Start from Time Stop

If you can write it well, if you continue writing it will be recommended by Sanjiang~ First of all, the story line is very clear. The protagonist saves himself and the earth on earth, and starts to confront the organization Wanjie. In addition to the time-traveling woman, the creatures created by the protagonist, such as winged monkeys and intelligent machines, are later used to learn alien knowledge to help the protagonist become stronger. At the same time, the protagonist may save the universe in the later period. The author's description of the battle may be poor, but other descriptions such as the transformation of the protagonist's thoughts and personality, the attitude towards the winged monkeys to profile the protagonist's personality, and the protagonist's scientific research ideas are very good. This book does not drag on the plot, do not write too much, and write more about the protagonist's scientific research. It should be a big recommendation.

The author is really not suitable for writing character interactions. The author is suitable for writing lone rangers.                                                                                                                   " This woman named Ye Wanting's ability to travel through time and space is also inexplicable.        ，， If time is compared to a "line", the protagonist's time-stop is a "point" without length. There is no logic in how this woman randomly ends up in the protagonist's time-stop in this infinite timeline. In contrast, it is impossible for Ye Wanting to know everything every time. It is impossible for the protagonist to meet Ye Wanting every time the time stops, and it is also impossible for the Ye Wanting every time he meets to be the Ye Wanting who has traveled through time and space many times. She is more likely to be the Ye Wanting who has traveled through time and space for the first, second, third, and nth time. There are also age changes mixed into this - Ye Wanting is not an immortal, and the Ye Wanting the protagonist meets is not very old, which further shortens the number of times Ye Wanting travels through time and space. She cannot know too many things, and she wants to crush the protagonist in knowledge. It is impossible. At most, she has experienced a lot of unusual things. It is impossible for the protagonist to be educated by Ye Wanting every time he meets Ye Wanting. It is also impossible for the protagonist to always be a stupid young man. Once the author writes too many such stupid young people, it will easily affect the perception. In short, "Time Stop 2" is not as straightforward as "Time Stop". The addition of Ye Wanting completely reduces the logic and readability of this book. I feel that the author did a very good job when writing the protagonist of the Lone Ranger. Once the interaction with other characters is added, it will stretch the crotch. (Except for non-human species) Oh, that's it, come on, author.

I am familiar with this movie, having watched dozens of movies. It's just that the male and female protagonists are wearing clothes and no clothes, and the girl is screaming in agony.

To put it simply, the author cannot control this good subject matter.

After reading more than ten or twenty chapters, the setting of this book is very attractive. Once written, it will definitely be a magical book. However, there are too many bugs in this setting, which are endless. It is extremely uncomfortable for people like me who like to talk about logic in reading. However, I recommend it to people who don't care about logic. As long as you don't pull your hips in the later stage, it is a good book.

This book has added some embarrassing plot points in order to win contracts and recommendations, but don't panic, now that the results are better, the real story and adventure are about to begin. I have been studying Time Stop for three years, and I will never let you down, rush!

The human king is a time-stopping immortal plus a time-jumping one. One day when time jumped again, I found that the protagonist was sitting on a golden toilet.

There are many small problems ahead, but they are not important. Food consumption, why can light still move? Is the air integrated? It prevents rotation if it does not contact asteroids, but it can be avoided if it contacts the earth. These are not important. But about 50-100 hairs fall out every day. This number should be quite a lot in ten years, and there will be various bugs. So the movement during the stop should be idealistic. After contact, the protagonist can move if he thinks he can move. I posted it in the chapter review, so I'd like to remind you again. It should be easy to change it now, but it will be troublesome later.

If I stop sometimes, I will directly sow seeds all over the world

It all stopped. If you just cut off the monster's head, wouldn't the world be peaceful? The author really complicates a simple thing.

I'm in a good mood for dreaming. The new chapters are of higher quality. Keep writing. Quality is the most important thing. Don't worry about those random comments.

How should I put it? After reading the introduction, I felt a little interested, but after reading the chapter list, I had no desire.

I read it carefully before Chapter 15. The Anomaly Investigation Bureau is nothing, you can continue watching without disturbing the protagonist. Why is there a woman who can ignore Shi Sui? Ahhhhh! I'm really convinced. The golden finger is exposed, homogeneous, strong to weak, reverse setting, non-unique, observable, and influenced. These are all fatal points. Ah ah ah ah, give me the time to study Chapter 15 carefully, woo woo woo 😭

It really poisoned me, driving high and driving low. He actually opened this source of pollution that everyone has seen, and it was blocked by a safe. What can I say? ⊙_⊙

I don't understand why the protagonist has to blow up an asteroid. If you go up to the sky without support from the ground, you are 100% dead. Even if you blow up, how will you come back? Time has stopped. You are not old, so you can't live for hundreds of years. After you have lived enough, you want to die, and then go to save the world. You want to save the world as soon as you come up. It's so holy.

After being a reader for eight years, my taste has become more and more addictive, and my eyes have become fierce. This book has a unique style, and it will surely become famous if I keep reading.

This is a setting mentioned in a book that I feel is more similar to the protagonist's time and space Everything is composed of "information", and those with special characteristics are called containment objects (for example, if a bread has the property of being absolutely sharp, then the bread can cut through items that have no opposite properties), and "information" also has depth, which will be reflected in the containment objects with opposite properties (classic spears and shields) Some of them can observe information and randomly obtain characteristics from it (a very tricky ability, such as random to automatic death) But these people's abilities are also divided into three, six or nine levels (the low-level ones can only observe and passively obtain them, the better ones can copy and paste the characteristics, and then you can use the abilities that have been recorded in "information", and the most advanced ones can actively create characteristics that do not exist in the current "information")

Hey, if a single timeline is enough, why do you add a heroine who travels through various timelines? There is a heroine who travels through time lines, can come into contact with protagonists in different times, and can carry various items. This will lead to many bugs that readers can easily imagine. For example, if the protagonist in the future directly controls time and affects the present, then forget about the finale! (The protagonist has unlimited time and can study and obtain the heroine's ability to travel through time and space in the infinite future, or conversely, the heroine can obtain the hero's ability). If I hadn't added a female protagonist at the beginning, I wouldn't have thought about what will happen in the future after the male protagonist becomes stronger, and how it will affect the present... I will only think that the timeline is unique, and there is no existence that affects the past and future.

It looked a little tiring, but at first it felt better, but later on it felt like a cycle of "screaming", "slogan", "comatriot", "rescue", "enlightenment", etc. There is almost no personal life of the protagonist in the back, he just lives for others, saving the world, and for his compatriots... This is the case throughout the story, mainly because the protagonist does not have any personal space, and every time he stops, he is on the way to save the world. On the one hand, it is relatively monotonous and boring, on the other hand, the function of time stop is only used for "confrontation" and "rescue".                                                                                                                                                   down down but the downstairs occupancy of the main character would be all

This book is very well written, don't write it next time

When reading, I stopped and said in one sentence, this is not science. After all, if it is a science department, light, oxygen, and air (pressure, similar to water) cannot be excluded. So, everything is unreasonable, I can only say that it is magic (fairy energy, fantasy, etc.). If I have to bring it into science, I can only say that this is very game (digitization, or the boss digitizes the world, The Truman Show), or this is very much a brain in a vat.

Some thoughts about Pig's Feet The timeline of Pig's Feet should be similar to that of an observer, moving forward and no one can stop it, and the time jump should be similar to light particles and light waves. It includes the possibility that Pig's Feet can observe. When she is changed and observed by Pig's Feet, her past and future are determined at this moment. Everything in the past and things that have not happened in the future are real. When she is not detected by Pig's Feet, she is like following the Pig's Feet. Like having countless clones, I have browsed all possible timelines. When I see her again, it may be the first time she appears, or she may already exist ten thousand years later. She is real to Pig's Foot's timeline, and everything she experiences is real to her. She may meet the timeline where Pig's Foot falls in love with her, or she may meet the timeline where Pig's Foot turns into a yandere, and Pig's Foot can hear what the future timeline is like and change her current self.

Awesome writing! ! This is the type of fairy grass I saw in the New Year. I hope it doesn't jump.

The first dozen or so chapters were a bit normal, but after that, the whole thing started to get wild and exciting. . .

From weak to strong, assuming that the meteorite is the first level and the egg is the second level, then the protagonist is like this, slowly rising to the full level. Although sometimes he may skip levels and fight monsters, he will eventually reach the full level and become invincible. In the end, he may find several wives, or he may only have one. , It is also possible that there is no full level, from the earth to space, to the galaxy, to the universe, to the world, to the dimension, the rest cannot be made up, and then it will be like this, infinitely stronger, changing the map to become stronger, changing the map, maybe there is an end point, because the author can't make it up, haha

Apart from anything else, the writing is pretty good, and the meaning inside is very good. Although the writing style is not very good, it is still readable.

(1) Phrase examination (total 100 points) What is the difference between time stop and no big question ____________________________. (2) Composition (total 250 points) You are Li Hua, your planet is about to be attacked, and civilization will perish as a result. Please write to Wei Huo for help. (Requirements: use Chinese, self-made title, correct punctuation, correct attitude, sincere language, healthy thoughts, no restriction on style, except poetry not less than 4 words) □□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□□ (A bunch of boxes are omitted here) In addition, I wish this book a great success!

Is the author related to the author who stopped five hundred years in time?

There are several good consequences for playing with time. The bigger your brain, the faster you can cut.

It's not that great. It's completely empty writing, urban writing without any meaning. Goodbye.