Choose a Day to Ascend

Chori Risheng has reached a very dangerous juncture. In the past two days, I have re-watched The Supreme Being of Humanity and The Legend of the Shepherd, and compared it with Ascension on Another Day, and I felt a lot of emotion in my heart. The exquisite structure, gorgeous imagination, and twists and turns of the plot of Ascension on Another Day are no less than those of several books including Lin Yuan Xing. But it is obvious that Zhai Zhu is out of energy. It is precisely because of the lack of energy that the appeal of many places has dropped a lot. Although the entire novel is still very exciting, it is a bit boring compared to the previous work. This problem didn't exist in the early stage. When Zhou Qiyun crossed the tribulation, it was majestic, and he really wrote the spirit, grandeur and soul-stirring. But then the crotch began to stretch, and I didn't really pull it up after several orgasms. For example, Xu Fu overcame the tribulation, Emperor Zhou overcame the tribulation, etc. It's really exciting, but that's compared to other people. Compared with Zizhu Qianzhu, compared with the opening chapter Zhou Qiyun crossing the tribulation, it seems a little discouraged. Looking at the whole plot, I felt that it was too fast, too hasty, lacked details, and lacked foreshadowing. It seemed to be advancing rapidly according to an outline. It had a tall skeleton, but the flesh and blood was a little shriveled. A lot of content that could have been particularly brilliant failed to produce the desired effect. Leek Man and Angler are both particularly stunning settings, but their mystery, weirdness, and horror are not enough. The world is changing, ancient sects are born one after another, and the dispute between Nuo method and Qi training can be felt by just thinking about it. But these contents give people a sloppy feeling. All kinds of jokes are added to this process, which even makes it feel like child's play. Of course, these contents are definitely still above the level. The reason why I say this is because of comparison with the previous work. There are still bright spots like Jin Buyi in the middle, but overall it is boring. Especially entering a new map now, it can be compared to Qin Mu entering the battlefield between the remaining tribes of the founding emperor and the demons in The God of Shepherd. Penglai Immortal Lord and Little Heavenly Lord, who are also the top experts on the current map, are really not inferior to the Woodcutter of Furila and others. If it were other authors, this might happen, and it really means that their abilities have declined. But I don't think Zhai Zhu is like that, because the structure, plot, setting, etc. Of this book are still excellent. And in the early stage, it was really possible to write that kind of majestic momentum. This shows that this is not due to ability, but to energy. It can be felt that Zhaizhu wants to maintain high-speed updates, but does not want to be fluent, so he writes with high intensity every day. But in this way, the quality of Chori Ascension is really greatly affected. I sincerely hope that Zhaizhu will stop working so hard, stop being too dedicated, and update less every day. Four to five thousand words is the most appropriate. Too many words will have a great impact on the quality of the novel. I am a reader and of course I want to see many updates every day. But when I see a novel that could have been more exciting, but its quality has deteriorated due to updating issues, I also feel uncomfortable in my heart.

Evaluation of the current plot The pace is too fast. Zhou Qiyun, then to Shendu, Xu Fu, and the resurrected Zulong Emperor. Then transition to the next big chapter through [Two Years Later], so that the protagonist's strength will be greatly improved. It can be seen that Zhu has thought about this in the outline. However, the pace of writing was too fast and too urgent, and many contents and settings did not have time to be developed, and the chapter ended. Zhou Qiyun's chapter rhythm is the best, but after Zhou Qiyun everything went into chaos. For example, take the Shendu chapter. The demon king is invited to enter the capital ahead. The pace of the preparation is so great that there are so many aristocratic families. The result? As soon as we entered the city, we were ready to go out. Comes and goes in a hurry. If the guess is correct, Zhu's own idea should be to reveal all the functions of the six secrets through the Shendu chapter, so that readers can know how powerful they can be by simply practicing Nuo - don't forget, each secret has a nine-layer cave. But the plot was written too quickly and there was no time. Most of the results only have names, and even the functions are not complete. The Xu Fu chapter is also very obvious. Elaborate on the realm and strength of Qi refining. Then through the Tomb of the Ancestral Dragon, Qi Refining VS Nuo Master, VS Nuo Qi fellow practitioners, we can see the intensity comparison of these types of cultivation. As a result... All these chapters passed by in a hurry. The description is only a grand narrative from beginning to end, lacking details. Even in the Xu Fu chapter, the foreshadowing of the Qi Masters was not enough, causing the subsequent emotions, although tragic, to always lack a sense of reality. These are all a pity. But there is no remedy. Remedy 1: Expenditure line. Example ①: Narration, Zhou Qiyun's memories. After successfully overcoming the tribulation, fight with the owner of Niwan Palace. The ultimate cultivation in Niwan Palace + the power of Qi refining and ascension period are reflected. At the same time, he can make up for the regret of not seeing the ascension of Patriarch Zhou, and he can also bring out the dead to earn feelings. Example 2: Group portrait, Yuan Weiyang Yuan Weiyang's cultivation progress is interspersed here and there. In addition to Huang Ting, other secret realms can be opened to explore the role of Qi training methods. Function: Control the rhythm and increase the diversity of the plot. Remedial Plan 2: On the main line, add descriptions of the functions of secret realms and realms. Fantasy text, upgrade flow. In addition to giving readers a sense of refreshment, the role of realm is to anchor the author's outline. Control your priorities. It's not like some people say now that emphasizing realm is just plain writing, and it must be divided into high and low elegance. Humanity is "inside it, but outside it". Isn't it precisely because each realm is written clearly that it brings out the talents of Da Zhongniu and Feng Xiaozhong who transcend realms? For example, in the last chapter, Xiao Zheng was hit by Xu Ying's magical power and went back to bring in reinforcements. Can you introduce the realm or ability of Jindan? Or guess, Xu Ying's Nuo technique requires at least as many layers of Niwan to perform. Clarify the intensity of each level? The most regrettable plot at present is that Zhou Qiyun ignored the cup of tea. The early stage is completed too early. If there is a successful ascension, the battle inside the divine light and the description of Zhou Qiyun's state of mind at that time. It would be nice if I could write about it later.

From the appearance of Ye Xu's black coffin to the final chapter, Chapter 102, after going through all kinds of repeated cheating and all kinds of unreasonable tricks on Xu Ying, this thing has finally reached its original state. Yes, it is "this thing". The snake catcher's personality fell apart in my mind when he so easily led to the Kaitian Karma on the other side. I don't know what the author is thinking, why let Xu Ying take over Kaitian Karma? By promising to open up the other side, he indirectly became the culprit of all the tragedies in the Three Realms. Although the snake catcher was cunning, he should not have taken over Kaitian Karma. Not to mention that when he promised to end all causes and effects on the other side, his behavior was like a destiny theorist. The Chaos Sea linkage that started shortly after this gave me some expectations, but when Ye Xu directly used Yuanshi Dao Qi to smash Xu Ying into a concept of the "Acquired Heavenly Dao" and directly prove the Dao Master, I vomited! Not so unreasonable! As for "Everyone's understanding belongs to me," you can just say that you are the power of my thinking. Then there are various settings for linking various eating books, and even eating a book. And the collapse of Xu Ying's character went downhill like this, and the book friends who defended the setting of the old book and Mo Zheng Xu Chui also quarreled all the way. Of course, in the end, the Dao Emperor's words about the true end of the road directly slapped Mo Zheng Xu Chui's face until it made a snapping sound! Xu Chui Xingchen Emperor, who was chosen to ascend to the top of the list, did not say a word, so cool! However, Xingchenlao 🐶 changed his mind and once again boasted about Xu Ying's "Original Dao" on Tieba, and I was convinced. In the end, Xu Ying's enlightenment was expected. After all, it would be a real joke if Xu Yingbao didn't even have a similar character to Yuanshi. As for the difference between the original Dao and the Yuanshi Dao, unless the original text of Emperor Zun is modified, the Jiangnan Yuanshi Dao is the official starting point and end of all avenues. Moreover, Jiangnan will always transcend the line of time and is destined to be the ceiling of the otaku universe. This is what the otaku has the final say, and it is useless to argue. The simplest point is that Jiang Nan can confront time head-on and fish Jiang Xue out of the past time, but Xu Ying cannot do it, which explains everything. So to put it bluntly, Daodao Yuanshi is a "similar Yuanshi"! Warning to all demons Xu Chui: Unless you have the ability to modify the original text of Emperor Zun, Xu Chaochao, who has nothing of his own, can only be regarded as similar to Yuanshi, and will never be worthy of being at the same level as Yuanshi Dao! It's just a pity that Emperor Zun was so qualified that the Yuanshi Dao Fruit was stolen by the snake catcher. I was puzzled. I was being fed by others all the way. Song Shuhang was so lovable after being detached for just one year. Why was Xu Ying so irritating? Don't you guys think about it for a moment? The last thing I want to say is that if Ye Xu's kidnapping of his son Ye Lin reflects some of Ye Xu's personality charm, the Emperor Zhong Yue will seem to be a complete joke. First of all, according to the contradictory concepts of chicken Dao in this book, Zhong Yue's concept of Yi Dao, which is a perfect way to prove Tao and one certification and four certifications, was inexplicably undermined. Even after stepping into the sea of ​​chaos, he had to rely on the inheritance of the Lord of Chaos to achieve the so-called "original Dao realm" of one certification and four certifications. Not to mention that the time period when the Emperor Tai entered the Sea of ​​Chaos was too outrageous. Su Yun and Qin Mu had met before, and it was trillions of years before the Emperor Tai entered the Sea of ​​Chaos! Either Emperor Chaos really had bad intentions and wanted to let the Emperor of Tai, who didn't count "one certificate", go to Ye Xu to get the four certificates, or the Yitong agreement between Emperor Tai and Ye Xu made Ye Xu wait in the Sea of ​​Chaos for trillions of years! It's really off the mark! ! Not to mention the constant conflicts between the settings of Yuanshi Dao Realm and Dao Jin. The setting of Yuanshi Dao Realm has become a big joke. The big bull did not even explain his own race and went to Jiangnan with Ye Xu. He even finally cultivated the so-called Daohai or the Samsara Daohai instead of the Yi Daohai. It was really the Holy King of Samsara who could cry and pretend to be dead from the past. The most outrageous thing is Fuxi's Emperor. He chose not to come back, hahaha. Zhai Zhu probably doesn't know that his most successful work is actually "The Supreme Humanity" rather than "The Shepherd God".

The beginning is amazing! Zhu Da wrote fifteen pages for the beginning, with more than one million words. In the end, he was inspired to use "Snake Catcher's Story". The final effect was worthy of all the effort spent on it. He is worthy of being a platinum master! The plot at the beginning is very tight. When a snake is caught, the grass-headed god from the village comes to ask for sacrifices, which makes the people miserable. The protagonist kills the god in anger and goes into exile with the snake demon. Although there was no question, my spirit was already up. Later, the world view and cultivation system are slowly unfolded, with the same otaku style as always, a magnificent and mysterious cultivation path, a mysterious and romantic journey, cute supporting characters, and a half-hidden protagonist's life experience. The reading feels smooth and enjoyable! Speaking of which, Zhai Zhu really likes the imagery of [bell] and [sword], and has used these two in several consecutive books. Ignore him. Spoiler alert! ! ! As of Chapter 307 that I have read, most of Xu Ying's life experience has been revealed, and half of his worldview has also been revealed. Compared with The Shepherd God, the tone of the novel is also one of resistance, but more indignant. The story of the Goddess of the Shepherd is magnificent and united, as bright, warm and full of vitality as the newborn sun. To ascend on another day is to forcefully pry open a crack in a dull iron room. Some people kill each other, some are willing to be dogs but are abandoned like garbage. Some people regret it after they die with their hands stained with blood. Some people want to shine but are shattered... Xu Ying has fought for 48,000 years and sunk in the seal for 48,000 years. His bones have been polished and polished. He originally had many aspects of majesty. , He was miserable and miserable for tens of thousands of years, his body was divided and suppressed, and he was tortured in the world as an immortal and ordinary person with amnesia. But the most commendable thing is that Xu Yingcha still recognizes who his enemy is after tens of thousands of years. He still loves the world like a young man and still strikes hard at his enemies instead of directly blackmailing the newspaper office. There were many controversial figures on the journey, including Zhou Qiyun, Xu Fu, Zhu Chanchan, Li Xiaoke, Qiao Zizhong, Zu Long and Zhou Tianzi... Zhou Qiyun and Xu Futian were wizards. They could survive the natural disaster even if the difficulty level was reached. If it weren't for the sneak attack by the Diaoyu Lao and the suppression by the gods, they would have become immortals long ago, instead of being killed and injured. Zhou Qiyun is a more realistic person. He was powerful and robbed tombs to prepare for the disaster. He also allowed the Zhou family's children to benefit from his prestige. Even after his death, he took the fate of the Zhou family's trees indifferently. He captured Xu Ying to seek magic. After his death, he also left a reminder to Xu Ying. Xu Ying built the tomb that Xu Ying built for him, and Xu Ying was the only one to visit him. Xu Fu and Xu Ying can be said to be entangled in love and hate, and it is difficult to repay. It was Xu Fu who proposed to unlock Xu Ying's seal, which caused Xu Ying to suffer a lot of pain. This also unlocked a trace of the seal, leaving a trace of hope for Xu Ying to be unsealed in the future. It was also Xu Fu who made various plans for Xu Ying during the process of searching for the Immortal Mountain. He exchanged 3,000 people to find the Immortal Mountain. As a result, he was stabbed to death by Xu Ying and fed the elixir, and became an immortal on the abbot's Immortal Mountain. Xu Fu regards Xu Ying as a heavenly being and believes that he is the best in the world of Qi refining. He has planned for thousands of years and caused countless turmoils. He uncovered the secret of the fisherman using pseudo Nuo methods to fish, successfully restored the Qi refining masters, and allowed Xu Ying to start promoting the real Nuo method. Xu Fu sent Xu Ying the key to unlock the seal, and Xu Ying also saved a trace of Xu Fu's soul from the catastrophe. What will happen next for Xu Ying and fool Afu? Zhu Chanchan was very cute when she first appeared. Later, as the plot developed, her character of cutting corners in refining magic weapons became stronger and stronger, and readers became more and more disgusted with her. In the end, Zhu Chanchan fought back against the Emperor of Zhou with serious injuries, and said goodbye to the protagonist group at the beach with regrets for her junior brothers. Her character of cutting corners was also called into question. Did she really cut corners? The reply from the protagonist group has already given the answer. Li Xiaoke and Qiao Zizhong are two fishing guys. Li Xiaoke originally had a sincere heart, but later suffered from the inability to become an immortal and was about to die. Finally, forced by the fear of death, he chose to cannibalize and abandoned his humanity in cannibalism. He did not get his answer until he was harvested by others. Qiao Zizhong is also a man-eating fisherman, but his expectations for the sect are also true. He can sacrifice himself for the sect and live for thousands of years. In the end, he may die or he may still be alive. Zu Long and Zhou Tianzi have already been evaluated in the article: single husbands. Zulong was the sole husband of a single person, while Emperor Zhou was the sole husband of a wealthy family. Zulong sacrificed his amnesiac old friend Xu Ying in order to live forever. Emperor Zhou tried to exchange the lives of the civilians in the Yuanshou world for his hope of surviving the catastrophe. He killed Zhu Chanchan's teacher and asked Zhu Chanchan to refine the Ark of the Other Shore. In the end, Zhu Chanchan had no chance to board the ship. Zulong is still preparing to become an immortal. With the help of Xu Ying, Emperor Zhou overcomes the tribulation and is turned into a crippled human immortal by Zhuchanchan. What will happen next for them? Let's wait and see. Xu Ying gradually became hardened, and what he lost was gradually regained. The old gods gradually revived, and the plan to replace heaven in the fairy world also revealed its outline. What followed was still the battle between man and "heaven".

Some people have been wanting to see the big boss of Zhaicai speak, let me show it to you.

What kind of person is the protagonist Xu Ying? There is a legend in the world that he is an immortal god who lives and dies in the world for thousands of generations, but he is the only one who is always there year after year. The world envied him, feared him, but also envied him, and coveted the secret of his immortality. But they didn't know that behind his eternal youth, there was always a pair of greedy eyes watching him, placing thousands of shackles on his heart. The immortal immortal is just a leek planted by someone else. Unlocking and breaking away from the fate of being manipulated by others, is this the theme of this book? Yes and no! The protagonist in Zizhu Master's works has always been a great hero. He promised not only to break free from his own shackles, but also to break free from the shackles of all living beings in the world! The decaying heaven, the other side where people are scalped, the prehistoric Yuan Realm riddled with misfortune, all will be overthrown, all knocked down! I once promised Ling Yunzhi, and I often laugh at the immortal being who is not my husband!

The traditional three realms of enlightenment refer to: 1. Proving that the body is the same as the Tao, 2. Proving to control the Tao, 3. Proving the end of the Tao                                                                                ① Proving that the body is the same as the Tao: In this state, oneself is in harmony with the Tao, external proof is in harmony with the Tao of heaven and earth, internal proof is in harmony with one's own Tao, achieve the achievement that the body is the same as the Tao, and the Tao is the same as the body. In the many universes of the Tomb Universe and the Sea of Chaos in the books "Domination of the World", "Emperor", and "Lin Yuan Xing", this realm is called Tianjun, which means "Lord of Heaven and Earth"; He is called Great Emperor in "The Supreme Humanity"; he is called Enlightened One in "Mushen Ji", because the Tao realm of the thirty-sixth level of heaven is imprinted in the void, achieving with the Tao, taking the meaning of becoming the same as the Tao, including thirty-six great heavens, thirty-seven levels of Tao trees, thirty-eight levels of Tao flowers, and thirty-nine levels of Tao fruits, which are all the categories of enlightened persons; In the fairyland universe of "Lin Yuan Xing", it is called Nine Heavens of Dao Realm; in "Choose the Day to Ascend", it is called Immortal Realm, which means the Dao is equal to the body, coexisting with the Dao, and immortal. In this realm, whether it is cultivating immortality, practicing witchcraft, cultivating the Tao realm, or cultivating the personal Tao realm, from various different pathsultimately we have to reach the same step of being the same as the Tao, and the Tao is the same as the body. Different roads lead to the same destination.    ②Prove Control of the Avenue: In this realm, you need to be consistent with the avenue of the entire universe, and then successfully control the avenue of the entire universe, and become the monarch of the avenue and the god of the avenue. In many universes in the tomb universe and the sea of chaos in "Only One Step in the World", "Emperor", and "Lin Yuan Xing", this realm is called Dao Jun, meaning the monarch of the avenue;                         In "The Supreme Humanity", this realm is called Dao Shen, which means the god of the avenue; in "The God of Shepherd", it is called The Forty Heavens of the Dao Realm. The avenues form the Taoist palace and transcend the category of enlightened persons. The masters of the seventy-two halls of Miluo Palace and the thirty-sixth heavenly disciples of Tiandu are all in this realm;                       In "Lin Yuan Xing", the universe of the fairyland is called The Tenth Level of the Dao Realm, which means the master of the personal Tao Realm and the Tao God who has found a new path; in "Ascension on Another Day", this realm is called the Dao Master Realm, which means the master of the universe's Dao.                      In this realm, there are many ways to realize the Tao, such asExternal proof of the Universe's Tao, which is consistent with the Universe's Tao (this kind of combination is different from Tianjun's Hedao, Tianjun's Hedao is consistent with its own Tao, and Daojun's Hedao is consistent with all the Tao in the entire universe. From then on, there are two possibilities, one is a Tao slave, and one's own consciousness is enslaved by the Tao, and the other is that one's own consciousness transcends Dao consciousness, becoming a Dao Lord),controlling all the avenues in the universe, this is the most traditional method for a Dao Lord to realize the Dao. A Dao Lord can also prove himself and prove his way to become a Dao Lord without realizing the Dao in the outside world. Some universes allow this method, but some universes do not allow this method of realizing the Dao. Forcibly realizing the Dao will lead to calamity.    Some cosmic avenues are formed into a Tao Realm, and to achieve Taoism one needs to attain the Universal Tao Realm. However, in addition to the first person who enters the Tao Realm having the opportunity to defeat his or her own Tao Realm and become a Taoist God, it will become increasingly difficult for subsequent people who enter the Tao Realm to defeat the cosmic Tao Realm and be controlled by the Tao Realm and become unconscious Tao slaves, called Supreme Beings b>, there are also people like Diyue and Emperor Chaos who open up the inner universe and use the inner universe as a personal realm, or like the Tao realms of Youtide Sheng and Immortal Universe, which use the Tao realm as a personal realm and find a new way to become a Taoist god, or in the book "Choose a Day to Ascend" Refining Hundong Cave and Tao Realm Enlightenment. There are many ways, and the ultimate achievement is to master the avenue and achieve the same goal ③Prove the end of the avenue. There is basically no dispute about this realm. It is the level of exhausting all the mysteries of the avenue and raising the avenue to the end of the avenue. The only controversial point is that when the Taoist who internally realizes the personal Tao realm opens up the Tao realm in the body and controls the personal Tao realm, the state is equivalent to the end of the road. In fact, this statement is one-sided. The reason why it is said is that the state of internal realization is similar to the Tao God who externally proves the Tao realm of the universe and completely controls the Tao realm of the universe. The latter realm is equivalent to the end of the avenue. Therefore, the same realm of similar internal evidence systems is also equivalent to the realm of the end of the avenue (the specific differences will be discussed below). The realm of the end of the avenue is essentially the final realm of all avenues, including Yuanshi is also the end of the avenue. Just because Yuanshi Avenue includes all known and unknown avenues that are possible and impossible, so all the ends of the avenue are part of the end of Yuanshi Avenue. Therefore, many beings who have reached the end of the avenue say that there is no problem in proving the origin of the avenue. And Due to the special nature of Yuanshi Avenue, the end of Yuanshi Avenue is separated as a supreme realm - Yuanshi And except for the special existence of Yuanshi, the real end of the avenue should be to prove the Tao through the Tao, and the avenue reaches the end. Under this premise, the practitioner's own avenue is itself, without the distinction of body, magic power, soul, Tao fruit, and magic weapon. Including Jiang Nan, Qin Mu, Palace Master Miluo, and Gong Yeqian, when they reach the end of the road of enlightenment, the road is their physical body, their magic weapon, and their soul. Only the road of their own cultivation is left, so they are all the real end of the road. Other methods of realizing the Tao include Proving the Tao with the body, using gods to prove the Tao, and using treasures to prove the Tao. In the end, it is only the body, gods, and treasures that achieve the end of the road, but they themselves are wiped out by calamity, such as the tomb of Yaolu Tianzun and a group of strong people who died in the first proof of the origin. Therefore, at the end of "Emperor", Although Daokong and Qinglian's physical bodies or magic weapons have reached the level of the end of the avenue, their avenue has not yet reached it. Therefore, when their avenue has not reached the end, it is not complete or the real end of the avenue, unless like Di Lin, although they walk to prove the path with gods, but When the soul realizes the Tao, the physical body and the avenue reach the end level together, which is the real end of the avenue. However, because it is not the way to prove the Tao, even if the end of the avenue is finally achieved through the magic weapon, the flesh body, and the soul, it is weaker than the method of achieving the end of the avenue through the Tao. Miluo Palace Master Because the path of the Hongmeng rune he took is itself composed of a Hongmeng rune, the achievements of the palace master are also the end of the complete road of Taoism; Ye Xu's achievements at the end of "The Unparalleled World" are only equivalent to the Qinglian at the end of the incomplete road at the end of "Emperor", but in the book "Lin Yuan Xing", it has obviously been "same" under the concept of the road. He has achieved the unity of his own Dao, body, soul, etc. And reached the end of the Dao; Taihuang uses Yi Dao to fight against the attack of Dao Dao in the Tao Realm, and he and the Dao Realm continue to improve at the same time. From the perspective of Su Yun's intervention to rescue him, he successfully controlled the universe Dao Realm, his Yi Dao has also achieved the achievement of using Dao to prove the end of Dao, but because there are always more Dao Realm Dao than himself, he cannot jump out. Su Yun Needless to say, it is immortal as long as the Hongmeng runes are not destroyed. The path he followed is different from proving the Tao with Tao or using treasures, which is achieved by perfecting the Hongmeng runes. When he perfected the Hongmeng runes, he himself could not distinguish between treasures, physical bodies, and mana. Even the Hongmeng runes no longer existed, achieving the real end of Hongmeng Avenue.                                                                                                         Regarding the previously mentioned Taoist realm of the internal evidence system, which is equivalent to the realm at the end of the avenue, it actually has its limitations. Although it seems that the third stage of Taoism, which externally proves the Tao Realm of the universe and completely controls the Tao Realm of the universe, controls the Tao Realm, but in my opinion, although they are similar, the two cannot be discussed in the same way. The way to externally prove the Tao Realm of the universe The path is to prove the Tao through the Tao. After the Tao God merges with the Tao (congruent with the Tao Realm), the consciousness is controlled by the Tao Realm, which is called the first stage of the Tao God. After the consciousness transcends the Tao Realm consciousness, it is called the second stage of the Tao God. The complete control of the universe and the Tao Realm is called the third stage of the Tao God. But note a very important point! The Tao Realm of the Universe itself is equivalent to a Primordial Treasure at the end of the avenue. It is obviously impossible for a Taoist god who transcends the consciousness of the Tao Realm to control the Primordial Treasure that is stronger than himself when he has not reached the level of the end of the Tao Realm.Only by proving the Tao and using the Dao Realm Avenue to raise his own Tao to the level of the end of the Tao Realm can he control the Tao Realm of the Universe. Under this premise, the Tao God who controls the Tao God in the third stage of the Tao Realm is the realm of the end of the Tao Realm Although the Taoist with internal enlightenment has no Taoist traps and controls the Taoist realm within his own body, the level of his Taoist realm is obviously far from the end of the avenue like the real cosmic Taoist realm, and his own avenue is also far from the end of the avenue. It is only because it is similar to the third level of externally enlightened Taoist that it is said that this state is the end of the avenue of a shortcut, but it itself is essentially equivalent to the second stage of a Taoist or a Taoist. However, this shortcut Under this system, there is actually no realm barrier between the Tao Lord (Tao God) and the end of the avenue. When the Tao realm and the avenue in one's body are raised to the level of the end of the avenue, the real end of the avenue is also reached. Therefore, it is wrong to say that the Tao God under this system is equivalent to the end of the avenue. It is also reasonable, because this system combines the realm of the Tao God and the realm of the end of the avenue. The only difference is whether the own avenue has reached the end.

Isn't this the original saying? Why do I see so many people laughing at Jiangnan's Yuanshi as the end of Jiangnan's own road? And doesn't the chapter where Qin Mu appears in Lin Yuan Xing also prove that Yuan Shi is very strong? You don't have to like Jiangnan, you can have a thousand readers and read a thousand Hamlets, but you can't have all the content of the book changed by the readers themselves.

The cauliflower grows like a child every day, always in front of the dangerous eaves. Of course, the people look up to them like their parents, Private sex, officials sell each other, and everyone has a happy life. There is happiness in life, I will definitely keep my Shulin pen and write it with me. Preparing imperial edicts and selecting outstanding talents

Goblins and ghosts, ghosts are formed after death, and monsters are formed from alien beings. What about the goblin? It seems that it is not like in the work, it is transformed from flowers, birds, fish, insects and beasts. They can only be called "spirits", but "demon" is not. Shen Sui said: "Demons arise from people. ... When people abandon them, demons arise, so there are demons." Then, the demons mentioned by the ancients are actually humans. Why do people become monsters? According to the living conditions of society, the more chaotic the world is and the collapse of rituals and music, the easier it is for demons to be born. Therefore, in ancient times, the existence of demons was itself a kind of admonishment and warning to superiors. Yongzhou described at the beginning of the novel was in such a situation, and the protagonist, the "demon king", was born. The background is good, and the protagonist who fits the background is even better.

I didn't expect to be able to write about the peak of the animal husbandry, so I should at least have a humane level. However, it turned out that it was not as good as Lin Yuanxing, so I closed my book and retired.

After reading Chapter 409, I felt First there were prehistoric times and then there were immortals, The Goddess of Shepherd was still before the prehistoric times. Shaobao is the only one in the world of witchcraft. You can see Jiangnan at the end of the road. According to legend, Zhongshan's family met with Ying Yue and talked about Lin Yuan. The savages of the Western River are all gone, It is as easy as choosing a day to fly up. I'm a long-time fan of Zhu. I've already pre-ordered Ascension on Another Day, and I'm slowly catching up on the progress. This is probably the book I've written the most and longest in this chapter. A limerick to commemorate the pig universe of the past.

[Unfinished] The excellence of most of Zhu's novels is that they use characters to drive the plot, but in the later stages of this book, the plot is more driven by combat power, realm, and numerical values. It will undoubtedly be a bit hard to swallow for readers who have eaten fine chaff.

Ancient Chinese language has a refined and unique rhythm. Reading ancient Chinese is a pleasure. Historical records are often brief and concise, and the Spring and Autumn style of writing is even more fascinating. And history written in ancient Chinese is an excellent means of exploiting the strengths of both. The protagonist Xu Ying and his followers and companions are destined to go through a magnificent struggle process, which is naturally historical. The protagonist has one appearance in Zhai Zhu's writing, but another appearance in the readers' eyes. If you write it in the way of historical records in ancient Chinese, it will give you a completely different feeling. Thus, I would like to suggest that readers with a certain level of ancient Chinese can consider writing a series of biographies for the characters in the book in subsequent chapters, and write them in the form of paragraph reviews or chapter reviews to increase the reading pleasure of book friends. It can be written in a biographical style or other forms. The protagonist's planning and foresight should be written, and the negative information about him that deceives and harms others should be written. The tone should be humorous. {"NickName":"Zhaizhu","UserId":20448952}

This is purely personal speculation. Discussions are welcome to improve the reading quality First of all, many people did not understand Xu Ying's gift of tea. In fact, Xu Ying's gift of tea was not a reminder. The ancestor himself knew very well that the master of Niwan Palace was very likely to be alive. Tea was the means for the master of Niwan Palace to kill the first ascended person, and it was also a glimmer of hope for ancestor Zhou to survive. But somehow the ancestor still missed it. Mourning for the ancestor Has the ancestor succeeded in overcoming the tribulation? Overcoming the tribulation was successful, but ascension is not just about the immortal tribulation, otherwise someone would have ascended long ago. It can be seen from the mural that the first ascended person died on the Heavenly Dao artifact. The owner of Niwan Palace killed an unknown number of people who transcended the tribulation. Does it mean that the owner of Niwan Palace is not sure that he can resist the divine weapon of heaven? For thousands of years, in the age of Qi Refiner's End of Dharma, the heaven and earth were sealed. Is Master Nuo a great medicine created by the owner of Niwan Palace to practice Qi refining? Is Ascension a scam? As of now, the Nuo master has ascended to deliver medicine purely. When a Qi Refiner ascends, he will be criticized by Tiandao, and the reason why Tiandao is so critical of the Qi Refiner's ascension may be because of the Great Demon King Xu. There is no old immortal at the foot of Jiuyi Mountain, and he is still young despite the vicissitudes of life. {"TopicId":"730401677403881472","TopicName":"Ascend Another Day"}

The palace master's courage is unparalleled. He has been working hard to save all sentient beings for almost his whole life. In the first half of his life, he turned into a mystery and pursued his own way. He created the Hongmeng runes and the Hongmeng Taoist language to spread the Dharma to all living beings. Without any selfish motives, he discovered the Shepherd Universe. There are thirty-six layers of void. He created the method of branding the void and passed it on to all living beings. Finally, he used his wisdom and talent to cultivate the end of the Hongmeng Avenue that countless people dream of. Moreover, he never treats others as a teacher and always treats them as a teacher. The other party was a Taoist friend, and he did not look down upon him because he had low cultivation or was a junior. When he discovered that the ultimate loneliness would come in the future, he searched for every possibility in the future for the sake of all sentient beings. When he finally found that there was no way to save it, his Taoist heart withered until he When Zhi Daoxin died, he taught Qin Mu how to save all sentient beings, and taught Qin Mu how to return to the creation tribulation of the first era. When the ultimate coldness came, he fought against the ultimate coldness for all living beings, and was willing to die to buy time for all sentient beings to wait for Qin Mu. Back, Qin Mu, who was searching for how to solve the ultimate coldness in the sea of chaos, created the Hongmeng Zi Mansion in memory of his teacher. By chance, Emperor Chaos and his servant the Holy King of Samsara came to the Zi Mansion to listen to Qin Mu's teachings and explain the end of the road. During this period, the Holy King of Samsara heard Milo's Hongmeng Rune, and after returning to Linyuan Universe, he also created a Hongmeng Purple Mansion that looked different. After an unknown period of time, a cheerful young man and a little book monster entered his Purple Mansion. From this, the young man understood the Hongmeng Rune, improved it, and added Yi Yutong, who was highly praised by the two founders of the Immortal Universe, into his philosophy. Because of this, he understood the Hongmeng Rune that truly belonged to him. At this time, the young man had also transcended. Palace Master Miluo embarked on a legendary road that belongs to him. This young man was named Su Yun. He was later accepted as a disciple by Qin Mu's acting master (Miluo) and was named the "Eighth Young Master of Hongmeng". If you want to know the legendary life of Su Yun, please read "Lin Yuan Xing" by the great otaku master

I saw the latest chapter today (July 11, 2022), and the overall feeling is like a primary school student's composition First of all, the map: the world view is set very grandly, with the underworld, the underworld, another world, a small cave, and so on. But the overall feeling is like a story that takes place in a small village. The protagonist goes wherever he wants, and the villain wants to find him. He can be found by walking around the village in a few minutes. Then there is the battle: the fighting skills are written in a fancy way, with random runes and slots, but it feels like a fight between street gangsters. With Li Xiaoke, it was like a group of people trapped a big man with a rope, and then broke through the seal. It felt like the big man was so strong that he broke the rope. Others have similar feelings The final training system is a mess. The protagonist has a lot of talent in Qi refining, but he is not very strong. After learning so much, he suddenly feels that his fighting power is not enough. He forgets about the Taoist statues and learns boxing again. I started to learn boxing moves again and again. Is it going to cost millions more in the future, and countless moves turn into one punch? Then the enemy is also strong and cannot be killed with one punch, and then he becomes enlightened again? Increase the power of a punch? The combat power is also chaotic. One team was stronger one time, but the next time they were slaughtered like chickens. In general, it is essentially an upgrade essay written by primary school students.

The book "Ascension on Another Day" is poorly written, and the setting is very good. However, due to Zhaizhu's illness (possibly), the writing power has greatly declined, and the writing is not up to par, especially since there are many interactions between the protagonists. This book has a good concept. Everyone who practices Tao has an acquired understanding of Tao. Cultivation and enlightenment all belong to one's own personal understanding and elaboration of the only true Tao. Furthermore, different talents and different perspectives of seeing the true Tao. Everyone's Tao is different. Whoever understands more will have a higher and more complete Tao. Cultivation is like the contents of a book, and the true path is the infinite book itself. Among the protagonists, the one with the highest talent is Jiang Nan. He first cultivated Yuanshi, exchanged Jiang Xue's soul for Yuanshi, and then cultivated Yuanshi again and jumped out of the ultimate catastrophe of annihilation. It can be said that his talent is at its peak. . When he proves the Tao Yuanshi, it is equivalent to copying the real Tao. The name of the Tao is Yuanshi. Yuanshi is the starting point and the end point. The Tao that others have proved is in Yuanshi, and the Tao that others innovate in Yuanshi also changes. He is always one step ahead. Therefore, the ultimate calamity of annihilation in the real avenue cannot catch up with the universe he wants to protect. I think the heaviest one is Qin Mu. He understood the path of Yuanshi but had no time to walk and had to give up. No one gave him a chance to support him. He was the one who wanted to support all sentient beings. He was always too exhausted to relax for a moment. He has a strong sense of responsibility, and the great road is not his pursuit, but a tool for him to realize his wish. Fortunately, he succeeded in realizing it in the end. His Tao becomes counter-entropy, which can postpone the death of the universe forever. I think the most dashing person is Zhong Yue. He lives a dashing life, speaks his mind directly, realizes all his ideals and ambitions, and lives a complete life. Although he is not the strongest, he does live the happiest life. I think the worst thing is Xu Ying in this book. Xu Ying is also known as Xu Xiaoruan. His figure is soft but not hard at all. He was a harvested leek from the beginning and remained the same until the end. In an environment full of old men and sickles, there was no room for choice, and all his responses were just to survive. Even if everything is harvested, it doesn't matter, as long as it can still survive, just like a leek, as long as it has a root, it will continue to grow and live, with tenacious vitality. In the end, when he was enlightened, he was also arranged to become the tool of the Tao Emperor to see the real way. Although he became the Tao, he lost everything. I think the last bell was just a thought given by the author. Xu Ying did not protect anyone. In terms of strength, Jiangnan is similar to Xu Ying, but in terms of realm, Jiangnan is better. Jiangnan is outside the transcendent avenue. Yuanshi's enlightenment can be self-contained and not affected by the real avenue. He can even recruit people from the real avenue to block the ultimate catastrophe of annihilation and always be one step faster. This is something Xu Ying cannot do. Xu Ying is the source of enlightenment, becomes the real way, and is the unified way. He holds all the power of the real avenue, but cannot change the rules of the avenue. The annihilation kalpa is the inherent clean rule of the avenue, so he said that it is impossible to completely eliminate the annihilation kalpa.

1. Su Yun collapsed. Su Yun was born in the Sea of ​​Chaos. Although he cultivated the Hongmeng Dao Sea and Hong Luo, who he cared about, was by his side, he was also willing to take risks for the creatures of his own universe and was not even afraid of death. Now he is sitting back and watching the universes in the Chaos Sea being destroyed (don't say that he just sat back and watched because of the human calamity. In that case, the discussion between Emperor Chaos and the outsiders can also be regarded as human calamity) 2. The big bull and Ye Lao Mo collapsed. First of all, when the strangers left and were about to find Ye Lao Mo, Emperor Chaos asked Su Yun to find Big Seed Niu for help. Now Su Yun is better than both Da Seed Niu and Ye Lao Mo. Su Yun has cultivated the Dao Sea first, and Big Seed Niu and Ye Lao Mo are still talking about Tao to death. Secondly, Big Seed Niu has obsessions. Fuxi and the Human Race are his obsessions, and then he actually ran away in pursuit of Tao? 3. The God of Shepherd collapsed. When I saw this ending, I immediately went back and watched the ending of Mu Shen. My impression of the ending was that everyone was dead, but there was only a glimmer of light left after Qin Mu returned. My understanding was that it was an open ending. There might be some hope of salvation, but there was little hope. Although it was not satisfactory and not a happy ending, it was considered normal. Now looking at this ending, good guy, her daughter is still alive, and the ones who died emotionally are all Miluo Palace and some of his enemies. Everyone who is related to him is fine.

Choose a day to soar and finish scattering flowers. This year, 67 votes were cast for the election date. I don't know how many votes were cast since I can't see the voting record of the year before last year. But all my monthly tickets were given to Zhai Zhu. When I read the pirated version of Emperor Zun, I fell in love with Zhai Zhu's writing style and imagination, so I downloaded Dian Niang. Later, Shuhuang read it again and again, which is equivalent to re-subscribing, Humanity, Mu Shen, Lin Yuan, and chased me all the way. The opening chapter of Linyuan was amazing, but unfortunately a lot of things happened during the period. Zhu Da was also facing some personal and family problems at that time, which led to Linyuan ending in an anticlimax. The opening chapter of Chosen Day was also amazing to me. Unfortunately, Zhu met Sanyang Kaitai, so the quality of the follow-up was not as good as the opening chapter. After several books, the beginning of Emperor is actually the hardest to look back on. This is due to the age. After all, I am looking at the work ten years ago from the perspective of 2023, but the climax becomes more and more intense as it gets to the later stages. Humanity is the most heroic and intense, but I don't like it very much. The book is an extremely classic, but it is too heavy, and the Emperor Zhongyue is burdened with too much. The Faun is my favorite book, and it is also the work of a pig becoming a god. The beginning is not amazing but it is very innovative. The character growth is also logical. There is a feeling of family and country, the love of children and a happy ending. The most important thing is that it does not end in tragedy. Don't make any nonsense about tragedy being more artistic. As a literature student, I hate tragedy the most. Who says comedy can't reach the pinnacle of art? It's really a pity for Linyuan and Zhanri. If you read this book according to Zhu Da's writing timeline, you can obviously feel the great progress of Zhu's writing and conception. But looking at it optimistically, it has actually improved the Zhai Zhu universe. In the current era of heavy IP, it is obviously very possible to make an IP similar to or even surpass the Marvel universe (haha, a little fantasy + expectation). Finally, I wish Zhuda a speedy recovery and write better works. After all, you have made enough money writing books, but we haven't read enough yet!

Book friends, Chengzhi is resurrected again. He is talking nonsense in the Linyuan book review area and starting to have random thoughts again. He says that the latest chapter shows that Yuanshi can resurrect by himself, and that his inference that the palace master is resurrected in Linyuan is correct, but he has never thought about the palace master. It was completely wiped out by Ultimate Lengji, and the four certificates can also be completely killed. 🐷Most people say that people who died in Ultimate Lengji cannot be resurrected (there is no change to this kind of setting at present). He said no, it was a slap in the face. He made up his own mind and said that I was slapped in the face. In fact, the original text does not indicate... The following is about the deeds of this Chengzhi, for those book friends who don't know him (basically all old book friends know this person, so those who don't know him can also ask other old book friends in the book review area) ) His classic quotes: "Chaos is more awesome than Yuanshi" "Qin Mu is stronger than Jiangnan" "Jiangnan does not understand death and life" "Chaos is the same as Yuanshi's realm" "The Taoist tree and Taoist temple that appeared by the Chaos River in Linyuan is after the end of the Shepherd Universe." "Fireworks exploded after Qin Mu traveled through the first epoch of creation of the Shepherd Universe" (Chaos Space Explosion) - He said that Qin Mu traveled to the Sea of Chaos after the explosion, "Mi Luo's Dao Tree and Dao Palace were shown to have been revived by Qin Mu in Lin Yuan", "Mi Luo did not die, he will achieve success in the future Qin Mu of Yuanshi saved Milo," "I believe Qin Mu will definitely defeat Jiangnan", "Jiangnan does not understand creation", "Chaos contains all avenues", "similar to Yuanshi and Yuanshi are the same realm" and other remarks (Note: He still maintains these views to this day, Thinking that he is right, he went to the forum to accuse the correctness of his remarks. Now that the latest chapter "Yuan Shi" can resurrect itself, he appears again and says that Milo was brought to life in Linyuan. At present, I can't reply to him in the Linyuan chapter because this chapter of my chapter Talking about reaching the upper limit) Objective discussion, not trying to start a fight, after all, this person's remarks are really outrageous 🌹🌹🌹 Welcome all book friends to come and discuss

Understanding is self-sufficient 🙂 Understanding is self-sufficient 🙂 Understanding is self-sufficient 🙂. Ridiculous

Some people say that this book does not capture the emotional characteristics of other books. How should I put it? It is like a husband in a family who loves his family deeply, but in order to maintain the family, he has to leave early and come home late. There are too many lyrical descriptions, but there is no deep emotional perception for the readers, but if you think about it, the entire universe of the Three Realms was actually supported and improved by Xu Ying. His whole life was fighting to break this backward environment. The ignorant surrender of the people, the environment of less resources and more competition, the oppression of subordinates by superiors, and the calculation and cutting of leeks between each other. It was the little Xu Ying that broke everything. Some people say that Xu Ying has no ideas and is fed by others, but isn't primitiveness the authenticity without rich structure? A starting point is subject to many influences, creating infinite possibilities. Xu Ying went from ignorance to ideological awakening at the beginning, then broke the old shackles, established a new system, and then continued to expand and expand through enlightenment and self-knowledge. Finally, he returned to the original from countless expanded branches and became primitive. Only by experiencing everything and understanding all development can you be primitive.

It's a pity that the ending of Zhaizhu's book is too anxious. After Xu Ying completely enters the Sea of ​​Chaos, he seems to be pushed forward by all forces. It's too short.

In the Great Void, Emperor Zun Universe, Yuanshi Daluo Heaven, Jiang Nan was preaching to Qin Mu, and Qin Mu was integrating these principles. Jiang Nan looked at Qin Mu and seemed to have thought of something, and said, "Fellow Daoist Qin, how many wives do you have now?" Qin Mu was startled when Jiang Nan asked about this, his face turned red, and he scratched his head and said, "Tian Zun, I only have one wife, but I secretly tell you, In fact, I have many lovers, but my wife is strict with me, so I can't give them status and love." Jiang Nan was surprised: "Fellow Daoist Qin, how did you do it?" Qin Mu's face became more rosy, and he looked into the distance for a moment, and then said to Jiang Nan sheepishly: "I have been taught by my elders since I was a child. The elder is called Yaoshi. He was sought after by a lot of beautiful women when he was young. He taught me this knowledge since I was a child. I have kept his words in my heart and used them to deal with these beautiful sisters. In fact, I feel that my appearance is not bad. I have used a little bit of the knowledge that Yaoshi taught me, and many beautiful sisters have fallen in love with me. Maybe it is because my charm has fascinated them." Qin Mu finished speaking narcissistically. Touching his head, Jiang Nan automatically filtered out some of Qin Mu's words in his mind, and only remembered the knowledge that Qin Mu's elders had taught him. Jiang Xue's image and the dream of two wives emerged in his mind. With a smile on his face, Jiang Nan immediately held Qin Mu's hands tightly and said, "Fellow Daoist Qin, please teach me!" Somewhere unknown in Daluotian's backyard, Jiang Xue's transformed little fox sneezed...

This timeline is just nonsense. The Stone Age where the protagonist wore animal skins was more than 100 years later, and the Shang Dynasty (feudal dynasty) was reached more than 100 years ago. The author thinks these 100 years are very long? ? ? ?

Daoyin is the beginning of the Three Realms, and his magic weapon is not the beginning magic weapon. The Supreme Saint Tianzun is the more powerful Yuanshi of the Four Realms! Tao, body, soul, magic weapon. The Holy Ancestor, Dao Emperor, Ye Xu, and Zhong Yue are the four proofs of Yuanshi who are close to transcending the tribulation, and the next step is the realm of the Eighth Young Master Hongmeng. Su Yun has cultivated the Hongmeng Dao Sea. The Dao Sea is an infinite and vast one. In the sea, there are countless universes and countless lives that are endless! It is an existence that transcends disaster. It will only be a matter of time before he continues to progress and reaches the level of the Seventh Young Master. In the Great Void, he is not weaker than anyone except Jiang Nan and Seventh Young Master. Qin Mu can evolve into various Dao seas. He has no calamity in the beginning and infinite Dao power. He is the Seventh Young Master Chaos who is one step ahead of the Eighth Young Master. The existence that can open up the great void and avoid the catastrophe in the ultimate annihilation = Jiangnan, where all roads are the beginning and end. Jiangnan, the king of hanging, one certificate forever, contains all the ways of existence and non-being! The promise of the future is also the beginning of the acquired Tao, and my nature is self-sufficient. All Tao are the origin, and they are also one and eternal proof. Great being. Of course it will take hundreds of millions of years for Xu Ying to reach the realm of Hongmeng Eighth Young Master. At present, neither Taihuang nor Yuxu Tianzun has achieved great success and has reached the realm of Hongmeng Eighth Young Master. It takes more than a few years to reach the realm of Eighth Young Master and to reach the realm of Seventh Young Master. Of course, a high level does not necessarily mean a strong combat power. Xu Ying doesn't have a Taoist name yet, but at the end of the Taoist road, he is already more powerful than the ordinary four-level Yuanshi. You can transcend misfortune in the boundless sea realm! The Dao Emperor Saint Ancestor is still one step away from reaching this realm, but this step is a natural chasm. Because the Holy Ancestor is the beginning of the Great Path of Nirvana and can refine the calamity into Tao power, he can withstand the beginning of the calamity. However, if he leaves the Dao Sea, he may not be able to withstand the ultimate annihilation of the Great Void.

It gets more boring as you get to the end. Everything is just oh how powerful I was in my previous life. Everything was created and done by me in my previous life. You might as well just write a novel from Master Ying's perspective.

Zhong Ye's inspiration is far ahead of Xu Daozu. Using counterfeit crude embryos to create unprecedented creations. Counterattack, change your fate? Set up your mind for the sake of the world, and open the way for the magic weapon in the world. There is a saying in later generations: Don't imitate Li Xiaoke as a human being; you have eyes but don't recognize the Yuanshi Bell.

I started watching it in November last year, and now it's mid-February and I've finished watching it. A story about a fooled snake catcher and a talented immortal who finally broke away from the feudal wall and broke through the self-deficiency and lost everything. The logic of the story is generally complete, and this is a good book as long as you don't delve into the underlying logic. Zhaizhu's novels all have one characteristic. They have an attractive beginning in the early stage, a climax in the early and middle stages, and then a boring transition. After all, people's imagination cannot write a highly detailed life that they don't have, and the ending is a bit unexpected. In the beginning, I stayed up late every day to watch it. In the middle period, I started watching it only on my way to and from get off work. Today, I finally have the idea of ​​staying up late to watch it all in one go.