I Am the Actor in Weird Reincarnation

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210301106472253430","UserId":224311352} As a bookworm who has been writing online for more than ten years, I have some opinions and suggestions on this book. I hope you can read it. If you have the chance, even consider my suggestions and opinions First of all, I want to say that I find this book quite interesting. Here are my opinions: 1 I have carefully read all the chapters so far. Your writing is absolutely no problem. It is better than many or even most online writers. There are almost no typos. In all aspects, it is above average, but it seems that your description techniques and environment rendering are relatively young and even a little immature, and you have no own style. I hope you can refer to other people's techniques to create your own style and increase the layering of the work. This is very important 2 Quote from the original Therefore, you may use too many stories. This is your own book and not someone else's. The protagonist of this book is the protagonist of this book and not the protagonist of another story. In the first chapter, you have been writing about Xiao Lin and even wrote about the protagonist and Xiao Lin. Xiao Lin's appearance rate is higher than that of the protagonist in several chapters. This is fatal in online articles. Stories can be quoted but not copied or used too much in your own story. You can refer to the writings in the middle period of Samsara Paradise. Most of them were original creations after readers read other people's stories. This allows people to see a little bit of the original source but it is a new story. 3. The character design is not three-dimensional enough. You said at the beginning that Xiaolin and the protagonist have the same personality, but then you can't show it at all. This is a fatal flaw. On the contrary, I think the person who came to see the doctor has a more three-dimensional personality than the protagonist. I'm very surprised why you don't do it when you clearly have the ability. The above are all my suggestions and opinions (ps. You turned the protagonist's body upside down and it bothered me. Although it is quite interesting to have obsessive-compulsive disorder, can you write it earlier? I feel so impatient just thinking about it.) By the way, the author, you seem to be writing two books at the same time. I suggest you not do that. I took a quick look at the other one and it is completely different in style. Doing this will easily lead to a decline in the quality of the two books. The eunuch is chasing a new book for himself. I hope you can focus on writing one

Author, do you know what stood out to me for the first time when I read this book? It's just the opposite body of the protagonist. The weirdness and absurdity come out immediately, so you don't have to listen to what others say, there are always people who like or dislike it, just stick to yourself. This is not a poison at all, but a highlight!

Author, you have been emphasizing that the protagonist is mentally lost, but will this be cleared up later? Don't whitewash it. Author, what you wrote like this reminds me of some novels. The protagonist is so dark in the first part, and then he says that he is mentally lost, and then there is redemption immediately, and he immediately becomes a virgin. Don't do this.

The stories are all original, why do you keep emphasizing who wrote the script? And you kept saying that the interpretation should be based on the original story? This gives the reader the impression that you are copying a horror story, adding some drama and then replacing the original protagonist with your protagonist. For example, in Journey to the West, your protagonist replaces Tang Monk, and then you copy the entire book again. So far, what you have written gives people the same feeling. How can it make people interested?

When it comes to supernatural beings, the male protagonist is decisive and crazy, but when it comes to women, the male protagonist is wretched and greasy, and he slips away.

There is a very strange problem. The protagonist's head is opposite to his body, so all his joints are opposite to normal people. So his movements and appearance are actually very different from ordinary people, and most people would find it strange when they see him. Why is it shown in the article that except for the setting of the headgear being reversed, other aspects of communication, whether it is communicating with others or actions in daily life such as eating and walking, do not reflect this, but are written exactly like a normal person? ? This setting is very novel, but there is no specific expression in the article. Very disappointed.

Come on, author, there aren't many writers writing dark stories from Qidian these days. If I hadn't used all my spare money recently to buy Ukrainian specialties at the directly-operated store, I would have given you some reward.

I went and it turned out to be pretty good, far beyond my expectation. It's okay. It's very interesting to write.

Author, I think you can write a more detailed post to explain it, or say in the introduction that the works mentioned in the article are your original works. Several comments in the book club circle have misunderstandings, and these are definitely not the only ones who have misunderstood. Rather than replying individually, you should hang your instructions where readers can see them.

I have a question. I don't know if I really can't see it. How did the protagonist sit down? Isn't the body backwards? Can the back be bent to that extent? The author said at the beginning that the body was very stiff, it couldn't be so flexible, and how did the knees bend? I really can't stand it if I don't understand how the arms are bent. Also, the protagonist's mentality changes too quickly. There's no foreshadowing at all. One second he was desperate for life and death, and the next second he accepted it very quickly (personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it). I still hope the author can clear up the confusion.

Has the author ever risked his life? I feel like I might be able to put my work aside and write full-time🔥

There is nothing strange about the body turning around. The novel is not afraid of poisonous points, but is most afraid of lack of highlights. The plot at the end of the novel has actually clearly defined the audience.

The story is okay, but there are a lot of unreasonable things in it, so you can read it when you don't have any ideas

I feel that the safe city is absolutely safe, because if the safe city is not safe, the players will have to work hard to play in the dungeon, and they will not be able to enjoy it after they come out. They have to come back to intrigue, so they might as well just commit suicide. When 007 comes back, he still has to worry about those messy things. It is better to change places and become a old rat man.

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I don't know if the author can insist on writing it, but he has been criticized by so many people and asked to quit... And all kinds of unreasonable things. Even after the setting is written, he can still be criticized. .

Originally, there were fewer newcomers in this category, so there was more tolerance and care.

Forcibly persuaded to quit, the body behaves like a normal person? ? ? ? ?

The author's writing style is unexpectedly good, very sophisticated, and vividly describes the weird and twisted sense of absurdity. I just wonder why no one has read it.

I feel like it's well written, but a little lacking. Come on! 😆

To be honest, I read the opening copy of this book three times before I finished reading it. The first two times, I was persuaded by Xiaolin's monologue every time. But as you continue reading, you will find that the author writes more and more smoothly. To me, the third copy written by the author is the one that kills the previous copy.

The rest of the story is good. The first few chapters are very slow, but I read it patiently. The setting is very innovative. I give you all the votes. Come on.

Two suggestions for new readers: First, this book is okay and you can read it. Two, don't read the introduction and title of the book, otherwise it will be easily mislead as a cool article and you will not be able to read it. Third, it is recommended to skip the first thirteen chapters and start reading directly from Chapter 14. Otherwise you will lose patience.

The novel seems to be about the horror of human nature, which is very good. However, I still hope that the author will not go too far. Blocking is a trivial matter. Those chapter reviews are full of talented people, but the main character has a bad memory? Have you looked at the settings carefully? The author writes comics that the protagonist flips through casually, and it is normal to think about them piece by piece. If you don't read the settings, you'll be spouting nonsense. What the hell?

Very well written, a rare good book

The book is good, but I recommend skipping the first 13 chapters

Fuck, the last one I wrote is really good.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, I recommend it