subsequent protagonist joined the navy by his own will and swayed the revolutionary army, it would still be somewhat interesting.

Everyone has talked about the plot and character creation, but I will just add that the emotional scenes are quite good. Let nature take its course. The only thing that can stir up my emotions is the occasional lines in the second half of the show that I feel so awkward about, haha. No CP. Single orientation. But I feel that the line of friendship and confidant with Weiwei is quite close. The fan girl Dasqi in the early and mid-term is also good. Slightly lily-leaning. But it's okay to think of them as comrades walking hand in hand. It was a bit sad to end. People around you leave one by one. Readers have witnessed your birth in the third dimension, but they can only accompany you so far. The road ahead will be walked alone, but Mary, please keep walking, justice is with you.

There are very few pirate fanfics about transformation, and this one is so comfortable to write compared to others! The psychological description of the heroine (male protagonist?)'S own personality is quite brilliant, and having two encounters with Luffy without spoiling too much of the plot is also a plus. Furthermore, the setting of Jun Ji in this book is also refreshing. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. I will order them all (if I can think of it)

I don't know what the author is thinking. The protagonist can be said to be the most important part of the book and the most critical "poetic eye". The Shampoo Land may be meant to reflect the five other navy personnel, but overall, it is a failure. After the protagonist left the navy headquarters, he made a plan and went to the Shampoo Land. Until the war started, he cleared out the trash and gave the Shasha Fruit to a little girl. With more than twenty chapters, the protagonist's story can even be compressed into two chapters. What's even more outrageous is that the two compressed chapters are not interesting. Everyone knows that Xiangbo Land is the paradise of the Celestial Dragons. It is extremely dark. The identity of the protagonist is also mentioned in the previous article. These readers all know it. So what story are told in these twenty chapters? The protagonist is confused because of his identity and explores, what prophecies, dragon emblem Celestial Dragons, information in the tavern, and the fight at the end. What is the significance of these? During this process, the name of the protagonist often does not even appear in two or three chapters. The role of the supporting role is only known by the pirates whose names are unknown and whose abilities cannot be recalled. Is the role of these people too heavy? What did the protagonist do during these processes? Is the story of these twenty chapters interesting? Has the author thought about it... At least, reading these twenty chapters is irritating and depressing for me personally. This is fan fiction, and the protagonist must be the most focused. You must understand what the point of this book is. At least I am following the setting of the protagonist to see the protagonist create a different storm in this familiar world of pirates. In any case, no matter what the novel is, the reader must start from the perspective of the protagonist, and can switch perspectives in a short space of time, but this is to tell a good story, not to create supporting characters. A large number of supporting characters and too frequent perspective switching will only make people bored. Even original group portrait novels are not written in this way. The characters of the group portrait are also constructed through the protagonist. The protagonist is the reader's "sense." The construction of the other supporting characters is similar to meeting a person in reality and understanding him from the perspective of the protagonist. This is what I think of the group portrait construction. Constructed. In my opinion, the author has been too hasty and unclear about the purpose. The biggest benefit of fan fiction to creators is that there are a large number of character templates and settings in the original book, which can be used as blueprints or even directly used to build the protagonist's own story. But no matter what. Anyway, the protagonist is the most important thing. The reason why I said so much is because these twenty chapters were too depressing, which was far inconsistent with my original expectations for this book. In my original opinion, although this book has flaws, it can still become a masterpiece, and it can even become a must-read classic among Pirates fans. But now, judging from the senses of these twenty chapters, I am a little disappointed. Well, please come on. If it affects the author's perception, I can delete it. But no matter what, I still hope that the author will think about it and tell the story in a better way.

Author, you don't want our readers to feel immersed~ I don't think there are many poisonous points in this book, but there are still some, but the flaws are not concealed. The development of the protagonist's strength and psychological well-being is the best I have ever seen in a book. The depiction of combat and the shaping of characters are excellent. The various skills at the beginning are dazzling. Later, the author also changed and was able to listen to the readers' opinions very well. This is a great advantage. The self-created characters are also flesh and blood. The appropriate jokes make people smile, and the lines also make people's blood boil. If the first 20 chapters can only show that this is a good book, then the following chapters make me think this book is a high-quality product. (Only personal opinions, welcome to refute, but don't be angry or weird) But there are some places where I still feel that the sense of substitution is insufficient. No matter what kind of web article it is, a sense of substitution must be considered to some extent, but there are some places that make me feel uncomfortable. For example, when the protagonist is doing push-ups, Garp is asked to sit on him, and he is obviously looking for it casually. A dumbbell or a heavy object can be used instead, and there is also the matter of walking around in the corridor in my underwear. To be honest, I did this when I was in the dormitory, but I would never do it when there was a dormitory aunt, not to mention that the protagonists have all become women. (If it's still the parentheses above, you can refute, but don't get angry and communicate well. If the author doesn't like it, you can delete it) (By the way, some people may think that I have too many words in the "finding fault" part at the end, but this is not the case, because I didn't expand on the parts where I praised, such as Kuhlman, Weiwei, and the psychological development of the protagonist, so it seems that there are too few words. I hope you can understand)

From the author's resume, it seems that the protagonist is a pure war maniac, but when I really looked at it, I found that the protagonist's personality is actually very good. Except for his extreme attitude towards pirates, he is quite attractive in all aspects.

A clearer picture found online (deleted for infringement)

Let me evaluate it a little bit, my feeling, from chapter 1 to chapter 50. 1Admit it! Lsps, you are just here for Tanya's setting 2 The main plot is a bit vague, it feels like writing wherever you go, but it's generally okay 3 The crazy girl is cute, you have to appreciate it, don't worry too much about normalizing the protagonist, but don't be too crazy. For example, Tanya will sometimes release a slightly humane chapter.

After reading the old X, the recommendations became less and less reliable, and there were 80% fewer books to read. But I can find a book worth reading, which can be regarded as rp's return. First of all, this book's portrayal of the aura and evil protagonist is still in place. At least it was enjoyable to read. It's not like those so-called dark genres that spend a long time just torturing the supporting characters and the protagonist to disgust the readers. There are two hidden dangers in the chapters I have read so far. The first is the system's control over the plot. Many current system novels deliberately cover this up with many elements, and many even make the system disappear from the novel as soon as the plot unfolds. Currently Generally speaking, the protagonist needs more reasonable "motivations", that is, the protagonist's personality must be established, rather than just being a good gentleman once the system is dismantled, which will be cool. And this is not simple. It is still not easy for a newcomer with great potential like the author, who needs to figure out the character more.

The main character is single! I will hang out with beautiful girls, but my relationship is with family and affection rather than love! The friendship with men is a comradeship!

Personally, I hate this hodgepodge of abilities.

I finished reading it in one day. It's really good. I haven't encountered such a good article in a long time. The protagonist is not a mindless pervert, but also points out his own flaws and strengths through the narrative. Moreover, it is reasonable to improve oneself. Like the broken stone on top of the war, I feel that this is how normal people think. After all, if there are props that can block pain, I will definitely want to use them. After receiving the broken external props, I also had enough ability and psychological quality to apply my own abilities because of the experience of the past six months. The "justice" of the protagonist is also well described. From the beginning to collect fear points to kill pirates due to system tasks, to later experiencing a series of incidents such as pirates killing people, he became a firm believer that pirates must die. This point reached its climax in the final proposal of the War on Top, which at least made me feel very satisfied and powerful.

The setting is pretty good, but the power system is too complex.

At first I thought the author's writing was pretty good, but I felt that the data was a bit low. But the more I looked at it, the more strange it became. The heroine's ability is obviously so strong, and she has to disconnect every time she fights in a team battle. It's really just about learning from the original work. Originally, I just wanted to have fun reading the fandom, but I still had to suffer the frustration of the original work. It's comparable to the kind of protagonist in a ghost movie who insists on splitting up to escape.

The author's level is too high, there are too many cores and secondary settings, and it doesn't really suit the name. In fact, I just want to watch a relaxing fanfic, and I want to see the navy in the image of a young girl saying "boring, I want to see a river of blood".

The main character is being tortured all the time. It's so weird to watch.

😂😂😂Why is this book on a male channel...

Provided by the designer~

The one who loses his power after being expelled from the navy is evil enough. If it is handled well, it is a good point. If it is not handled well, it will be a poisonous point and a big pit.

How should I put it? It's very complicated. It's already complicated enough with exchanging skills and so on. I don't know what you think about the recruitment of characters from other anime. Isn't it too complicated? It's skills and recruiting other protagonists. It's so confusing. I wonder if you have ever thought about whether the world will collapse if the recruitment is successful. You are a navy but not a pirate. Is it redundant to recruit people from other worlds? How do you deal with the relationship between them and the navy after recruiting them? It is said that all of your subordinates are devil fruit ability users, and all members of the good guys are ability users. No matter how you think about it, this recruitment is a bit redundant. Maybe it's because I don't see Pirates fans accepting this setting too much, so I'll try it first and then take a look.

Judging from this introduction, the protagonist is probably more Akainu than Akainu.

To be honest, the system is cool and the story background can be copied. The author wrote about the feeling of cerebral thrombosis for ten years, and just left it alone if it couldn't be connected. It's not that watery, right? 😅

The heroine is a licking dog who licks women. The writing is very disgusting. The character of the heroine is written to be decisive and decisive, but when she encounters a woman, she becomes mentally ill.

It's a pity that the murderous intention at the beginning was majestic, and the methods were indeed a bit cruel, but in the subsequent series of descriptions, schizophrenia, and in the recovery situation, I lost all my strength. What, there is nothing wrong with it, a wry smile, ah, it feels like the character has collapsed.

😅Various honey operations

Bloody Marine Style Except for these five words, everything else can be considered poisonous.

I came here purely for the introduction. I thought it was Tanya who wreaked havoc on the battlefield, then accumulated military exploits to get to the top, and finally overthrew the Draconian regime. In the end, the method of killing the pirates at the beginning was a little bloody, and I suffered a schizophrenia because of it. The delicate emotional description of this setting is completely unsuitable for the rough world of pirates. And he was originally going to be a navy, but he secretly escaped halfway and almost died from the sun? He just went to Alabasta to steal Luffy's monster, and in the end, Sand Crocodile broke through inexplicably on the battlefield, almost not defeating him, and even after being saved by Ace, he still wanted to kill Whitebeard. Before this game was released, there was no main character, not even a marine, and I felt like there might be some monsters that would steal Luffy's fight later on. 😥 It can only be said that the author's advantage is that the description of the scene atmosphere is very touching, which can make people excited when watching it. But the arrangement of the plot is inexplicable, and some ideas come up one after another. Moreover, the protagonist's IQ seems to be a bit low. He dares to go to sea in the world of One Piece without any preparation. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago 😒

Too many abilities, too complex, inexplicable

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...