I'm Completely at Odds with Tiandao

The writing is good, and the character of the protagonist is very distinct.

The poisonous points in this article are updated from time to time based on comments from book friends for encouragement (updated on February 9, 2022). 1. The setting is not clear enough and conflicts with the later plot. 2. There is too much psychological description in the early stage, showing off the writing style and pretending to be mysterious. 3. The introduction of a late-stage setting like Tianzun at the beginning of the chapter is too poisonous. 4. The character of the protagonist is not clear. He is said to be black but not black, and he is said to be white but not white. He is forced to show off.

The daily poisoning is indeed extraordinary. My relatives died before. When I killed Ah Qi, I said that people will have weaknesses if they have family ties. Unfortunately, I didn't. When the ghost clan died, I wrote that there was no one trustworthy person or ghost in the world. I was soft-hearted and saved the young lady. One life is enough. I just like her because of her obvious name in Chapter 6. I hope that the lady will later find out that the protagonist is the mastermind behind the annihilation of her family and there will be some love and death scenes. The author has made it clear that there is a heroine. What is the use of all the foreshadowing? In the first chapter, he was soft-hearted and saved the young lady. In the third chapter, he showed that he had no weaknesses. Then at the end, a figure flashed through his mind? Chapter 5: That ghost is dead and there is no trustworthy person in the world. It is true that he has become proficient in self-contradiction.

It's so difficult to write novels, especially stand-alone. Do you have any brothers or sisters who can report on this?

It is the first time for an old Taoist priest to write a book, so he is very immature. I hope my friends who are reading can give me some pointers. Thank you very much!

The writing is good and the plot is quite compact!

How to say it? This kind of writing. Although I didn't watch it, you will only suffer a loss and will definitely die miserably. The way of heaven is very powerful.

There are so many things going on in the old age_(:з∠)_