I Accidentally Boarded a Ghost Ship and Was Forced to Become the Captain.

The plots copied from other movies and novels are very serious, and even one chapter is a direct plagiarism. You really don't think you have seen it, right? Moreover, there are a lot of jokes in the article, which are very abrupt, and "borrowed" sentences from other places and forcibly integrated them into my own paragraphs. Since this book is not too unpleasant among the things recommended by the editor, I can barely read it without feeling sick Also, "The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage, and the greatness of mankind is the greatness of courage." You are not worthy of using this sentence, and you are forced to embarrass it.

Check it out, it's a Cthulhu-centric novel similar to Lord of Mysteries. The plot is barely passable at first, and the protagonist just pretends to be awesome. Within a few chapters of WC, he kills his girlfriend and invites the protagonist on a date even if the relationship is not confirmed. Green Tea is not as ruthless as you. What the hell did I read? ? ? I don't care if you kill me with a knife. You're not very popular in the first place, but you insist on using a knife. You are Kodachi's sword, right? It's outrageous.

The writing is not bad, why do you have to compare it with your best friend? Come on, author💪

Come on

The plot felt a little too fast, but the various dialogues between the characters and the ending were surprisingly good. The last few sentences at the end of almost every chapter contain either humor or irony. Especially when describing the contradiction between the king and the prime minister, whether the protagonist's electric light will be widely used fully demonstrates the incompatibility between the two. While still being funny, he also took the opportunity to satirize the king. And after surviving the hellish ship, the protagonist still maintains an optimistic and positive attitude and has the compassion of ordinary people. While having his own financial needs, he can also donate to the orphanage. The various reluctances during the donation process and the subsequent regrets will not make people feel too holy, but everyone can see that this is actually the protagonist's self-concealment. Furthermore, the chapters written in the form of a diary also maintain a very interesting humorous style, using many jokes but not seeming too rigid. .... No, why does the writing sound so like Chinese reading comprehension...

When I say a girl is a sissy, is it my fault or the author's fault?

Why do you feel that your level has been declining? I still don't understand what readers want to see! At least I would rather see the protagonist come here and have his own place to stay! Let the protagonist go to other countries to develop, make inventions, do academics, and make results that will piss off the people in Baia. In the previous paragraph, it was like middle school and high school students falling in love, so they were too lazy to complain. Is it fun to write the following question? Do readers want to see this kind of surrender and compromise? ? We have encountered enough in reality, for family, for friends, for life, and for work.... In reality, many times there is no choice. Are you still going to be this angry after reading a novel? When a country, from kings, princes, to leaders, is suppressing the protagonist and even the people around the protagonist, the protagonist can still stay! ? He fought back, and then compromised... Is the protagonist unable to lead his family to live a better life in other countries? Obviously other countries are trying to show their face to invite the protagonist! If you insist on fighting this country, you are traveling through time! You don't have any feelings for Baiya, are you making a fool of yourself?

After reading the first chapter, I found it a bit interesting. Survival games in this closed environment are always very charming, but I don't understand how the protagonist Tu Fu survived to the end. There were thousands of people on the ship, from all walks of life. How could he, an ordinary person who boarded the ship by winning a lottery, have the ability to survive? He had no ability, no skills, did not dare to kill, and did not stick together with others. He survived by eating rats in the pipeline, and he became the last person on the ship, and finally died in the captain's cabin. Frankly speaking, I think this section could be handled better with some polish. Then what's more outrageous is that he started dancing as soon as he time traveled. The book says that he was originally an introvert with high self-esteem, which is commonly known as social phobia, but this guy just came over and acted like a social terrorist. He directly controlled the discourse at the dinner table and kept talking in jingles. He was full of energy. You have just come back from this kind of killing game, are you so energetic?

This book is actually okay, but it's filled with secrets, some plot holes are obvious, and it's a bit uncomfortable to read. In fact, the world view and plot are not bad. It would be better if the protagonist is a smart and cautious old silver coin. The plot advancement in the early stage is a bit stiff, relying on the protagonist accidentally leaving flaws and exploiting them. The protagonist misjudged the power of the Sparrow Princess when he first entered the world, and was left with flaws by the policeman. In fact, these are understandable, and he slowly grows up, but there is a clear sense of separation from the beginning. The writing makes people feel that he is an ordinary young man in his twenties and thirties, and he has a background conflict with the ghost ship heir who has survived long-term training. It was the same at the beginning. The urge to go home was a bit strange. Without any external pressure, I chose to go back to the ghost ship. It gave me a headache, but it got better later. It's fun to steal, but it's a pity that there are no other branches to enter. A few suggestions for the author, they may not be correct, but I hope they will be helpful. Since the title of the book is Captain of the Ghost Ship, as the captain, the ghost ship must be patrolled and roughly explored. What is more and what is missing? Are there any mysterious places? For example, the further down the cabin, the more dangerous it is, and the higher the level required. The foreshadowing can also be buried first, and I will briefly introduce this cheat. The monitoring cheat is very creative, and the information warfare is very good. If the protagonist is the fraudster path, I think it will take off. Hahaha, but it is the brave path. This cheat is not particularly big but useful. The author has designed it carefully. Secondly, as a captain, how can you not have a crew? In the early stages of the map, you can form a mysterious force and recruit them as trainee crew members for inspection. Looking at the lonely and old captain, I always feel that something is wrong. Although the protagonists were involved in the incident and were behind the scenes, without the powerful people joining in, it was honestly very monotonous to watch. It gives a foreshadowing that there will be a war in the future, and it is actually good to pull a few people off the ship in advance to serve as seeds of power. Or instead of getting on the ship, build a small ship, set inspection goals (issue tasks, etc.), Gradually approach the ghost ship every time you complete a goal, and finally gradually board the ship to become a crew member. In this way, the supporting characters will come, and the knife will be given to other people who have an accident and the ship capsizes midway. It was foggy when the raw ship appeared. I could vaguely see the ghost ship, but I was not afraid of information leakage. I had enough time to screen out the spies before docking. The main character's forward motivation is too monotonous, which is to go home. The whole process is monotonous. Is there any sharper stage goal, such as revenge, being coerced, etc. Now it can be seen that the author is letting the protagonist integrate into this era, and the protagonist's progress is gradually increasing to protect his family. This motivation feels a bit too mild. The aunt is an ordinary person, and the uncle may have foreshadowing, but he is also an official. The upper limit in the later stage is not too high. It is too easy to become a weakness on the road to transcendence. My sister may be able to side by side. Unless you plan to throw a knife to death, there is a high probability that you will have to fake death and cut off contact. P. S. There was too little written about the double-slit experiment. Although it was said to be a diversionary plot leading into the University of Michigan, it was a little out of the ordinary. It was weird to just push the plot without any foreshadowing. This book is good. It has some minor flaws, and a small part of the plot is inconsistent. However, the shortcomings cannot be concealed. The magic potion sequence is too easy to think of mystery. It is also because of this that I unconsciously raised my expectations for this book. This created a psychological gap, and these previous shortcomings were amplified. Overall it's a good book, good luck to the author.

After reading the introduction, what a scumbag protagonist, and I just added it to my bookshelf.

After reading three chapters, I want to ask a question: In which hellish place have you lived for 3 years? Didn't these 3 years have any impact on your personality, hobbies, etc.? ? Even one percent impact?

The first chapter is gold level and very enticing. Chapter two started with something wrong. The only winner of the survival game, with the psychological quality to dare to kill people and eat meat, and the spirit that has gone crazy, the character of the protagonist established in the first chapter was ruined by a bunch of slutty words and hooligans. It's not that you can't write sexy stories, but you should at least take into account the background settings and scene changes, right? Can you believe that the density of bad jokes exceeds that of many e-sports articles? I really can't accept it. Goodbye

If there is no first chapter, what follows is just an ordinary character who makes jokes and makes jokes. After reading the first chapter, the rest of it is unsightly. This is a novel that collapsed in the first two chapters. It's really a pity that the description in the first chapter

This is great... I started to read the comment section and said that the first two chapters fell apart after buying it. I still don't believe it "I've served it, I can't wait to taste it (Happy)" Looking through the introduction, it looks like a staring into the abyss type of article, which looks pretty good. Click to open the first chapter. Yang Jian's jokes again, and the foundation and the cruise ship? There are quite a lot of elements, and it seems that there must be a lot of horror elements... Why is there a comic strip, right? It looks pretty good, it should be. I'm looking forward to it. Why are there Hu Shi and the harmonious characters?! This is the ultimate suture monster! ((Zhensheng Okay, the suture monster is quite interesting. Oh, the atmosphere is up! (Hi) > Why is there suddenly a Lu Xun joke in the middle (annoyed It kind of ruins the atmosphere But the atmosphere picks up again later, not bad, not bad The ending is quite good, click on the second chapter "Put it down, I have tasted enough (sad)"

I regretted ordering all of them at once. All kinds of plagiarism. I don't like to read plagiarism carefully. I saw Chapter 300. The plagiarized parts include Pirates of the Caribbean, Fullmetal Alchemist, and Mystery. To put it nicely, they are borrowing from others, but it seems that many of them are directly copied from others. I plagiarized a line or a plot, and I was immediately speechless. I guess there are all kinds of plagiarism later on. I can't stand it anymore. I have read 300 chapters. The title of the book is different from what I thought. I thought I would be the captain of a ghost ship and go on an adventure, but the ghost ship turned out to be a plug-in.

The writing in the first few was pretty bad, and the protagonist didn't have the feeling of surviving a werewolf at sea. The previous plot of Werewolf felt like a patch on the protagonist Goldfinger. What does it make me feel? Just like the character in the game kills everyone in the main plot and becomes a hero, but the character in your hand is like a minion. Like two time and space

It's a bit outrageous that a royal family with multiple demigods couldn't check and balance a mortal king. It's funny that they were almost defrauded by an enemy super being and almost bankrupted the country's finances.

The difference between the first chapter and the second chapter is too great. It feels like they are separated, just like Jotaro is acting like a baby while calling Onii-chan.

Nowadays, those who cultivate immortals, martial arts, and ghosts all have weird elements added to them, which makes me almost vomit.

The author describes girls as sissy? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! The author has no idea what sissy means. Even if you search it on Baidu, it also shows that the author has never watched Korean idol dramas or some Korean male singers (this is good →_→). To describe girls who are too squeamish, you can say "princess disease" or "Mary Sue". Sissy is a derogatory term to describe men.       ，，，， Used to describe a man's traditional characteristics that tend to be more feminine, whether in speech and behavior (such as orchid fingers, feminine words, tone of voice, etc.), Dressing or gender roles. (Content comes from Baidu.)

I just finished Chapter 155 and am not in the mood to read any more. I don't understand why you, the author, want to take both sides. Although the character of the protagonist was not very clear before, it roughly created an image of a kind-hearted ordinary person. This image suddenly drifted away from the disgusting road. This is the first point. Can you, the author, please first think about what kind of character you want to create? Don't let the protagonist's personality drift left and right with the author's plot that is not the main line at first glance? Second point, please author, when you create a character, create a protagonist who is not only lovable, but at least not disgusting. What you write is a novel after all, something for people to read. The protagonist of the plot in 155 suddenly becomes a character who starts to do anything for money. The method is disgusting, and it also adds two enemies from well-off families for nothing (not to mention that sowing discord itself has a high possibility of being exposed, look what you got? Several thousand kroner and two enemies with considerable influence), simply, talent.

Will there be less meat if you don't play bad jokes?

I don't know if I didn't read it carefully. The protagonist here sent a letter discussing the wave particle nature of light and attracted a group of professors...? This plot is too outrageous...?

The first chapter was a bit interesting, but the following chapters almost felt like it, 234 felt a bit confusing, 567 was okay, but I felt that the plot was a little less appealing, the writing was okay, but the writing style was not interesting.

Where is the ghost ship? Why are you at school? Have you seen the boss in the back and can you tell me which picture I will start sailing on?

Chapter 5: A golden finger countdown makes the protagonist panic and bewilderment. He is still frightened and confused to explain the aftermath. The shame of a time traveler is that he lived on a dog in his last life. The real psychological activity should be surprise, expectation and calmness. As a time traveler, don't you even know the standard features of the golden finger system? You are not calm at all. It's ridiculous. You thought it was a countdown to life. What kind of logic is your brain showing off.

I just saw the writing style of the first one, and holy shit, it's a master. Look at the second and third pictures, what the hell, they're a mess Abandoned books

Is this work that bad? Now that I see it, I think the author wrote it very well! There's nothing particularly bad about it. What's bad and ugly is probably someone else who hired it to deliberately discredit the author! I'm annoyed by people like this, but I'll keep chasing them.

I have always thought that the Lord of Mysteries is average, but after reading this book, I realized that Mysteries also has merits.

If the ghost ship is removed, the mysterious element will not affect the book at all. It might as well be called "The Tufu King". The second volume once made me wonder what the significance of the supernatural system in this book is. It is better to make it directly into fantasy. I can't feel the role of the supernatural system at all. It is more reasonable for you to directly kingdom low martial arts and fantasy power system. It is really "The Emperor's New Clothes", which is self-motivating and has nothing to do with the supernatural mystery.