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This book is quite good, and the legion stream is very good, but there are still few people in it now. There is really no sense of immersion in the story of Ledtu Shenhaowen. This is good. Do you have any manuscripts saved? More updates?

I would like to give you some advice. I have never played Shuitu, but I am a fan of "Game copper coins can be withdrawn". 1. The title of the book can be changed to attract more readers who have never played Shutu. Increase the number of readers 2. The biggest problem with this book now is that there are too many realistic plots, too frequently, and they are all interspersed with the battle plots. One or two chapters of realistic plots will appear between fights. For example, there are 2 chapters of intense battle plots on one day, and the 2 chapters updated on the second day are all realistic plots. The 2 chapters updated on the third day include 1,000 words of various game dialogues in the first chapter (half of which are not nutritious), 1,000 words of combat plots, and 1,000 words of combat plots in the second chapter, 1,000 words of dialogue + realistic plots. This will make the plot inconsistent and unexciting, and readers will almost forget about the battle plot by the third day. At least half of the real-life plot must be cut off. The real-life plot can be placed at the end of the season, and the battle plot must be coherent. Some real-life dialogues about games can be moved into the game 3. Game dialogues can be reduced if unnecessary Advantages and disadvantages of this book 1. One person forms a group. Among all the books in the starting point, this one has this feature and unique advantage. It is recommended to add more descriptions and detailed descriptions of this aspect, especially the battle plot to highlight this aspect 2. In the No. 9 Update, there is a strategic map in the easter egg chapter, which is very praised. It is recommended to add a season map at the beginning of each season. When the battle plot is intense, you can create an extra strategic map 3. Compared with other books, this book adds real friends to play a brother alliance game (unique point). In other books, most of the game friends slowly meet offline and become friends, without the addition of real friends. However, it should be noted that game articles should focus on game description, and the realistic plot should not be excessive. 4. The disadvantage of this book is that it is easy to draw cards. This describable feature is missing due to system reasons, which reduces a lot of the fun points. But there is still room for description here. For system rewards, you can directly choose 5-star cards, which can still be described. Those who set system rewards in the book will also have a banner world announcement. At this time, you can also add some intra-alliance dialogue and world dialogue, words of envy, jealousy and congratulations. This part is too abbreviated, but don't add too much. The reason why some readers will say that you are stupid is because there are many real-life plots and dialogues, and there are not enough updates. The battle plot is incoherent, and the plot you want to see cannot be seen, and it is not good enough. Summary, the book is good, but the battle plot is not coherent enough. Come on, author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Unknowingly, I have persisted in writing 100,000 words. I don't know how many people are reading the stories I wrote and how many people like to read them. I hope what I wrote can bring happiness to everyone. Come on, come on

I would like to give some suggestions, because I see that my grades are average and I am afraid that the author will not be able to continue writing. The author may consider changing his name. The introduction is quite attractive and the name really screens readers. The target of "The Trumpeter Controller" is clearly aimed at gamers, so why don't other readers want it? Only gamers read the book, and the audience of this book should obviously be gamers and game readers. Come up with an attractive name. For example, if you study "Game Coins Can Be Cashed Out" and change it to "I Have a Game Team", I'm not very good at this. Anyway, if you think about it more, you can brainstorm how to attract people, and first use your name to trick people in. I have never played Sutu. When I saw the copper coin withdrawal, I thought it was cheated into the game + Shen Hao's article. Then I continued reading because the content was attractive. The quality of your book is not bad and it can attract people, but first, people must click in. The other main plot is to lead the story. At most, add a little bit of brotherhood, love (if you don't know how to write suggestions, don't touch it, it may be a big poisonous point), etc., But the priorities are clear and you must not write too much, otherwise you will lose readers who are attracted by the game, which is not worth the gain. However, it is recommended to write about how the protagonist makes money from games. I always worry when reading it. What will the protagonist do after playing games every day? Will he still be able to play games every day after graduation? Moreover, it will be a great point to write about this. If you don't write about this aspect, I suggest you mention it a little so that people know that the protagonist has a source of income.

This is about to be swallowed up. I originally thought that Jiuyou could make it to the end, but now it seems that s3 is about to be eaten by 444. Anyway, the mist and rain group and the wind group are just two groups. It doesn't really matter whether the main alliance merges or not. I probably thought about how the author would write it, s2 438 is a strong alliance, but it has not been integrated. It will not do well in S3. In addition, the management IQ is obviously not at the same level as 444. When the time comes to integrate, 444 + 438 will be strong and enter the season of conquest. It should be like this. After all, if 438 wins the Jedi counterattack under the leadership of Feng Tuan, it is impossible to integrate 444. People will definitely not accept it. Therefore, there is only one answer, Jiuyou is gone

I have never played the game, but I like to read fan works, because I have played other games of the same type, and I have been playing it for more than three years. Well, in terms of year, it was released earlier (from abroad). Nowadays, if you have a financial backer, you will dominate the world. If you use me to play games To put it bluntly, our alliance is a meat-eating alliance. We change zones everywhere, fight guerrillas everywhere, and bully foreign alliances all day long. We live a pretty good life in our childhood. Because we are really too lazy, playing this type of game is really easy to cause mental breakdown. We are online 24 hours a day, 20 hours a day. I'm convinced. There are always some people keeping vigil in our alliance, and they will call the top line if there is any situation. As a combatant, if there are not enough manpower in a fight, I will call the top line, so I also like to read the fanfics of Tutu, and I have read them before. The one who extracts gold coins may have a smaller audience. I haven't seen any fanfics for that game so far. Well, I finally praised the author for being really good-looking. I've been following it and voted for it. How can I put it, um, it's very cool, and it's very quick and short. Do you understand what I mean? ps: Are there any book friends who want to play "Lords Mobile" 😃😃

The prophet predicts a wave; he saves the manuscript before publishing it, and then runs away after publishing it.

The intensity is so high. In the late S2 and even the early S3, the intensity was not that high. I also play Sutu. As far as the normal area is concerned, it is almost conquered in the later stage of S2. It is estimated that even one alliance may not be able to gather 20 high-red teams. Those with a redness of 8 or 9 stars are the main ones. Most civilian players have just assembled a pair of main players. During the fight, the big men's bows flew all over the battlefield. I also often roll off the service. In the S1 season, civilians can only say that it is a complete foil. The levels can't keep up, the generals can't keep up, and the tactics can't keep up. The combat effectiveness of an alliance depends entirely on Gao Hong. Civilians can only tear down cities and turn over land. It's useful. I have even seen one alliance push another alliance by relying on ten high reds. Numbers are completely useless. If civilians can go up and kill one or two hundred soldiers of the opponent, they are considered awesome. Most of them were eaten without damage. Only after the S2 season can you rely on numbers to fight against Gao Hong. Therefore, I feel that the author's intensity is a bit excessive. It felt like I was watching a fight in the S2S3 season. This is even the case in better districts. 😂

The author has been very sincere these days. He has written about a large number of frustration plots and strives to transition to the climax plot as soon as possible. If he had to deal with this wave of frustration plots at the speed of two updates a day, I am afraid that many people would abandon the book.

Author, are you worthy of us? Cut off updates for no reason! Now I don't read novels anymore, and Sutu has completely quit reading. This is the last Sutu novel that I read. I feel regretful that the content is complete, but the sudden discontinuation is very uncomfortable. I open the starting point once a day just to see the author's update. I am disappointed every time.