My Mysterious Resurgence Became a Bug

The idea is good, but the plot design is very rough, and the psychological shaping of the pig's feet is also very childish.

I took a look at the new plot. Why is it said that the protagonist's ghost realm of stealing and stealing ghosts are balanced with each other? It is better to say: "The ghost realm of stealing ghost realm is revived. Well, it is revived. Qi Meng can use it, but it is the ghost realm of knocking ghost that is revived. It is the responsibility of the knocking ghost. It has nothing to do with Qi Meng who stole the ghost realm. It is not about stealing destiny. ! ! ! And how do I feel, the author, you wrote Yang Jian as a naive person. Although Yang Jian is still a novice, he should be a little wary of everyone. Of course, he should be less cautious about his classmates, but why does it feel like Yang Jian lacks any psychological activity? (┯_┯)

Looking forward to Amon...~? ? The number of Qimon has increased ! !

Not to mention other things, just the attitude of the protagonist and the hilarious narration. This is a supernatural novel. Can it be more serious? The atmosphere of terror is gone. Look at when the mysterious recovery was laughing and joking. I thought I had found a fan that I could watch, but this is what happened.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw that the ghost baby could steal the protagonist's supernatural power. Goodbye, this insulting book of Mystic Resurrection and the Lord of Mysteries.

What a mess! I feel that this plot is a mess, either because the details are missing, or an inexplicable plot is added, and it cannot be connected to the main plot.

The writing is very messy, with inexplicable jokes thrown in. It seems like the author is just trying to make fun of himself.

This book is too messy in the early stage, and the golden finger is too complicated. It is better to directly give the protagonist a golden finger, such as a door deep in the consciousness, and then let the protagonist obtain some rituals through contact with the strange. The protagonist sacrifices the strange to gain abilities, or the protagonist controls the ghost and uses some sacrifice rituals to sacrifice other strange to master the controlled strange. Now in the early stage, I don't understand the protagonist's situation at all, and it feels like the protagonist is just a pawn in a conspiracy.

After reading ten chapters, hey, the mysterious resurgence and these weird things are troublesome enough. You still want to create a Gate of Truth, Amon. The idea of ​​​​Cthulhu invasion is very good, but I feel that the author is a little unsure of the current situation. Personally, I feel that Goldfinger is a bit simpler and makes it so fancy. Amon also said hello to the Lord of Ghost Eyes, long time no see, old friend? What? The Lord of Ghost Eyes is also from the past

The plug-in is too big. I originally wanted to watch Pig's Knuckles PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds, but the result is an invincible article. It has no side effects and uses the ghost's ability. I started making ghost paintings at 20 pictures. I think I will be invincible at 100 pictures and then finish it. Otherwise, it will be the Zhutianliu that travels through the next world. Pig's Knuckles is invincible too fast.

I read a few chapters, and I feel that the author uses the stealing ability too hard. He only steals actions, but he can also steal thoughts, murder patterns, etc.

What do ghost slaves mean? The ghost knocking on the door wants to kill the protagonist and kills a group of ghost slaves. I don't understand.

Why sell ghost coffins? There are people like Cao Yanhua in the headquarters, so Gui Zhu probably won't be able to get it. What's wrong with the headquarters? If they behave well, there won't be any subsequent ghost missions.

It was quite interesting at first, but the main character was too impatient. Just get the mirror ghost and go to mess with the ghost painting. Are you so sure that you won't die? In addition, I really want to see a dungeon with Yang Jian. .

Have you ever thought about it, maybe the parchment is really Yang Jian in the future. It was the future Yang Jian who restarted time and returned to the past, but for some unknown reason turned into parchment, so it helped Yang Jian without reservation at the beginning. Later, after Yang Jian gradually got on the right track, it tried every means to replace the current Yang Jian. And it also said at the beginning of the article that when it escaped from the school, it said that it was a human, so maybe the parchment is Yang Jian's future consciousness!

How come knocking ghosts means greed? The Seven Deadly Sins are based on desire. The ghosts in Mysterious Resurrection don't even have consciousness and only act on instinct. It can be said to be a symbol, but you can't force it.

"Kneeling with each other" Shen Lin, events: smart kneeling stairs, S-level closed gate village, S-level epidemic kneeling, kneeling in the pawn shop, Status: "Eunuch in!" "Starting single kill and driving kneeler" Universal card kneeling blood Li Hua, events: S-level black smoke road, SS-level kneeling painting, kneeling difference, black smoke road collision Status: Damn the eunuch next door The above is the author's example!

It writes about a huge world view, but has no control over the writing. It is full of lies, no details, and there is no fighting spirit with the ghosts. It just disappears. In the first few chapters, the protagonist's ritual objects are several S-class ghosts. I mentioned earlier that the starving ghosts are gluttons and forgot about it after only two chapters. It also included some messy future incarnations and erased the protagonist's information. There were no details at all when the ceremony was held, and it was somehow successful. Anyway, it's a mess, and it's empty and has no content.

The protagonist of this type of novel cannot describe too much in his heart, and he cannot make too many funny comments to look too childish. Laofu doesn't have many words to create the character, but he is very vivid. Moreover, this kind of doomsday-like form is more suitable for cold-blooded points.

Should I write or not? If I don't write, I will clear the bookshelf.