Elf Voyage

Simply speaking of the characteristics, living habits, and skills of the elves, this novel is the best I have ever read. This kind of effort to describe the unique life among elves gives readers a strong sense of involvement. Let me also give you a few suggestions 1. The system should not be too omnipotent. In fact, I prefer one without a system, but it is difficult to change it after it has been released. Try to reduce the presence and importance of the system. For example, it can only scan irrelevant data, query basic information of elves, etc., Such as the exchange function. 2. The protagonist brings the game The knowledge that goes back to the Age of Elf Navigation, such as the evolutionary path of Eevee, the evolutionary path of Slowpoke, etc., Is definitely better than the aborigines, but it is of no use. Just like if you know Einstein's matter-energy conversion equation, and then travel through the Song Dynasty, is there any use? No, No one will believe you, even if you want to do experiments to prove it, you can't do it. You have neither Eevee nor various stones, nor Slowpoke nor King's Certificate, so try to avoid the protagonist showing all kinds of advanced Pokémon knowledge 3. Just refer to the racial value. In reality, the impact of an ordinary rock snake will not be less powerful even if a pile of stones of the same size are thrown at it. The foam rays spit out by the Roaring Whale King are bigger than Squirtle's turtle shell 4. The protagonist should not think about promoting the invention of technology in the context of the medieval age of navigation. Technological revolution, such as adding steam engines to sailboats, etc., The dry weather next door is so cool 5. Try to greatly reduce human martial arts and special functions. You can use swords, guns and sticks, but if there is a xx level of exercises, the first and second styles, forget it, it is very large For example, if a person with superpowers like Nazi is a large battery, and the elf is an electric baton, the combination of the two can make the electric baton last longer and create greater danger, but try not to let the battery directly hit people, otherwise the battery is more powerful than the electric baton, so why do you need an electric baton? It's straight out of fantasy 6. When new elves appear, try to attach a picture. The sea area where the protagonist is located should be from the latest versions of the animation. I probably stopped following the Chengdu Alliance, so it is quite unfamiliar, and maybe most readers are too

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Without introducing the introduction, I will briefly describe this book here. There will definitely be some fusion monsters in this book in the future (I even wanted to use the fusion monsters in Hearthstone as the starting Pokémon) 1. Abandon the setting of qualifications. Nothing is inherently bad and must have its own strengths. Therefore, I will set the moves and personalities of the same two Pokémon to be completely different to reduce the occurrence of similar Pokémon (except for miscellaneous soldiers). It won't appear. Compare the colors of two Pokémon, and the data will determine who is stronger and who is weaker. Shenbai makes it very clear to build a real Pokémon world. 2. It is not a turn-based play (although writing it this way will greatly reduce the difficulty of writing) strategy will have a large component. More inclined towards MOBA games such as Pokémon Gathering. 3. Martial arts will be added, but they are mainly used to train Pokémon and protect themselves from surprises. There will be no humanoid monsters. But the sword master Emperor Nabo and the mantis boxing master Itachi definitely have it (strengthening some of the physical attackers). The form is similar to the angry rush of biting the land shark in the big rally, that is, a multi-stage combination technique. 4. The strengthening of Boscodora is a large-scale branch line. It is to bring out the theme of technology changing destiny. There is no qualification system to directly highlight the advantages. There must be a way to strengthen the system. Although I like to abuse the master, I can't just take beatings. 5. There will be some plots that trigger thinking about social issues. How can we sail without crew members? They can't all be girls, but they must also have close friends and followers who share the same ideals. (The villain is also arranged) 6. As a Hearthstone enthusiast, there may be some new Pokémon transformed from Hearthstone cards. (I removed this part if I didn't like it) 7. Cancel the wound medicine series, reduce the types of tree fruits, and replace the wound medicine with some well-known Chinese medicine prescriptions such as Yunnan Baiyao, etc. The main reason is that the original version is too crude. 8. There are many food plots. There are so many good ingredients. It would be a pity not to try them, but it would dilute the plot of deliberately harming Pokémon. (I arranged the sacrifice to the sea just to give you some preparation) 9. In order to better shape the character's image and reduce the workload, many times a supporting role may come from a certain work, or be mixed together. If you find it, you will smile. Post xxx in the comments. Is that you? That's it. 10. The protagonist's boat is still being designed. If you have friends who are majoring in navigation or drawing, you are welcome to communicate. 11. Add after thinking about it.