Creating a Timeline in the Ninja World

Well, I just checked, and he can't exert any force with his hands, and his eyes haven't healed after being blind for three years, so his constitution is weak enough. He also falls into a coma for ten days or half a month at a time and still hasn't returned to Konoha. Where are we going to find so many people on the battlefield to take care of this sick protagonist?

What I don't understand the most is that the protagonist uses transformation jutsu to become a mere accessory and attach himself to a shadow clone. This isn't like Sun Wukong's 72 transformations; transformation jutsu in Naruto is just an illusion. How could you possibly transform into an egg and actually become a real egg? Transformation jutsu can't change mass, size, genes, or body structure.

I've only read half a chapter, and I have to come out and complain. I don't hate the "trash-to-riches" protagonist trope, but at least make it believably weak! At least know some basic settings from the original work! A muscle injury can't be completely healed?

If you told Minato about Madara Uchiha's existence, Hiruzen Sarutobi might also find out, and the surveillance you'd be under would be far more intense than it is now. And what's the point of having Minato rescue Obito? There would still be other Obito-like figures like Obito and Zombie.

I didn't want to read more than half of the first chapter; the "trash" trope isn't popular anymore.

Qianming crossed his arms and asked: "Shisui, do you remember how many loaves of bread you've ever eaten?" "I remember, one jin (500 grams)." Zhi Shui nodded and said. "Oh." Qianming nodded, then asked: Do you remember eating a large snake? "Snake? Snake meat is a good ingredient, but it tastes awful. I've never eaten it since I was a child," Shisui said. "Yeah."

After reading dozens of chapters, the plot twists are rather inexplicable. Just when the Sword Saint persona was established, it seemed like he was going to rely on overpowered abilities and a ruthless, decisive style of combat, but then suddenly he says he wants to become Hokage? His reason? He thinks he can do it??? Have you forgotten how miserable it was before he had any power-ups?

There are many flaws, but most of them are not important. The main reason for this is simply to advance the plot; the protagonist wants to become Hokage, and it's disgusting! The character of a swordsman pursuing strength was already well-developed and deeply memorable, but suddenly the style changed, and he started pursuing power. It's just a reputation.

The plot is wildly imaginative, but the writing is terrible; I couldn't finish reading it.

In a world where ninjas gouge out eyes and then reattach them, your right eye has been injured for three years and is still oozing pus... 😅