Honghuang: From a Broken Seal to the Originator of Formation Dao

I haven't read this book yet, but just seeing the title of the first chapter gave me the feeling that it wouldn't amount to much. It starts with the protagonist becoming a disciple of the Three Pure Ones. Even without reading it, I know you're using a system that's been used countless times before; in other words, you're just filling in the content of someone else's system.

The book is quite good, but it would be even better without the system. The protagonist could cultivate and sculpt himself entirely on his own.

The author has a knack for copying books, but your copy is utterly unoriginal. Another book I read featured a protagonist who was a fragmented array diagram that materialized into human form. It was also a simulation system, and the protagonist was also a disciple of the Jie Sect. Initially, the protagonist also simulated carving the Ten Deadly Arrays.

Sure enough, there's a reason for the low rating. After reading a few chapters, I was hooked and had to run away.

Are there any good prehistoric fantasy novels without a system? Please recommend some.

The only downside is that while the formation cultivation is interesting, why was his birth date set so low? Why wasn't he born at the very beginning of creation? Furthermore, if he becomes Tongtian's disciple, he has to follow the established patterns and formulas of previous authors. Even if the writing style differs, the overall direction remains the same, which will discourage readers from continuing.

Another book about a nuclear-powered saint. The saints of the primordial era were already omniscient and omnipotent; everything you write is shocking. Go write about mortals cultivating immortality instead.

When did systems even exist in the primordial world?

It would be better to change the system's abilities into innate talents and supernatural powers that the protagonist comprehends himself. After all, the system appears in the primordial world, and regardless of the level of world configuration the author sets up, it inherently feels low-end.

The first two chapters are enough to make you want to quit. This lousy system is trying to stop time in front of a saint?