Guide to Working in a Weird World

Taking advantage of this first recommendation, let me say a few words to you all. I have been reading for more than ten years. I am considered an old bookworm. I have had the idea of ​​writing a book for a long time. I just happened to be unemployed recently, so I wrote one. As a newcomer, writing system flow is naturally the easiest, but as an old bookworm, I really have no idea about the system. After thinking about it, I still want to be willful and follow my own ideas. The first book is also the one with the greatest enthusiasm. I hope to write this story to the best of my ability. I spent a long time checking information and preparing in the early stage. I bought seven or eight information books and had hundreds of thousands of words in scraps... Although this book is still very immature, I really tried my best. The style of this book is inherently niche, and the pace is relatively slow. It is almost inevitable that the early data will be poor, and I have been mentally prepared. I cherish every reader's message and every recommendation vote. Although I am ready to move forward alone, I still have to have dreams, right? This is the first time this book has been recommended. The current results are average. It is really important to follow up on reading. Brothers who are book lovers, can you help me and add a follow-up reading? (PS: Follow-up reading means seeing the latest chapter, skipping to read does not count. You can click on the next chapter and keep clicking to the end) Pursuing reading determines whether you can get a recommendation spot in the next week, and also determines how far the book can go. So, I hope you will support me a lot. Friends who read books, please rest assured that the subsequent plot framework has been designed. I will try my best to write it well and finish this story well!

The inspiration picture of the evil god, the picture source is from the Internet, hacked and deleted, the gray fog state is also very nice!

This is my treasured cat

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The buildings were all built by the author, so humble

The overall routine is no different from Hongyue, except that Grandpa is not a good person.

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Come on It feels like it's well written😋

After reading dozens of chapters, I still feel that it is quite interesting. I also got some inspiration from reading the Mysteries of the Ke system before. I feel that many parts of the book fit well. I hope the results will improve.

Don't worry, everyone, it's not easy for newcomers. 😅

At this stage, we are mainly focusing on the plot. The specific ability settings will be slowly unfolded after Xiao Qin officially joins the job. In order to make it easier for everyone to read, I have sorted out the things that may be unclear now. 1. Perception ability: 1. Super-sense: The ability to sense is amplified, the ability to control the body becomes stronger, and the person is a natural close combat fighter. 2. Inspiration: You can directly see the forms and weaknesses of the mental pollution in the other world after they materialize, and you can directly touch them 3. Heart sense: Focus on concentrating and you can initially perceive other people's thoughts 4. Brain sense: Influence the subconscious of others through your own willpower PS: Normally, the perception system can awaken 1 to 2 of the 4 perceptions. Xiao Qin is fully awakened~ 2. Ability strength: 1. It is divided into five levels. At this stage, the abilities of the characters in the book are all at the first level. The ability of the ability users of the same level depends on the degree of opening of the gene lock. (For example, if Qin Fei's gene lock is opened by 15% and Robb's gene lock is opened by 12%, then the probability of Robb's puppetization skill being successful will be greatly reduced.) 2. Opening 1% of the gene lock is equivalent to increasing the mental strength by 100. 3. When assessing pollution, the pollution index is used, which is actually the same as the mental strength of the ability user. A pollution index of 100 is equivalent to the strength of the ability user after activating 1% of the genetic lock. 3. Qualification Assessment: Gene levels are divided into five levels ABCDE. The higher the level, the greater the possibility of advancement in the future.

To be honest, neither the title nor the introduction of the book attracted me. I came here with the mentality of giving it a try. As I read on, I didn't expect that it was surprisingly good. I suggest the author change the introduction.

The writing is quite good, but the character plot feels too serious. The part about receiving the lunch box is too obvious. The character portrayal is still flawed, and it can be seen that the writing method is deliberate. It has more of a craftsman feel. It is recommended to deepen the wording of "accident" in weak points, such as the part where Bai Li kills his sister. Although the author wants to highlight the cause of the protagonist's next plot, the sense of craftsmanship is too heavy. If the writing is changed, for example, when meeting a girl for the first time, Bai Li will have the dangerous idea of ​​dying together through a serious power comparison, which will pave the way for the next plot. Don't use emotions, the heroine's liking for the hero is too sudden and a bit inexplicable. The next plot of the male protagonist vs. The female protagonist can actually be guided by whether Bai Wei became like this because of her grandfather. Robb and Xiaosi felt that receiving the lunch box was too casual, a bit like forcing them to log off the line. Moreover, the official department is too weak to have any trump cards. The team members' sense of crisis also feels like it is in peacetime. I think the author should highlight a theme. Whether it is the protagonist, supporting role or villain, everyone should be cautious. Personal suggestion, infringement and deletion. Of course, the novel as a whole is good, better than most of it. I hope it will get better as I write more.

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