Versatile Mage: The Final Sun Angel

After reading so many all-fa fanfics, only the Summoner one is well written. The author's book is also quite good. It is not stuck to the original work and is not restricted by the framework of the original work. Personally, I feel that it is at least the top three among all the all-fa fanfics. It is also about the light system. I think the author's writing style is much better than Zhuoyao's, and everyone Everyone has their own mage journey. No matter how strong Mo Fan is, he is still a mage. Uncle Luan only provides us with a world view of the magic plane, and Mo Fan is just the more prominent one among many mages. I hope the author will not be a eunuch and continue the magic plane. It is best to fill the big hole left by Uncle Luan. Hope to accept Yali!

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How can I put it, I can't stand it, I'm off the mark, and now I'm reading the chapter about Yali trying to keep Mu Ningxue in Chapter 98, and the result is more and more silent. In summary, apart from whether the protagonist is a human or a ghost, the original characters are exaggerated, which is fine in normal novels, but in fan fiction, the original characters are too showy, and their combat power is completely different from the original. It's more than a little bit too exaggerated. The original character is so tricky, and being too popular not only doesn't bring out the excitement, but makes the protagonist seem too ordinary. The most important thing is that the protagonist feels very ordinary except for his talent, as if he has no opinions of his own and is shrouded in the will of all parties. For example, Han Ji took Xinxia as his disciple before, and had no plans for being divided up by the boss or even planning for the future. It's nothing to do with the slow popularity of fan fiction, but this feeling is that apart from being shown off for several rounds, there is no sense that the protagonist has any highlights. Of course, it's not that the author's writing is not good. To be honest, the writing of the protagonist is quite good. Except for the big pitfall of a bunch of original characters, I'm not sure about it. So, has anyone who has seen the latest chapter replied and consoled me, did the protagonist pick it up in the later period? Don't let the original characters show off one after another. In the end, the protagonist is led by the nose like a cute new character. At least he should be handsome once. After all, readers basically assume the perspective of the protagonist, but now, with a bunch of original characters showing off, the protagonist doesn't even have the feeling of being powerful, not to mention the elusive mystery. Anyway, come on, by the way, come here and see the latest boss's reply, have you caught it?

Let me sum it up. I haven't seen much of it. To be honest, the writing is okay, the plot arrangement is too stiff, and there are real problems with talents. Let me tell you, is it serious about the protagonist's arrangement of ordinary talents? Oh, it seems a little bit higher, but it's the light system. Moreover, one thing to pay attention to when writing a novel is to give readers the desire to continue reading in the early stage, which is like hiding the second series full-time. This book is enjoyable, but there is too little. If you want more people to want to read it, you have to arrange some enjoyable ones. There is also the strength of the protagonist. His talent is mediocre to begin with, but he has been working hard until now, and then arranges a big wave for him in the early stage? To be honest, it's too literary, and the protagonist has no sense of existence at all, which makes people feel very useless. I was persuaded to quit here. The arrangement of this event is too rigid, especially the story of the Queen in White. Are you really serious? This is an enemy, the kind that almost kills you. Your book was very frustrating to read in the early stages, and I didn't feel as happy at the end. In the early stage, I only wrote about frustration, frustration, frustration. I know what you want to write, but holding it back like this will only make readers uncomfortable to be honest.

Before watching: A new female game character is created After watching: Get out of here, whatever Xinxia is, I only want Jiang Yali. It's really hard not to love this sweet and royal little rich woman!

I can see that in the world of full-time mage, you can upgrade if you have money Beginner level will cost several million Intermediate level will cost tens of millions High level will cost several hundred million Super level will cost several billions No wonder everyone can't afford to upgrade So talent is the return on investment The higher the return on investment, the better. The more talent you have, the better No wonder the Dongfang family's fire element has such a high rating Mo Fan is born with two elements, which looks bluffing In fact, the return on investment is still negative If you invest twice the resources, you will not be able to be two normal high-level envoys if you are a high-level six-series user. In other words, Mo Fan has much more cheating resources than others to upgrade.

Who doesn't like this kind of quirky girl? So, why? Why not the heroine? If a girl is so nice to you, why don't you just accept her as soon as possible?

Woohoo, I'm extremely sorry. The new author suddenly fell ill. Stop scolding. Stop scolding. Woohoo orz

After reading the first six chapters, I have no desire to read anymore. What did the author write in the golden three pieces? Moreover, the protagonist does not have as many supporting roles. Teacher Lin is really good at jumping and pretending. The most important thing that makes me dislike it is that the talent of the protagonist is written so poorly by the author. The protagonist is not as fast as his classmates in training, which makes it boring to watch (my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) 🌝

I take back my disparagement of the first volume. I read a little bit of the second volume and felt better. I put it on the bookshelf first. After finishing all four volumes, I will finish them and finish them. This is the best full-time fanfic I have ever read, even better than the Summoner book. The author should not be bad! ! !