Wasteland Echoer

My overall thoughts after reading "The Wasteland Echoers" "The Wasteland Echoers" is a wasteland fantasy novel. The world view of this book is fantasy - wasteland - Cthulhu. The author constructed a huge world system. In the book, the author wrote two sets of power systems, one is the promotion system of the steam world (imperial army), and the other is a magic system composed of five elemental forces and three upper elemental forces. At the same time, there are 16 professional sequences and monster sequences of the magic source sequence group. There are more than 200 sequential gods and more than 1,000 sequential monsters in the wasteland world. Although the author may not necessarily write them all, looking at the numbers alone can tell the author's ambition (some of them have been written so far). Let's talk about the opening chapters first. The author gets into the mood very quickly. He has a good grasp of the description of the scene after time travel and the psychological changes of the protagonist, and shows readers enough of the otherworldly features. Personally, I think this opening chapter is attractive enough. Tell me the overall advantages of this book. The author's writing skills are relatively outstanding. Although he is not the most outstanding, he can definitely surpass most writers. What is gratifying is that the author made few mistakes in wording and punctuation, making the reading experience extremely comfortable. Moreover, the author of this book is accustomed to using delicate descriptions and has a good grasp of the details of things. Although some readers reported that writing this way would be a bit cumbersome, to be honest, writing this way is correct. Only by paying attention to details can the world view be more perfectly presented to readers. The author has done an excellent job in shaping the characters. The characters rarely use intelligence during the plot, and most of the logical decisions they make are reasonable. Moreover, the minor characters are not tool men, they all have their own personalities and abilities. As far as the plot is concerned, the author started to lay down the foreshadowing from the first chapter, and then basically filled in the holes previously filled. The world view is also quite complete, and the content of the world view is supplemented between the lines. Let's talk about some problems with this book. The author did not do a good job in controlling the rhythm of the plot and elaborating information in the early stage. In the first part, due to the protagonist's lack of information, the presentation of the world view seemed a bit fragmented. Of course, this is correct in terms of plot logic. No time traveler can understand the situation of the entire world in just the first few chapters. However, the author added a lot of nouns and worldview explanations in the early stage, and more names (names of places, names of people) appeared. In addition, the author often uses hallucinations, dreams, and perspective changes to write, making it difficult for readers to absorb such a large amount of information in a short period of time. Although it is a rough line, readers' doubts may be answered later, but it is easy for readers to feel confused in the early stage, and the reading experience is not very good, and it seems a bit fragmented (the author has an encyclopedia related to the work, but it is not complete, and some things require readers to read carefully to smooth them out) Finally, let me talk about my overall feelings about this book and the author. First of all, I like that the author arranged the number of chapters to be more than 3,000 words, which will make reading more smooth and coherent. Judging from the updates, the author updates once a day on average, which doesn't seem like much, but for such fine writing, more than 3,000 words a day is pretty good. Secondly, the writing style of this book is my favorite type. The writing is delicate, and the narrative is not always a single line. It uses perspective changes, the overall tone is dark, and there are occasional gags. Finally, the author has a very good attitude, which is the most praiseworthy. If a reader raises a question, the author will answer it seriously. Moreover, you can also see the author's hand-drawn map in the book circle, which shows how serious he is about his work. Overall, this book is an excellent work. Although it has flaws, it is worth reading.

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I was poisoned by a paragraph in Chapter 88, "The end of science is theology, and this is the eternal truth." What kind of cult allusion does this truth come from?

I can't stand it anymore. It's so confusing. Can you find a few people to take a look at the first few chapters before posting them? It's a mess. I feel like I keep throwing away the setting. The plot just follows the setting. The story line is also messy. Can't I start from daily life? It's really unexpected. The protagonist needs to decipher the secrets, understand the world, and what happened before the death of the original owner. In the end, he has to forcibly set up a very nonsensical plot. He has to keep throwing away the setting, both order and red magic power. He keeps emphasizing that the most important thing is the dialogue. The writing is really bad. It's a narration-style dialogue, a fool-like dialogue, and there is no plot at all. The setting has no vitality at all, and the tour guide's introduction to the scenic spots is not so rigid. The characters are also unclear. I can't understand the character of the protagonist. It is very contradictory. In the first part, it is said that he loves new world exploration and adventure in his genes. However, in the later plot, the protagonist is written like a fool. He is always in a trance, asking questions in his heart. He doesn't know what he is doing. Even giving a gun to an unintentional person can make up for his guilt. Isn't that thing a zombie? I can understand the nausea, I can understand the fear, what the hell is guilt, and I'm still trembling. That's all, the German just slightly questioned what happened to the protagonist. Did the author forget that this was a wasteland, and forgot about the previous descriptions of dilapidation? You can't just pull someone out of the wasteland like this, right? I was trying to fix my gun, but I forgot to load the bullet, I was trembling, feeling guilty, and whining. Is this really a serious act? It's completely different from the character design. There's also the issue of two souls in the protagonist's body. Why is it not described but added in the comments? What a drama.

What on earth is going to be talked about... After reading more than 30 chapters, I don't understand what the author wants to do... Everyone knows about the so-called red magic source except the protagonist 😅. There is obviously something wrong with the protagonist. He will believe someone when he sees him. He reveals that he often dreams if he sees someone. Sequence of Gods, Sequence of Monsters, Rank, Lost, Heartless Man, Magic Power, Magician, Extraordinary System, Steam System, a messy upgrade system. They all seem to be upgrade systems, but there is no unified name. They all seem to be different. I haven't made it clear what I want to express... There are two things in total. The sequence upgrade system. The strange red magic source power in the protagonist's body. More than thirty chapters, but one thing has not been expressed clearly... There is endless watering. I want to express the world's power system, so it is mixed with endless and meaningless power introductions. This thinking and story development are really like no one. There is no story outline? The plot of the story is so twisted, a piece of paper is filled with words, and it feels like it's crumpled into a ball so people can guess what's written. I won't get away with a low score.

This book seems to be relatively slow-moving I have been following this book since I was in college. The system in it is huge, but I can see the author's careful thinking What I like most is the pursuit and exploration of truth brought about by the changes in people's hearts. I hope readers can be more patient and stay true to the end The author will update soon

Doesn't the author think it's outrageous? Chapter 5 and Chapter 1 completely ruined all the good feelings I had given me before... Everything was a coincidence... An inexplicable coincidence. The protagonist suddenly becomes wise. The boss who suspected the protagonist one second died to protect the suspected person the next second? ? ? ... There is also the protagonist who lacks knowledge but asks his boss to test his knowledge in order to prove his identity... As well as the unexpected oracle and the sudden appearance of the organization. To be honest, even in the early stage when the protagonist was just hanging out in the city fighting monsters and exploring the world, I thought this was a good book. What about now? There is so much information inexplicably in one chapter, everything is damn inexplicable, and there are a bunch of Riddlers guessing each other... The world view suddenly changed from this charming city to a game of gods, a conspiracy, the protagonist stands in the center of the storm, a high probability savior... Oh, by the way, the only insider is dead, the protagonist will probably go back to the city to make up lies... I would rather the protagonist explore this charming world with an upgraded golden finger to defeat monsters than watch an inexplicable conspiracy or a sudden situation... I'm tired, bye bye!

The book is very good, with brilliant writing, majestic atmosphere, and exciting plot. It depicts a fantasy world and has the appearance of a masterpiece. I hope you will stick with it and update more! Come on!

There are too many riddles in the front, and I feel like I have discouraged many people from doing so. I feel so tired after listening to them.

No wonder my grades were not good. I thought it was because the subject matter was too niche. I couldn't even finish the free chapters. It was so boring. Even I, who really like this kind of subject, felt the same, let alone others.

Abandoned, there is too much nonsense. Don't you think the contents of the history book in Chapter 2 and (The Origin of Magic Source) are partly the same? 🤤 In the end, the protagonist still complained about it, and he couldn't like the protagonist anymore, an inexplicable savior 🤤

Is the author still updating? If you don't update, you will be in trouble 😥

It's very well written. It's a pity that good books are not popular. It has a very fantasy flavor and the writing is sophisticated.

Look at Mayfly Him He stirred up the wind and sand At any cost To break into the unknown horror True and false are intertwined Find a piece of rotten dead wood Engraved with an immortal myth Mayflies stirred up the wind and sand The hero kept up with the devil Alternative elegance The demon-slaying knife pierced the heart Looking back with a smile He fell with the devil A new era sprouts slowly I have seen him fill up the cliff with his body Small and great That moment is magnificent This life and death moment Even if the ending withers into sand Let hope sprout on the ruins "Ants Build a Tower" He Huahua

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I read it a long time ago. I have two monthly passes for you first. The author has perseverance.

Touching the Wright in my heart, I will definitely finish the painting in my lifetime (.)

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After reading dozens of chapters, I feel good and meet my appetite, but the stock is not enough now. Although the daily updates are stable, they are too few. After all, writing of this quality is not easy (I have written 800,000 words in 7 years, and I have a deep understanding of this) If it is almost finished, someone can give it a kick after seeing this post

I was too confused in the early stages of reading this book. I have listened to the book until chapter 55. It seems that everyone has a bad purpose for the protagonist. Whether it is the general or Natasha's Tenin sect, it feels like they all have ulterior motives.

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I just came in and haven't started reading yet. I feel a little uneasy when I look at the 0 monthly pass.

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Thank you for giving me a screwdriver for the 6 monthly votes. I will add more at the beginning of next month.