Creating a Timeline in the Ninja World

How to say it? I just took a look and found that I can't use my hands, my eyes have been blind for three years and my body is weak enough, and I haven't returned to Konoha yet because I'm in coma for ten days and a half. How can there be so many people on the battlefield to take care of the sick protagonist? Wouldn't it be good to just return to Konoha and slowly develop it? Also, wouldn't it be better to change the blind eye to the one that was blind three days ago? Ordinary people who are blind in one eye should be healed in about half a year.

The thing that puzzles me the most is that the protagonist uses the transformation technique to turn into a pendant and put it on the shadow clone. This is not the seventy-two transformations of Sun Wukong. The transformation technique in Naruto is a blind trick. How can you really become a real egg by transforming into an egg through the transformation technique? The transformation technique cannot change the mass, body size, genes and body structure. If the transformation technique is really so awesome, it must be described in Naruto. If the transformation technique is really so awesome, Naruto's style of painting is: Isn't it nice for me to directly turn into a bird and fly away with the transformation technique? What kind of flying psychic beast do I want! When the team encounters an enemy and is defeated, everyone uses the transformation technique to turn into an egg to change their size and weight. Wouldn't it be nice to have one person run away holding twenty or thirty teammates who have turned into eggs? When I encounter an enemy, I can use the transformation technique to directly change my genetic form into a big toad, a big snake, or a big slug. Isn't it delicious?

I've just read half a chapter and I have to complain. I don't hate loser protagonists, but at least you have to be a reasonable loser. At least you know the basic settings of the original work. Can't injured muscles be completely healed? The palm senjutsu can completely heal without leaving any scars, and the meridians are not damaged, nor are they struck by the Wind Release Rasen Shuriken, and how could the Uchiha clan allow their own people's supplies to be damaged? Moreover, people are generally self-sufficient, and supplies should be handed over through members of the clan. Moreover, the eye was injured for three years, but it was not removed even if it could not be cured. It is still producing pus. It is outrageous. A normal person would have been blind in both eyes for three years.

If you told Minato about Uchiha Madara's existence, Sarutobi and Hiruzen would also know about it. Then the surveillance you are under will definitely be more serious than now. If you tell Minato to rescue Obito, what's the use?

I stopped reading halfway through the first chapter. Waste material is no longer popular nowadays.

Qianming crossed his arms and asked: "Zhisui, do you remember how much bread you have eaten? " "Remember, one pound." Zhisui nodded and said. "Oh." Qianming nodded, and then asked: "Do you remember eating a big snake?" "Snake? Snake meat is a good food, but snake meat is too unpalatable. I haven't eaten it since I was a child." Shisui said. "Really." Qianming said: "Then, let me tell you a story. This story is that someone once ate a giant python and used its internal organs to make poison. However, that poison was just an ordinary medicine for snakes and was of no use at all." "Oh." Shisui still nodded to show that he understood.

After reading dozens of chapters, the plot changes somewhat inexplicably. I just set up the Sword Saint character, thinking that I would rely on cheats to become a decisive and decisive warrior, but suddenly I said I wanted to be Hokage? The reason is that he thinks he can do it? ? ? Have you forgotten how miserable it was without strength before there were plug-ins? Have you forgotten how you were slapped to death in your first life as a sword master? The weather has cleared up and the rain has stopped. Do you feel you can do it again?

There are a lot of poisonous points, but most of them are not important It is mainly to promote the plot. The protagonist wants to be Hokage, but he is disgusted anyway! The image of a swordsman who pursues force has been well described and very profound. Suddenly his style of painting changed and he began to pursue power It was just fame. After becoming strong, wouldn't it be enough to kill thousands of people during the Ninja World War? Who dares to touch Uchiha while you are alive? And there are so many ways to become Hokage, it's disgusting to watch. It's nothing more than various tragedies of change, somewhat like the Holy Mother, and then killing a wave of high-level officials in Konoha. To be honest, I almost vomited when I saw it. It's too deliberate. You can obviously take people away, or the strength of a protagonist in Konoha is his own. It has nothing to do with you, just hang it up! I chose to be Hokage Just like Xuan Yi in the Godzilla book, the writing is perfect, no one dares to mess with it, and no one interferes with the plot for the sake of so-called feelings. Everything is natural, plain but exciting.

Big idea, bad writing, I didn't read it

In a world where ninjas dig out your eyes and put them on directly, your right eye has been injured for three years and is still bleeding...😅