My Savior Game Became Reality

I have read many behind-the-scenes novels of this series and would like to give some suggestions. I hope the author can write better and better. 1 As for the name "evil", the protagonist knows that these are called "evil" because of the salvation game, but the official name can be different, such as evil things and invisible things. It can be told by the protagonist later. If the names of the two are the same from the beginning, it will give people a sense of accident, but the author has already written it, so this is not a big deal, it is a small detail. 2. The protagonist is the savior. What kind of salvation does the author want to write? I think it's better to focus on the heavy side of salvation, otherwise your evil god will be killed in the middle of laughter as soon as you write it, which would be a bit out of character. Therefore, the protagonist can play tricks in the early stage, or jump out of his psychological activities, but in the later stage, the protagonist should become more rational and calm, and leave the jokes to the supporting characters to appropriately enliven the atmosphere (when the atmosphere is very depressing at the stage you wrote) 3. The behind-the-scenes flow of the salvation text, group portraits are relatively good, a stage for one person is not in line with the salvation organization, that is personal heroism. Also, your members are all drawn out. Do you want to give them personalities? Or just a simple tool? In this process, the protagonist controls a group of "puppets" to save the world. Wouldn't it be better to write about a group of people fighting against the fear of the unknown for their world and family, and to write about the shining points of human nature? 4. Regarding the strength of the official, although the official does not have a golden finger, he represents the country and there are a large number of highly intelligent talents behind him. The protagonist's organization can cooperate with the official. It is impossible for the protagonist or a member of the organization to do everything by himself. He is not a nanny. If humans don't save themselves, what reason is there for others to save them? Therefore, the officials should try their best to understand the reason for their appearance, find all ways to eliminate them, and even develop weapons to eliminate them. This will increase the combat power of the two organizations and lay the foundation for the emergence of evil gods later. (At this time, the golden finger may be able to smoke more diversified things) 5. The time point when "evil" appears. When they appear, the strong ones should appear as late as possible, and the weak ones should appear in large numbers in the early stage to give the protagonist and the government official time to react. Medium intensity may appear appropriately to sound the alarm for the two and promote their cooperation. 6. The degree of destruction of the evil, since it is a salvation, there must be death, and there will be a large number of casualties, large-scale terrain destruction, destruction of the city, the development of the protagonist organization may be slower than the time point when the strong evil appears, highlighting the sense of tension, otherwise I will see As long as you know that the protagonist can solve every incident effortlessly and without any casualties, it would be boring to see hundreds of pictures (so it is necessary to create some three-dimensional characters and write them to death, otherwise how to highlight the tragedy of protecting the world?), You have to capture the readers' hearts. In the mid-term, the people will gradually know that this thing exists. (So ​​it is important to diversify the items extracted, such as the mirror space similar to the ancient one?) 7. Above, if the author wants to write a cool article, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Reading this book makes me feel ten years younger.

Speechless, haven't you made it public yet? Xinhuo has already essentially become the leader of Blue Star, but why is it still equivalent to working for various countries? In the people's perception, it will always be just a mysterious department of the country, forcing the masterminds behind the scenes to flow

Although the author is a big shot, I still want to say No heroine, no heroine, no heroine! ! ! Without him, I'm afraid the author will accidentally write it down😭

My top priority would be to grow the organization, and then secretly be active around the world, recruiting people as it goes. When the scale grows, it will turn from covert to overt, and export members to countries all over the world. Before that, being officially exported is too downgraded. 🤫 If the scale is not enough to cooperate with the official, the official will definitely find out the details and take the dominant position. If there is nothing wrong with the protagonist, then he will not be a savior but a worker. . The scale is so large that members are all over the world, and officials all over the world have to be "guided". Only then is it called a prairie fire, and only then is it called a mentor. 😃 There is another question, how do you calculate the background of apostles drawn from cards like Black Knife, people from other worlds whose world was destroyed by weirdness? Did An Jianyou see a world full of zombies? Is the story going to be expanded to another world? Or something else?

It's so easy to see╮（╯＿╰）╭

It fits the setting so well 😁

The beginning was okay, but after it was released, it started to feel like establishing a sect in a fantasy world. After more than 100 chapters, I was eager to throw out various treasures to improve the sect's facilities, but it was not precise. The impact of the weird on real life was not developed. The more I wrote, the more it became like a fantasy novel. The characteristics of the weird invasion and mysterious recovery were not written out.

Maybe the setting of the evil god is a bit hidden, but I discovered it after reading the entire book in nine days. The protagonist learned in a certain chapter that there are ten evil gods, but when describing the red moon swallowing the evil god, it was stated that it was divided into nine, and in the end it was discovered that there was no evil god in the fallen emperor evil god. From this, it can be inferred that the original evil god was divided into nine parts, and the emperor of the Glorious Empire used special means to obtain the same status as the evil god, but his own power belonged to the evil world itself.

After reading Chapter 11, I generally feel that it is okay, but I also want to briefly talk about my own opinions and personal opinions, so that everyone can discuss it reasonably. First of all, I personally feel that there will be no shortage of the consecrating magic weapon, at least not as cherished as in the book. If this situation really happens in reality, with the country's responsiveness, it will definitely gather all the masters and start training new people. (Whether it is useful or not, try it first and then talk about it.) New people will bring items like rosary beads with them when they start learning. It has been 6 or 7 years now, and there are a lot of these things, right? Maybe there will be a few born Taoists and Buddhists, and one year will be as good as others' ten years. Especially if they are found to be useful, they will definitely support these projects. With the efforts of the whole country, how can there be a shortage of magical instruments? Then there is the question: Is the author learning various writing styles? Sometimes there is no foreshadowing, it is suddenly sensational, and sometimes it is deliberately funny and a little embarrassing.