Douluo: Shocked, I Became Bibi Dong

I suddenly had an idea. I could refer to the "Starting from Blue Silver Grass" next door. The "side effects" of martial soul fusion skills will produce a psychology of submission and dependence on people in a dominant position. Otherwise, Liu Erlong's licking would be so humble that I can't stand it. Anyway, I think the master might really be able to escape, otherwise how would the things Tang Wu gave the master be given to Tang San. After the competition, the "side effects" of the martial soul fusion skills can be announced, which will make people convinced and dependent. It probably means implying that Liu Erlong's love for the master is fake, and then asking her to abandon the master, you know what I mean. There are pictures below the original text

Although the introduction is not very pleasing, the content is very good. There are some minor flaws in the book, but the overall writing is very good. When I read this book, I imagined myself as Tang San in it. When I grow up, and understand what society is and what responsibility is, society cannot be without order. Just do whatever you want. It can only be said that what Tang San did is what Americans are doing now. That is destined to not end well, so I hope you can support the author more.

It's good. After all, the logic is perfect, the plot is exciting, and it makes people enjoy watching it. Some of the Douluo fics I read earlier relied on their subjective dislike of Tang San and other things to make them disgusted with Tang San. I won't tell you why, I can't stand it at all. The author Tai Long Aotian is very knowledgeable. This book is much better, and the reasons are explained more clearly. Although there are some flaws in some places, such as typos, it does not affect the overall masterpiece. When I saw that the protagonist thought that Tang San was just a small stumbling block, he changed his mind and then enlarged the layout. This book instantly rose to a new level. It's good, please update it quickly.

Finally found a Douluo fan novel without CP 🤭 Come on, author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧I'm optimistic about you

Author, you are a legend. I can't understand this book, but I was deeply shocked. Author, you are free. Nothing in this world can restrain you. Remember, you are free. You just have to keep moving forward and moving forward.

It was gone before I knew it (finished reading)

It's been several days since I updated two chapters.

Bibi Dong can be said to be a relatively miserable person. She was locked up in a small dark room by her master and raped until she became pregnant. He was afraid that she would harm herself and harm the child in her belly. She was tied up after giving birth and was not released until she gave birth to the child. It's not bad that a girl in her 10s or 20s is not crazy if she is betrayed and treated like this by her master. Many people say that she treats Qian Renxue badly. But everyone doesn't want to think about it. When they see this child, they will think of their own painful past. This child is still the enemy.

Qianxunji is definitely not a forbidden lover of Bibi Dong, otherwise Bibi Dong would not have been a woman with only one daughter for so many years, and she regarded Bibi Dong as a member of the Wuhun Hall. Bibi Dong wanted to elope with Yu Xiaogang, so Qianxunji wanted to destroy Bibi Dong's love, so he forced her to get pregnant, so that she would not be able to leave the Wuhun Hall to find Yu Xiaogang. Normal people are so in love that they are ready to elope. If they suddenly break up, they will definitely ask for the reason and have to be entangled for a long time. Yu Xiaogang must know that it doesn't matter if he looks at the information. If he really abducts Bibi Dong, Wuhun Palace will definitely kill him, so he quickly escapes from Wuhun Palace. Anyway, he has finished using the information of Wuhun Palace. He is an old scumbag.

Bo Saixi makes me feel like a prostitute. Other people's martial souls are the reflection of one's own power, but her martial soul is actually the projection of a man... It's so funny. It would be fine if she was projecting a god with no emotions, but the one she projected was a "false god" with a mortal heart (seven emotions and six desires) and corrupt morals. Whoever is with her, wears this cuckold every day...

If I'm not a ghost mother, I wouldn't be able to write this kind of thing

I have read more than two hundred and nearly three hundred chapters, and I am not even a disciple! Who is to blame? It's not the author's fault for not updating too much! Can you still blame me for being a high V? You can't, right? So, in the final analysis, there should be more.

Cherish these. The author has saved the manuscript and posted it. I plan to stop updating and take a rest. Don't disturb the author and let him rest 😆

The synopsis of other people's "Swallowing Starry Sky" fanfics usually says "We don't steal the protagonist's resources, we are friends, and we will develop together" Even the fanfics where the protagonist is the villain do not kill Luo Feng in the end, nor do they touch Luo Feng's family. As soon as I arrived at Douluo, the introduction said "I won't worship the master, I won't be sweet to Tang San, I won't join the group" or even abuse Tang San, don't join Tang San's party! I was wondering, why is there such a difference? Emotionally, Luo Feng is single-minded and has never had any entanglements with anyone other than the heroine. In the Earth Age, Luo Feng, as a warrior, fought life and death against monsters for the survival of humans on Earth! In the crisis of the golden-horned giant beast, he fought against the golden-horned giant beast regardless of his life and death. Does he have no way out? No, he has a way out! But he still said goodbye to his lover and family without hesitation, and fought for mankind on earth! In the cosmic era, it is more about overcoming obstacles for the human race in the universe, fighting the most powerful enemies, and holding up hope for mankind. How broad your mind is and how lofty your plan is. There are also shortcomings, but they are not dirty thoughts. Looking at Tang San again... I'm too lazy to write, this character is really unlikable anyway.

What surprised me about this book is that the author wrote the entry point of the fan fiction and the personality replacement between himself and the characters around him after Bibi Dong was replaced. Writing fan fiction is difficult. First of all, when you write fan fiction, it is bound to not surpass the original work. More importantly, if the author introduces too many personal settings, the relationship between the characters will easily become rigid and uncoordinated. The author's entry point and development have always given people the impression that "it just needs to be justified and reasonable." Originally, when I saw the repeated plots of dungeon grinding and land reclamation, I felt that the author was about to become indifferent and the book was about to fall into a dry period. As a result, the daughter suddenly said "Don't take risks, I don't want to see you die" and suddenly saved the plot that was about to collapse. I feel that the author should be capable. After finishing this book, if the author summarizes his experience and tries to write a novel independently, I would still be willing to try to follow the book. In 2016, when Nai Qi's "Cultivation Chat Group" was not popular yet, I was determined to pursue the book. However, after thousands of chapters became popular, I gave up after realizing that Nai Qi was desperately trying to squeeze out his only popular novel. I think you, the author, are a little better at dealing with interpersonal relationships, plot framework, and rhythm and progress than Nai Qi, who wrote two books at that time. Generally speaking, the plot development speed of this book is in a relatively comfortable range.

Shocked I finally found someone writing this

The Pope is the most beautiful

The author's updates have been slowed down for a period of time due to physical reasons, and the manuscript has been posted. I hope everyone can understand!

Np As long as there are no big poisonous points (such as getting married), no tj This update is directed at you. From now on, all my votes will be yours.

One star for writing, three stars for plot, two stars for characters, and four stars for setting. To be honest, I actually finished reading it. I really didn't expect that the author's writing style could be so bad. Just like when I first read the novel, I thought I was good enough to write it. Moreover, from the first chapter to the end, the writing style didn't improve at all. For example, after Tang San succeeded the Rakshasa God, his evil smile almost drove me crazy. The plot is also brainless, the relationship between the characters is developed in a flash, and they directly become the most important person to her. The fighting scenes are also boring and boring, and there are many poisonous points, but at least they are not fatal. Character To be honest, you talked about how Tang San was, but in the end you became like Tang San, turning the God Realm into your home. Same double standards. The only thing I like about it is that the futures of those characters are more in line with what I want. The only thing I like is the setting, the transformation into Lily, but the plot of your transformation into Lily is only after 500 chapters, and it is still a flash in the pan. When it comes out after 100 chapters, it will be very speechless.

This book is not suitable for spending money to read. There is too much nonsense and too much wisdom. Deleting two hundred chapters will not affect reading. The novel has a few merits, but overall it is still not good. Various illogical plots such as forced intelligence reduction frequently appear. Summary completed, burn the paper.

Qian Renxue mine

Brothers, am I a pervert? I don't like to watch Douluo Dalu, but I like to watch fanfiction. Without him, I just like the feeling of watching Tang Monk being tortured! Hahaha

I've been reading this for so long, but I didn't expect to see it again on Random Reading today. I'm panting like an ox and having a small anus, hahaha😂

This book is surprisingly beautiful! The protagonist's IQ is online! The plot is exciting but not boring! The character relationships are also handled very well!

I just saw it on the shelves and I can only say it's great. It can be seen that the author has researched the original work and wrote it from the perspective of the villain. Grasping the plot requires great planning and layout skills. Seeing that it is basically not broken so far, I hope the author can continue as usual!

Author, actually I just want to ask, why can't you read Douluo and Xiaogang anymore?

❤️Bibi Dong❤️

There is a new book. Douluo: Tang San has just ascended, and the second level of vision has been opened. It's just a little bit less, just the first two days...