
Pirate Ship Spirit System
海贼之船灵系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 989k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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447Chapters
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The Invincible Author of the Fantasy World
You must have brushed this silver cuteness yourself.
Let's go, let's go. It was good at first, but when Nick Robin came on the scene, he started to have a literary problem and couldn't stop.
It's so pretentious. A modern person who has been washed away by various ideas on the Internet, travels into a ship, and knows that he is in the world of One Piece. How can he be so pretentious?
There is something wrong with it. The writing is weird, especially the plot when Nico Robin meets is too watery. It is impossible for Robin to trust people casually, and Luo Bin is also smart. The self-righteous inhumanity of the protagonist is also weak to describe. How can it be inhumane if someone has thoughts, and still has human memory? What is the purpose of not having contact with any intelligent life?
The writing is very good. I hope I don't become Wang Lufei's licking dog. I also have a copy of Qidian.
It's awesome that you can keep going like this. The protagonist's mind is equal to the author's mind. The protagonist's strength is very weak. When writing about Becky, the best way to unfreeze is to let Robin leave. But the author insists on letting Robin, who has grown up to four years old, appear in front of them. He has already passed by the lieutenant general before, and now he has to run out. Alas, I can walk, but I won't. I just want to leave a handle in their hands, and I just want to cooperate with them. This is what the author wants. No wonder the results are not good. Anyway, the protagonist is either on the way to being beaten or being beaten. As mentioned before, Robin's fruit ability only requires basic physical training. He needs to develop more joint skills. No matter how awesome the joint skills are, he is not strong enough. Can he defeat enemies several times stronger than him by using them? When your physical fitness becomes stronger and your strength becomes stronger, wouldn't it be even stronger if you use joint techniques?
It didn't feel exciting and the plot was weird. And there is obviously the intention to suppress the protagonist I said before that the number of souls required to kill sea beasts is 2 Add a skill and it will be 8 souls After the system update, it is as if the protagonist forgot to hunt sea beasts and pirates to become stronger And the title of the book is Ship Spirit, and the protagonist has a human form, which I can accept. But it can't always be human-shaped, right? Wouldn't it be better to just add a ship-shaped firepower coverage form? And the plot is too bland.
Well! The writing style is okay, but the literary flavor is too strong, and the pace is too fast. It just has to find troubles for the protagonist constantly, and every time it is very thrilling and there is no sense of excitement. There are cheats. Normal people's IQs will know that if they are willing to give up, or they will find the right opportunity to get fat, they will know that every time they fight for three melons and two dates, the author will cheat. Originally the subject matter and angle were good, but it turned out to be very uncomfortable and uncomfortable to watch.
Too literary and youthful The author is taking the protagonist's mentality for granted, but has he really considered that a time traveler who traveled to another world and became a non-human, living alone for half a year, would really have a sense of identity with the local indigenous people? Especially when the souls of local indigenous people are the material he needs, in this case he will just keep convincing himself that they are just aliens, humanoid creatures from another world.
The settings are good, but it's this skill. The more I look at it, the more fucked up I feel. The more I look at it, the more I feel like these skills are for fighting, not a ship.
The introduction should read: "Where's Robin?" Protagonist: "Shh, she's taking a shower."
I saw Chapter 24 and I can't stand it anymore.
Is it a waste of money to buy an account specifically to make money? 😅 Based on the content of your book.
Damn it, can this book have a silver alliance? The boss is confused
Book now and add a ticket I hope you finish writing your story To be honest, I look like the male protagonist, but I didn't keep my Nico Robin
Capone Becky is quite a failure. He still wants to cooperate with the protagonist after doing this? Design a navy to surround the protagonist. If the protagonist has the ability to escape, will he be killed later? If you ask the protagonist to let go of this grudge, then you, the author, are disgusting the readers. The protagonist's IQ so far is hard for me to believe that he is an adult. I am the protagonist and ran directly to another island after fighting off Veidt. There was Nico Robin on the ship and she was already exposed. I am speechless.
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I guess, in the latest chapter, the information has been updated. Luffy's rubber fruit has been renamed to the Human Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Nika form. I'm blindly guessing that a wave of pirate fans will write about this fruit. I'll wait for one to write it well and I'll go take a look.
Okay, okay, much better than most studios, innovative settings are good
Isn't Pluto underground in Wano? The appearance of Pluto means the founding of Wano.
As soon as you write this, you start writing emotional dramas. Brother, for these young brats, please take care of the cognition of us modern people. We don't want to pay much attention to emotional dramas for children. What the hell are you writing? Especially when the navy went to other people's ships to arrest people, the conversation was too embarrassing for them. Why don't you just leave? You are such a holy mother, acting as a patron and setting up a memorial arch. Do you focus on writing? The emotional scene was written more carefully than the fight, and a few people were interested.
The setting is quite good, but the first dozen chapters have been emphasizing the author's half-hearted exploration of human nature. It's really poisonous
Once a piece of history is translated, the world government will be gone emmm
Keep up the good work, monthly tickets will be given away!
Versailles, who seems to be the actual king of bronze: "Consistent efforts and a life without slacking off. You have to believe that in this long life, as long as you make up your mind to do something, it is never too late."
Damn, it turned out to be this little trash.
I thought I would kill decisively and not be verbose, but I talked a lot of nonsense, couldn't write psychological dialogues, and fell into a pit unwilling to come up! It's really unbearable! Can't hold on Chapter 30
1.88 People weigh 55 kilograms?
I don't quite understand why you don't buy the materials, or chop some wood yourself, is that considered exercise?
The protagonist is in trouble in the early stage and cannot get out of trouble, so he is speechless and frustrated.