I Can Charge up My Strength and Defeat All Enemies with One Sword

The author's writing style seems to be that of a newcomer, not quite like a vest. The plot description is also relatively blunt in connecting the previous and the next. In terms of characterization, the author had better think carefully about what kind of protagonist he wants to describe. At least the protagonist's personality shown in the first three or five chapters will never be on the stage in this life in the real world.

In fact, from the title and introduction of the book, it is obvious that the readers came here just to show off, but as a result, there are all sorts of things in the book, and the protagonist is also wretched, always shrinking and doing stupid things. If you ask me to say that the protagonist is not as good as the original owner, at least he still knows how to make progress. The original owner is definitely better than the protagonist.

Believe me, not many people would like to see a protagonist who becomes a weakling after one hit.

I hope the author doesn't change the setting of Goldfinger. In fact, the biggest highlight of this book is that he only has the power of one blow. How does the protagonist use his wisdom to pretend to be successful or kill successfully when he only has the power of one blow? If you later upgrade Goldfinger to his strength, how will it be different from the Goldfinger in other books? It's just a matter of changing the map and fighting monsters.

Let's talk about our point of view. You hold a nuclear bomb in your hand. As an ordinary person, you can explode the power of the nuclear bomb just by throwing it. However, the opponent holds a gun or even a rocket launcher at you from a distance. You will be killed without seeing it and can't dodge. In the same way, during your Qi training period, even if you can explode the attack power of a Nascent Soul monk, but your defense is not good, a golden elixir will kill you in seconds.

I have been studying for many years, and this is the first time I have seen such a protagonist. His writing skills are so good that he can write such trash.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​:​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: And the author's own comments and comments posted by the author, asked whether the plot develops too fast? Do you want to slow down? I was a little confused after reading Chapter 7. Did you say the pace was fast? Seven chapters have passed and I haven't seen any interesting points. People say that if the novel is good, just read the first three chapters. In the first chapter, the original protagonist is because something big is going to happen to the sect, but he is a waste and can't do anything. He wants to force an upgrade but fails, and then the protagonist comes over. Chapter 2 talks about the protagonist's own plug-in ability to store power after time travel. To be honest, this ability can only be said to be average. Compared with the gold fingers worn by travelers in other novels, this plug-in is really average. This plug-in can also allow the protagonist to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger with this ability. However, this plug-in really does not deserve the label of invincible. The author's labeling of this is purely to sell dog meat.

It's chapter 35, and I feel like the author is a potential newbie with a lot of ideas in his mind, but he doesn't express them well. 🙂🙂 In my experience, generally if an author like this keeps writing, after finishing one book, the second one will be very good.

The protagonist, the plug-in author, was under too much pressure, and the plug-in mechanism was unclear. According to my understanding, if a normal attack is 1 point of damage, and a normal attack after charging is 2 points of damage, it is really awesome that it can be charged infinitely. In the Qi refining stage, even if the damage doubles for each level, if the protagonist's fifth Qi refining damage is 1, the damage of the ninth Qi refining is only 16. As a result, he couldn't even beat a ninth-level Qi practitioner to death. He was speechless. Of course, if the difference at each level is more than double, I didn't say it. I hope the author will write it more clearly.

What I wrote after entering the underworld is simply unsightly 🙏 Farewell

Why do you want to help that Tu? He is neither a relative nor an acquaintance. Isn't he the guide you went to the city to find? She was inexplicably kind to him, first promising to connect him with the Sun family, then leading him to the path of immortality, and finally helping to solve the problem of whether the protagonist was his father or he was the protagonist's father!

The setting of making the protagonist weak after one hit really takes away from the protagonist's intelligence. However, the author just made the protagonist a useless person, so after reading it, forget it, I didn't continue reading😓

Come on, writer, keep at it, someone will read it

Why are you using Shuangwen's plug-in and not feeling happy at all? (눈_눈)

I wanted to write about the protagonist's journey from weak to strong, but unfortunately the writing was not enough, which only made it awkward. Although it is a fairy tale, many elements are missing.

Your novel is difficult to become popular. It's all mixed up and the plot jumps up and down. There's no standard for accumulating power, but it's said to be invincible. It feels like you have to fight tooth and nail whenever you encounter an enemy! A Qi Refining Period is too exaggerated to describe. A small realm at the beginning, no matter how many levels it is, there won't be much difference at all! Otherwise, how will you write later? It's not as good as Invincible, a cool novel where the protagonist is both strong and weak. In short, it's just not that exciting and the plot is too confusing!

This ability can only be used to bully people in the author's article. In another world, such as the ruthless people, monsters and monsters in Weird, Samsara Paradise, etc., If it is one level higher, others will either outwit you or kill you, and you will not be able to react. It is useless for you to accumulate power for ten thousand years. If you don't improve your own level and just rely on side tricks to act like a hero, you will end sooner or later.

The idea is good, but it's a pity that the protagonist is cowardly and unintelligent. There are too many internal dramas in vain. The writing style of Shaozi is not as good as Jiangnan. It can't make people sympathize with him. It only makes people think that he is an idiot. The protagonist of Xianxia can be weak, but it cannot be too much lower than the average of the protagonists of normal novels. Have you seen Zhou Yu in Five Hundred Guo Jingli? Zhou Yu is a timid and fearful person with a small vision and no independent opinion. He has desires for money and sex but gives up as soon as there is trouble. Xiaofu Ji'an will just lie flat and rot. Because this is an urban novel, readers can see his ordinary and hidden kindness, and see the figure of all living beings today in him. Although Zhou Yu cannot be held up by mud, he does not have bad intentions. In addition, there are many metaphors about society in the article, so early readers still discussed and read it enthusiastically. But even for such a book, readers generally couldn't stand it in the later stages, because Zhou Yu was really hopeless. You may think that your protagonist will grow up in the middle and later stages, but if you drive away readers in the early stages, who will see the rest?

I read Chapter 21…. If it's not fun and boring, then why should I look at it? Might as well watch my One Punch Man

It's really good. Come on, author, keep upping with the latest.

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