My Beast Is Too Curly

Let me talk about my personal evaluation so far: 1. After looking at the author's previous works, it is probably the first time that the author writes about beast control. The writing style is not good in this aspect, and there are certain similarities with Teacher Lu, Unscientific Beast Control, etc., And these are relatively well-known, which will affect the perception. (Complaint: You can use your own appearance and uniqueness to express your emotions and personality in the beast-control novels. The screams are still easy to embarrass) 2. The food "tribulation" chapter has obvious shortcomings of a slow pace and a too small field of vision. People who read online novels basically have multiple books to follow. The slow pace of updates is a taboo. The novel took three months to write, and all the foreshadowings were turned into clouds. It is better to read the ultimate cool novel. Ju hanging around downstairs for so long, coupled with Xiao Ju's flower activities, it is very easy for people to abandon books or keep them, and their grades will fall into a mess. 3. There are big problems with the character. Let's talk about the protagonist first. From the introduction and the beginning, it can be seen that he is a gangster, but in the new chapter, he turns into a hot-blooded young man? This character chart is completely messed up. Talking about other characters, Yao Guang makes me confused. Even if it is a foreshadowing, I still have to find something to whet my appetite. At present, it seems that she is a neurotic girl. She will be cold-faced for a while, and she will be sarcastic from time to time. Xiaoju was already indifferent, so she stopped touching her. 4. Others are also raising the issue of nonsense. This is actually relatively easy to understand. Daily life itself is water, but the author seems to want to write the kind of book whose chapters are easy to divide. So where is the daily life? This makes the meme seem redundant and awkward. 5. I didn't have this article originally, but the new chapter makes me unable to complain. I have to make both red and white faces when singing and acting. Is the protagonist and the hot samurai fighting a double combo? Then he had so many skills and was cut down twice? Invincible Wen is also waiting for the opponent to use skills to enhance the impression! In a fight, you can't beat each other. The hot samurai finally opened the door, but you just beat him... —————————————————— The above are personal feelings and are for reference only. Please correct me if there are any mistakes. Finally, this book may not be interesting to picky old bookworms, but it is a good ration for newcomers. It is not bad to read without paying attention to details, and the author has room for improvement. If he keeps writing, it will definitely get better and better. It's not easy to type, please like it.

Luoyu actually releases a new book only after a few years. He is so diligent. He really makes me cry to death

Should I say it or not, please don't copy the character of the pet beast. I just finished watching Teacher Lu, so please be more original 😐

At first I thought the author was just making jokes intermittently, but later I found out that he was simply copying the clever plots of Japanese comics. What kind of person would take revenge for the destruction of his own family? Even if he wanted to take revenge, he would squander and destroy it. As the only legal heir, he would conspire to destroy his own property. Or should you cooperate with a person with a very bad reputation, firmly believe in his paranoid ideas, and take action on the elder you like a lot? What a wise plot this is. Daily Detox Lives up to its name

Although I also play Genshin Impact, it's a bit awkward to bring it into a novel and it's hard to read.

The protagonist of the Teacher Lu template, Teacher Lu, and the silly turtle of the Turtle template feel like I am watching a replica of Teacher Lu, and there is no warmth like Teacher Lu's pet interaction.

There are too many bad memes. You are a PM fan, not a Genshin Impact fanfic. If you want to play some bad Pokemon memes, can everyone agree with you? . .

Wang Liang, who was full of hatred in the early stage, was actually able to join the army and become a supernova. He left the scene with a dash, which reminded me of the frustration I felt watching Shield Hero 2.

What a silly article, I only see the author enjoying himself.

Although, I have read a few chapters, I always feel that I have read it before, right? Teacher Lu

Although I also play Genshin Impact, the flavor of the original batch is too strong.

There is a lot of room for improvement in this book

Deleted, a veteran driver with more than ten years of book experience was embarrassed by that cat

So the competition in the small station is a no-rules competition, right? Or is it not a violation as long as you are still alive, even if you are seriously injured, crippled or dying?

Is this silkworm really a male?

Food festival, so weird →_→

Just mark it as a Genshin Impact fan. I don't even know if I'm reading a book or complaining.

Also, can you please stop looking awkward with a small broken station?

Beast Control and Cooking 🤔

Teacher Lu? ? ? ..."Miss Zhulan wants me to confess"?

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