Konoha: Scientific Transformation of the Ninja World

I think it's very interesting and I support the author.

(Shennong is coming) Generally speaking, it is food and grass, and there are no poisonous spots to see.

Share the bad points and highlights. Poison Point 1: Loulan Dragon Vein travels through time and space This article has two paragraphs. The first paragraph is when Naruto travels to the protagonist's time and space. The second paragraph is when the protagonist travels to a parallel time and space. The first paragraph is very controversial. My personal opinion is: traveling through time and space is not about modifying history, but about witnessing and participating in history. Naruto from the future went back to the past to guide Minato to guard against the future villain. Although the butterfly is small, it may stir up a big wind. In the original time and space, because there was no protagonist to stabilize Loulan's dragon vein problem, he accidentally traveled through time and space. Now that the protagonist of time and space has helped Loulan stabilize the dragon's veins, will there be any problems? Even if there is another problem with the dragon vein in the future, wouldn't it be great if the protagonist helps? Why should we ask people from Konoha for help at all costs? If it was just to find a conflict point for the protagonist to leave Konoha, Minato could have discovered that the protagonist and Orochimaru had embezzled war supplies. When the fourth generation Hokage competed, the people involved in the arrest and interrogation began to be exposed. Instead of discovering future threats from the actions of a person who traveled back from the future! ! Parallel time and space, it feels like a side story. It is not recommended to write through the main line. . It might be better to write it directly as a side story. In a time and space where the protagonist has not traveled through, the story of a not-so-smart person getting help from a parallel time and space fan in his dream. Poison Point 2: Every author seems to have special treatment for Tsunade Orochimaru, the hope of the future, a researcher who believes in "science", the cornerstone of future science! Scorpion, a member of the Akatsuki organization and a puppet genius, can create human puppets that retain the limits of blood inheritance during life. After being trained by the protagonist and researching robots, Gundams, etc., The future is promising! ! Tsunade, granddaughter of the First Hokage, future Fifth Hokage, poison nemesis, medical ninja. No more, that's it. I didn't feel like there was anything special! Can one punch break Susanoo? It doesn't seem to have any effect on technology. . . I hope the author will be more creative. Anyway, I never thought there was anything special about Tsunade before. I just saw that many novels treated Tsunade specially. Recruit when you encounter them. The protagonist is also a medical ninja and is currently more powerful than Tsunade. Should he recruit Tsunade as his deputy? It's a pity to throw away tasteless food! Tsunade is more emotional than rational. When faced with her lover or the death of a loved one, she will escape and resort to drinking to drown her sorrows. Even after becoming the Fifth Hokage, she will still find opportunities to sneak out and drink to relax. Would such a person really focus on scientific research? ? Do you really have the patience for scientific research? ? Poison 3: The development of a great country. . . It doesn't mean that you can't develop in the Kingdom of Wind. But it doesn't feel so difficult! ! Because the title of the book seems to be a trap for Naruto's infrastructure, then the later period will most likely be the ninja village built by the protagonist to defeat the ninja villages of the five major countries. Another book "Defection from Konoha" Although they were also developed in the Kingdom of Earth, they defected openly and took away many Uchiha and Hinata people. Zhu Yu was the first, and it is not an exaggeration to join other blood successor limited families later. . Naruto is based on blood. Even if the protagonist has genetic research, if the children in the village want to become stronger in the future, they will still have to get a genetic injection to awaken the blood line. How to develop the Kingdom of Wind, Ice Escape Ninja? Molten ninja? How does a Lan Dun ninja join the Kingdom of Wind? . After all, the Kingdom of Wind is not our own country. The first thing to look at in infrastructure articles is definitely technology. The Country of Wind is very poor, and it all depends on the protagonist manipulating the Chamber of Commerce to support infrastructure construction? A big country? Lost everything. . I am not a Kazekage, so why would I spend so much money to support a country that does not belong to me? The second highlight is education. Most people like to watch the protagonist poach people from all over the world to establish the Chuunin Examination for the entire ninja world, with the five major countries participating. He was beaten up by various bloody successors in the protagonist's village. This book feels like a waste. . White, Kimimaro, and Red Lotus represent the Kingdom of Wind? Or the Sound Ninja Village? Highlight 1: Reincarnation from dirty soil = perpetual motion machine! Great. This is the business opportunity that modern people see. Highlight 2: People like annoying toads and Jiraiya Toad Immortal can predict the future and interfere with the future. He also became famous in the ninja world. . . Is a future that can be disrupted really the future? ? People just don't like predetermined fate, so they hate prophecies! Jiraiya and Naruto, after Orochimaru and Sasuke defected, both said that they must be captured back to Konoha and return to the right path. . They were very depressed because they themselves didn't like the way those in power in Konoha were traveling around the world. Then my friend wanted to go outside, but stopped him, as if the only right way had to be in Konoha, which was ridiculous. "I must bring him back" is too self-centered, and I can't understand that it is wrong to disagree with them. Highlight 3: Jiraiya, the troublemaker, died prematurely Everyone was happy that Jiraiya died prematurely. The protagonist's goal is to become the only god of ninjas. Jiraiya, who easily made predictions because of the kindness of a toad, and traveled around the world to collect information and find the child of destiny. For the plotter behind the protagonist, Jiraiya, the absence is an annoying existence. Don't ask how Naruto ended up with Mount Myoki after Jiraiya died, just ask how fate will guide him. The future is promising. 1. Naruto and Sasuke must not grow up in love with each other. That would be too poisonous. It would be better for Indra and Asura to have discordant atmospheres when they meet. 2. The issue of Naruto's talent. Although Naruto is accompanied by his mother in this book, he still doesn't want to see a genius Naruto. . The vast majority of Naruto fans are fans of Naruto's biography, not Boruto's! ! Isn't the genius Naruto Boruto? ! ! 3. I still hope that the protagonist can build his own Ninja Village, or cultivate "Jade" with Orochimaru. Retrieve various rare blood from the ninja world to inherit the limited and secret family. The Global Village is a ninja village that possesses all of Naruto's bloodline limits. 4. When the Chuunin Examination for the entire Ninja World is held in the future, I hope that the Ninja Village that has absorbed so many Ninja clans will not be defeated by the top 12 of Konoha. . To be honest, among the twelve strongest geniuses in Konoha, Neci and Lee may have the most outstanding combat power. Naruto and Sasuke may be a little better than ordinary people if they don't cheat. . Although I don't like to add many original characters, it is unscientific to absorb many ninjas and only take part in the final Chuunin exams, and lose them all to Konoha. . It is obvious that the blood-succession limited ninjas who appear in the anime are stronger than Konoha chunin as long as they are awakened. Coupled with the training of the protagonist, if this is not as good as those false geniuses, you can tell those ninjas that they are hopeless. He is really a pseudo-genius in peacetime. The number of people who have passed the level is far more than the contestants from other Ninja Villages. It's outrageous.

A very good book, but why write about the Eternals? Since Women's Federation 3, the storylines in the Marvel Universe have basically been movies put together correctly by the fair-faced Masako. Hey kid, the Supreme Mage is disgusting to a lot of people, and the emergence of the Eternals is even more disgusting. Same-sex, still gay.

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I found that the comment section is too violent, and it kills the whole family at every turn? Except for her status as a member of the clan, this eldest lady is not worthy of the protagonist in any way. Instead, the protagonist uses her to buy a lot of development time for himself. At least as a friend who grew up together, even if he raises a kitten or puppy, he still has feelings after raising it for more than ten years! Are you talking about the protagonist not being a dark villain? He is just a researcher. He is just indifferent and has his own three views. He left Konoha and Hinata because decay is not suitable for him. He must become a murderer? There is so much fighting and killing in the adult world, why don't you have the energy to do the things you like, do research, do experiments, and specialize in ninjutsu? Looking like a junior high school student who would kill the whole family if someone looks at me and scolds me, his anger is too strong! I think it's good that I didn't kill him. Just like how Orochimaru treated Anko in the original novel, didn't he also kill him? Anyway, we haven't interacted much since we left. We are still considered ordinary friends. We can exchange a few words when we meet. As long as you don't block my way, I won't bother to care about you. If you really want to block my way, I will just take care of you!

Then I saw an Uchiha Itachi below. Drunk, can Konoha compare to the country? Patriotic? So do you love the country of fire? It can only be regarded as a military organization. It's like a military base in the United States. Uchiha Itachi is considered a genius, but he has been so severely brainwashed. His outlook on life is seriously flawed, and his handling methods are also seriously flawed. Without Naruto trying to escape and convince Nagato, the Fire Nation would have been destroyed. His own handling method led to the loss of three kaleidoscopes: Shisui, himself, and Fuqiu. He ran to help the masked man, but the masked man killed two shadow-level combatants. He ran to help the enemy, and he was drunk without distinguishing between right and wrong. This way of love is really unworthy of the Fire Nation. And Sasuke. The other gods gave it to Naruto and wanted to turn Sasuke into a dog. This is what Sasuke did in his previous life. I have such a brother. In comparison, Obito is the one who can truly be whitewashed. From the rear of the small crane. The tribe laughed at him. Others in the class also laughed at him. Only Lin takes him seriously. It seemed to me that he was sane. The only question is why are you prepared to indulge in illusions??? Wouldn't it be better to resurrect directly? But thinking about Konoha's belief that resurrection is playing with the minds of the dead. Maybe Obito likes the brain-in-a-vat theory? (Don't talk about the fourth generation. Do you have any impressions of your elementary school teachers? Obito graduated at the age of nine and went to the battlefield. The teacher who leads the team is also the relationship between the boss. This teacher is just a teacher, and no ninjutsu can be learned from the teacher. Kakashi and Sasuke are direct disciples, while Naruto and Kakashi are not direct disciples.)

Hurry up and let the protagonist crack the bird in the dragon. The separation is really tragic.

It's okay, take your time and don't rush. Don't try to do any ninjutsu when the time comes. Personally, I tend to specialize. If you want to specialize in nintaijutsu, your energy is limited. Even if the blood successor snare is synthesized, it only needs to have profound attributes.

There is no way to make do with the bad times, with the name of a tiger head and the writing of a snake tail.

I just saw the front. . Just wanted to ask. The protagonist's political remarks are really controversial, and there are more to come. . Everything else is fine. This is the part I really want to skip. . And forget it once. Come again several times. Then it will be discussed by readers every time. It's really a big deal.

I don't want to watch Marvel anymore after seeing it. I'm really annoyed by Marvel now.

I feel that the setting of Byakugan is a bit poisonous You can see through, farsight, and have super dynamic vision. You actually engage in melee combat with others, and you even choose people to sell their pulses You have such great dynamic vision, why don't you just distance yourself and engage in long-range attacks? Turn on the aim and enchant the weapon to shoot you to death from a few kilometers away But you just play close combat with others, and even come up with a Bagua 140 Palms or something. You can hit him more than 100 times against someone weaker than you, why don't you just stab him to death with a knife, and hit him more than 100 times to waste your energy To deal with someone who is more powerful than you, he will kill you before you can hit him. I feel mentally retarded just thinking about it.

The plot is getting more and more complicated. What do you want to write?

It is really bad luck to be the subordinate of this protagonist. In the Land of Fire, he will be captured and tortured at every turn Although the protagonist has the ability to subvert the ninja world, he will only be condemned by the Fire Nation officials. Several times in a row. It seems that it is to maintain the development of the original plot. Konoha must provide it.

The author might as well just weaken the protagonist's plug-in, because such a powerful plug-in would result in poor playability. I have so much knowledge from perverted scientists, not to mention other people. If you can make good use of Stark's weapon knowledge, which one in the ninja world can defeat you? There is also a shortage of energy. It's a bit confusing to have a shortage of energy with Stark around?

Just use this and replace it with a better one.

What people who read this novel should want to see is not Otsutsuki and the Tsangshengan but Asura One-Horned Sen violently beating Uchiha Madara, and the teleportation gun shooting Obito.

I don't know why, I feel like I can't stand it anymore

The first chapter was really okay, but in Chapter 37, he really pulled his crotch, and the protagonist's character suddenly collapsed. This is a story about scientific transformation of the ninja world, but the protagonist himself does not even understand the most basic historical materialism. Wars are caused by weapons. This view is outrageous. In the era of cold weapons, without superpowers or ninjutsu, would there be no wars on earth and people would die? This is like someone killing someone with a knife and blaming the knife instead of trying the murderer. Too bad...

The End of Ninja World is better to write about other anime than about Marvel.

This article has little to do with the system. Too much scientist knowledge is of no use. The card draw is unexpectedly non-existent. Scientific research basically produces whatever it wants. It's been a bit of a mess since it was released, and the key plot protagonists have only been missed rather than changed, but the rest is fine.

It's also good to end things at the right time. It's better than forcing water injection to delay time, or running to other worlds to continue the work.

The ninja world is over, you can delete the book

I have inherited so many black technologies. Do research. It is too slow to just plant chakra fruit trees. How can I catch up with Otsutsuki? For example, study how chakra fruit trees convert the absorbed sunlight. Isn't the sun a huge energy source?

The Marvel part is unexpectedly interesting, please update it soon

I've given you three monthly passes. Let's add more and make more updates.

Will he go to other worlds? Gkd.

Isn't it almost over? Why is there Marvel?

It seems that Tsunade's marriage is still open to Hashirama.