Desert Civilization, Kingdom of God on Earth

It's rare to see a book that has a system but a weak sense of existence. The characters' IQs are online and unlike NPCs. The plot is reasonable and not arbitrarily fabricated due to system upgrades. The logic is self-consistent and fits the fictional background. PS: As an old bookworm who has invested a lot of money in Qidian. Com, my first comment is just to support new authors. Attached are the novels I am following--Kunlun Millet, Return to the Northern Wei Dynasty, Aztec Immortal, Yuan Yuan

Is it really good to have such a shocking start? Normal people would consider plundering a big city built on the ground? Especially if you have religious beliefs? I'm too lazy to complain about what you wrote later.

It's awesome to be able to turn a cool point into a poisonous point at the beginning. In the Middle Ages, a great city was created by a miracle, and then food was grown in the desert. For anyone with any brains, this wave of propaganda took off. In the end, it attracted bandits to come and rob. These medieval people were all atheists.

The medieval background is full of conspiracy and betrayal. Without the support of personal force, it is impossible to keep this piece of fat.

Immature Map 0.2B

The topic was about a map editor. It has more than 200,000 words. I only used this editor once, when I built the ancient city of Petra at the beginning, and I never used it again. The author changed his name to "I Have an Ancient City of Petra". Then, the author's writing style and knowledge are pretty good, but not top-notch. I can understand that the author doesn't want to write a trivial or entertaining novel, so he deliberately limits the main character, but if you have the writing style and knowledge to write an entertaining novel, you will definitely be able to write an enjoyable novel for you. The way it is written now is a pity.

I thought this book would be about Egyptian mythology or like lol Shurima, but I didn't expect it to be so boring 🤫

If there was no extraordinary system in this world, this system would be the starting point of building a city from the ground, the Pope + the Human Emperor. As a result, I was still playing the Little Lord game there. It's like holding a nuclear weapon and bombing an ant nest.

A novel must first attract readers, and secondly add your own thoughts. Why are you writing it for yourself when you have driven away everyone? Then don't put it on the shelves, just do it for love.

The protagonist is a kid holding gold in the city, waiting to be slaughtered.

I think you write very well and at a very high level. You can be said to be outstanding in terms of characterization, and the plot design is logical and wonderful. I often have the illusion that the story is a real thing. Your knowledge is also very large, which can support your story. I think it is your title and system flow that make you attract people who read system flow. Shuangwen, in fact, your story is more realistic and slow-burning. It is destined not to be a mental anesthetic for fast food culture lovers. Your food is not to the appetite of fast food lovers. If they are unhappy, they will find all kinds of illogical reasons to attack you to comfort themselves. These comments have no reference value to you, and these people are not your audience.

The hangup is too serious. I thought that by uniting the power of the people, we could transform the desert like Foolish Old Man moving mountains. It's simple to be a model from another world. The result is this, it's completely dependent on plug-ins and what else can you do to become invincible?

Why are there so few people who write fantasy and their grades are poor? Because those who write fantasy usually write about (⊙o⊙) what? , Do you know what readers read when reading fantasy novels? ? ? (Today's fantasy novels only have one emotion: what a fan, what setting, it's so fancy, I can't understand it)

Not bad, more suitable for my taste. Write faster. I'm afraid I'll lose it😁

Even in modern times, the city building at the beginning could scare a lot of people and turn them into theists, let alone in this era.

You start with a city, then there is a battle of wits and feudal conquest. It might as well be called a historical novel. It has too little excitement and is too boring. The protagonist doesn't look like a modern person, he's just an aborigine.

The lord risked his life as an oil merchant, and even brought a woman who hated him, and tolerated the woman attacking him every day. I really don't know how to develop the plot and write it randomly, making the lord an adventurer.

It's really fun! There are many foreign races and few soldiers in the trade routes and cities! In the past, the desert was just a piece of chicken ribs, but now the loan has turned into a cake! Using golden fingers to build a city is really a failure, at least it shouldn't be done in the early stage! You are the only lord, so what if you directly kill him and blame him on the robbers? This is equivalent to starting your own business and inviting people from the village to work! Be merciful!

This book is destined to be not good. There is not much writing style. It just turns a small desert and a city into a gathering place of multiple forces. Your own golden finger has allowed you to compete for hegemony, but as a result, you have been standing still, struggling with small things.