Naruto: Starting from Minus One

It's good to watch, but the protagonist, the master, feels too disconnected from the whole book. The very clichéd character seems like a classical beauty from twenty years ago.

It looks so good, much better than the previous Bloody Mary. The protagonist in the previous book always had a great time fighting and neglected daily life a bit. In this book, Yukiko and the supporting characters all feel like they have come to life. I also look forward to Yuri Yuri overthrowing Yukiko Kouga!

Regarding the setting of the protagonist of this book, I didn't know why when I first read it. But overall it feels surprisingly comfortable. At first, the lack of an eye, an arm, and a leg really made people feel like there was something wrong with the author. But after reading through it, I think this setting can better introduce readers to the ninja world at the beginning. In fact, looking back on the original work of Naruto, when did the readers or viewers think that this world is different from the ordinary world? When did readers establish their understanding of ninjas as a group? Personally, I am thinking of Zabuza's ending at the end of the Wave Country mission. He was obviously about to die and couldn't use his arms, but he killed dozens of enemies without leaving a single trace with just the kunai in his mouth. When I first watched Naruto, the image of this ninja relying on his will to do things that ordinary people would not do was impressive. It also completely established the image of ninja. Before this, it can even be summarized in the article about skin-changing rural abilities. For readers, it is suddenly separated from other different world views, just like creating a new world. Talking about this book, the protagonist starts with a collapse of the sky. He loses an eye, an arm, and a leg at the beginning. This is not only minus one, but almost minus three (laughs). But the protagonist relies on his will to survive and trains under the fire, which suddenly makes sense, because he is a ninja, so it is possible. This setting easily brings readers back to the interesting ninja world. Different from other Naruto fan novels, which have systems or memories or some weird golden fingers, this novel seems to be more down-to-earth, and the atmosphere of the ninja world. I consider myself to have read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and regardless of whether they are good or bad, the protagonists in other works always give people a sense of looking down from above. If you think about the reason carefully, it is nothing more than confidence. With system memory or some strange golden finger, there is always someone, something, or ability rules that can hold you back. As a protagonist, it's just a game world, because there are people or abilities to support it, and the protagonist's growth is just experience but not character or will. In the end, he just felt like a kid with a gun. In this book, I am very happy to be able to see the growth of the protagonist with flesh and blood based on the author's writing power. Not only in terms of combat, but also in terms of tenacity of will. Take the death of the teacher as an example. Although I don't really like this way of letting the protagonist grow, as a reader, I do feel the flesh-and-blood growth, the kind of growth that breaks through the front teeth and is swallowed. As far as fan fiction goes, this is a joy to have. I hope the author can keep writing well, come on, this kind of eye-catching book is very rare! Monthly tickets and recommended tickets will help. I hope the more I write, the better!

Let me ask you a question: Compared with Frieza or the Otsutsuki clan, which one did more cruel and bad things? Infinite Tsukuyomi Eva's Human Completion Plan Black Goku's Bio-Zero Plan Which of these three plans is more abstract? Not many people would choose Bio-Zero Plan. This thing seems to be a massacre.

I read more than 600 chapters in one go, only to find that the plot only ends with Minato taking over as Hokage... This book is about becoming a god without being a prisoner.

Compared with the fast-food novels written by fans with dozens of chapters and explosive combat power, this is very well written, come on!

I saw Snow Ge as Lei Ge, and I didn't see it clearly until I got to the Dragon Vein. I'm useless 🙂

The protagonist is not from a family with eyes, nor does he have any cheating system. He just likes to be down-to-earth and grow up slowly. I really hate the kind of Golden Finger Enkai novels, where everyone is overly powerful. When I see this, I feel that this kind of strength is really empty. I believe that strength should grow together with personal experience, belief, and willpower, but the spiritual core of the protagonists who came from modern time travel is becoming more and more empty. But if one is bigger than the other, it always gives me a feeling that their character and strength do not match. To put it bluntly, I feel that they are not worthy of this strength. In comparison, I still prefer this kind of protagonist who has grown up under the trial of blood and fire. This kind of protagonist is more three-dimensional and thicker, so not knowing the plot is a plus in my opinion.

I hope the protagonist is a villain, otherwise it will be boring to follow the plot. When I saw the Dragon Vein section, I felt very confused as to whether the protagonist is a good or bad character. From Naruto's description, it seems that not a single supporting character died. I just follow the plot and don't write it. Nothing has changed and I just watched it. So far, everything is good.

In fact, the author's plot arrangement should logically be placed in the extremely chaotic fandom of Qiuban or Naruto. However, when reading the book, it felt surprisingly harmonious. The battle part was very enjoyable and the daily emotions were also very delicate. The death of the dead was quite exciting. I think the death of the character is not a problem, as long as the death is meaningful, so I quite like the part where the teacher dies in battle. The battle is fun!

I don't know if the comment was purchased or if it was deleted. I really can't imagine that a modern person in his 20s who traveled to Naruto and was trained in an abusive manner every day could say "I think I can become a good child. I think it will be difficult for me to live an easy life, but I hope others are happy." There are too many zz words and deeds like this! Isn't it embarrassing? I'm afraid it wasn't Hachiko, the loyal dog, before time travel! The intelligence of this modern man in his 20s is probably not that of a 6-year-old! The author writes the book with his own logic, so I am also curious about the author's academic qualifications.

This is a million-word torture article. I flipped through the table of contents and found that there were more than 800 scenes of explosive village rebellion plots. I really couldn't stand it. The more I read, the more frustrated I became. I can only say that there is a reason why it is a niche.

One of the rare non-conspiracy theory Naruto fanfics, it belongs to the fact that the Naruto area went back ten years and started a renaissance. There are too many inexplicable Naruto conspiracy theories in Qidian. This does not mean that it cannot be interpreted in a conspiracy theory, but the author and readers revel in the secondary settings and rumors, and it is difficult to interpret some plots that do not exist at all.

A hellish start, second only to technical secondary school toilets

The protagonist is a time traveler, but he has never seen Naruto or heard of Naruto! They are the indigenous people who claim to be traveling through time.

We can meet Kakuzu and Minato in the wilderness. Is the world of Naruto only as big as a village? Even if Madara Uchiha couldn't use his signature ninjutsu, it wouldn't be a problem to deal with Minato who had just created the Rasengan and learned to fly the Thunder God. Madara had the genjutsu that could control the Nine-Tails. Minato at this period actually broke free after a while. Although Uchiha's pupil technique had a special attack on tailed beasts, Minato at this period was not in a position to hit porcelain. Uchiha Madara, who is Uchiha Madara? Fighting alone against the Five Kage, even if you can't use Susanoo or unclear eye skills, it would be too fake if you can't even defeat Minato at this period. When Tobirama was just resurrected, the Flying Thunder God made a surprise attack, and Madara was defeated and pinned to the ground in a single face-to-face, but in the end, he was unable to defeat Minato, who had just learned to fly the Thunder God and the Rasengan. It's funny.

Snow Ge (young)

In "Naruto", even the Sharingan can be replaced at will. Can't the protagonist's blind eye be repaired? Can't I just replace my normal eyes with another one? The relationship between the protagonist and Orochimaru is not bad. Orochimaru's skin-shedding technique, although it looks disgusting, is very practical. It can regenerate severed limbs. Hasn't it been developed yet?

It is an exaggeration for a two-year-old child to survive on the battlefield. Itachi Uchiha went to the battlefield at the age of four and could only barely open his mind.

I thought of this at first glance, but then I thought about the main character missing one hand than her.

I thought it was Hyakkimaru at first

God, this is the first time I've seen someone who can write so many Naruto abuse stories. Is there a Shennong?

Muzi

Well, this is another author who wants to reach the Six Paths level without deus ex machina based on the original work of Naruto. But there is one point in the timeline that is indeed early enough. The time when Madara first channeled the heretic demon, and if he uses his imagination, he can barely be cannon fodder when Kaguya breaks the seal, but for now, it is too watery and slow heat is not my cup of tea.

Don't criticize or praise, I just jumped to read it. The author is a bit of a literary youth, the pace is too slow, and the writing is not faulty, but book friends basically come here for the fans. The author often does not write about the protagonist in several chapters, but writes some messy character peripherals, which makes people unable to read. And when you write these peripherals, do you consider the feelings of people who have watched Naruto? There is another question. The protagonist is an adult who has traveled through time, and he is a Chinese, so we have to talk about the thinking of the Chinese. He has just passed through and has no independent ability to hide under the wings of Danzo and Orochimaru to survive. All the messy things are in the body. Yes, you have some autonomy later. You were a support teacher before time travel, and you were still a support teacher teaching several courses by yourself. The theory is basically invincible, but you don't have the scientific thinking of the previous life to study ninjutsu, taijutsu, forbidden arts, etc., But let it go. From an adult's point of view, this is unreasonable. If you are placed in a world where personal force is paramount and where life is at risk at any time, can you do it without looking for the ability to save your life? And there are too many messes in the protagonist's body. He knows that it is not his own and does not actively solve it, but just goes with the flow. This is unreasonable. Not to mention an adult soul, a child will also be very scared if he knows that inexplicable things are in his body. It's one thing not to be able to solve it, but it's another thing not to solve it. Ignore these points and you can basically see it, there are no other big problems. Someone also speculates that the author has been brainwashed by Japanese comics, and that the literary youth is moving closer to the fake reality of Japanese comics. What protects the people around you, protects beauty, and world peace. What nonsense? An adult can say such mindless words under laws and regulations where personal force is paramount and there is no strong government machinery to maintain it. Haha! Slip away, gone away

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As soon as Sandi Gold Rush is released, I really can't find any bright spots to offset this toy that doesn't belong to the style of Naruto. The logic of Minato fighting Madara doesn't make sense, and many of the plots are childish. It's not about the writing ability but the outline. Then he abandoned the book.

It's finished soon. It's been a long run. Overall, the writing is okay. At least it's a watchable Naruto fanfic in this era of declining creative quality.

I've read Chapter 307 so far, and I feel pretty good about it. Logically speaking, it shouldn't be read by so many people 🤔 Is it because I don't recommend it?

Although it is slow to gain popularity, the quality is really high. Among all the long-running Naruto fanfics I have read, you can be considered the strongest. So can the author write a few more extras?