Elf Natural History

When I read Chapter 60 or 70, I felt that these paragraphs were quite confusing and I had no desire to read them. Besides, the protagonist has nothing to do except his mechanical abilities. However, the villain was well written and disgusting. I wish I could parachute a fish with a fat head and a fish that can't fly.

There are still a few more battles to come, but the inspiration is running out. If you have any good ideas, I hope you will speak up enthusiastically. There are many powerful and well-known combinations, but weaker ones are harder to find. I prefer to have something that is not strong but has characteristics. The specific format is as follows: Battle competition: Upper limit: Fengyun Jue, Qilin Arm (Source: Yandi), Blazing Roaring Tiger, DD Golden Hook Arm Special: Divine Culture, Shadow Play (Source: Heritage), Magic Wall Doll/Mini Q, Phantom Light/Painted Skin Special Events: Divine Legend Tengu Eats the Sun (Source: Ritual) Absol (Blackened) Song of Destruction + Predicting the Future Including but not limited to humanities, history, animation, games, movies, and legends. You can add some of your own ideas later so that I can successfully crowdfund my book. (灬ºωº灬)

You are the second person I have ever seen who wrote about the feeling of Pokémon, come on! ! !

Let's put it this way, it's very good to read Chapter 4. You are the first one to use the hamster wheel so far. It is suggested that it can develop into a fish tank for ghosts. From the current point of view, as long as you don't get sick, you will be a wife in the future. I have read so many elf articles, and this is not bad.

First of all, this is not a multiplayer time travel! ! ! Secondly, the specialty of the protagonist is that the Pokémon games in the original world are very developed, but after time travel, the mythical beasts are more secretive, so the protagonist who has seen Pokémon has a great advantage. In the end, is the protagonist who defies fate and changes his destiny to defeat the cheating supporting character not popular? I'm on fire! Hey!

Damn it, this book probably won't be popular. If many people wear it, it's probably not a zz, and pig's feet are not unique.

Come onoh

If there are any shortcomings, I would like everyone to correct me.

There are very few people talking, so let me tell you something. First of all, the subject matter, elf writing is combined with other things emmm. . How can I put it, I personally don't like this kind of thing. Of course, this is my personal feeling. If you abandon this point, the writing is quite good. I have been wandering around in the elf text label for a long time. Except for a few of them that I am familiar with, it is your book that gives me the best feeling. This is really amazing. In general, there is no big problem, but sometimes the description of other abilities is a bit Embarrassing, like when I went to a temple before, I felt a little stuck. I don't know how to describe the abilities later on, but the author seemed to write all the elves as practitioners, which gave me a rather misplaced feeling when they showed off their abilities. Well, anyway, keep writing. I looked at your original version and it seems to have been cut. I hope this can bring you some good results.

It's very interesting. To be honest, I didn't understand some of the details, but it doesn't matter. Just keep the momentum going. It's really boring for the protagonist to cheat alone. It's much better to watch a group of demons dancing around.

I have no more votes, so I'll give the author a vote to celebrate the release. Come on, author!

Come on, author, this is one of the many PM articles I have read, and I think it is the best. Except that the update is too slow, everything else is good, and it is very imaginative.

It was good and attractive at first, but then I died in Chapter 52

The sense of rhythm also needs to be grasped well. But the most important problem now is typos and incoherent sentences caused by typing. Write a few more when you have time. You don't need to send them all at once, just keep a few for storage. Updating is a big problem. If you follow this way, your reading will not be high. You can only read it after you have fattened up.

Why are the elf novels I've been reading lately becoming more and more fantasy-like?

What did the author do? I keep repeating the content recently.