League of Legends: I Really Am Trying My Best

Why did they re-sign the contract with EDG so quickly? Better to be the head of a chicken than the tail of a phoenix. What can EDG offer their star player? A substitute; they don't trust them. Why does it have to be EDG? Has the factory manager retired? He hasn't retired; the protagonist's day is yet to come.

When writing, please don't have the commentator keep calling him Chen Mo. If you like calling him that all the time, why not use "chenmo" as your ID?

This protagonist is practically mute; he can't utilize his precognitive advantage at all, just forcing others to use "black technology" (advanced techniques). And even if he does, he doesn't warn his teammates, letting them feed, then forcing a loss, forcing himself to carry, and acting like a complete jerk. It's disgusting.

I still prefer to call players by their ID or nickname, especially during matches. It always feels strange to call them by their names directly, especially a few years ago.

The main character's speech within the team during the match is inconsistent, sometimes calm and sometimes loud. Is he having a split personality?

This novel was written by an EDG fan; if you're not a die-hard EDG fan, don't read it. In one story, Clearlove (EDG's star player) plays and the team keeps losing, yet the protagonist is benched. There's constant distrust, and he's always there to save the day. This is impossible in a competitive match. Skill is paramount.

The main character is a traitor; after leaving DNA to return to EDG as a substitute, most readers have already left. Those who continue reading are true EDG fans; he was given the best treatment, yet he's going back to be a substitute.

You writers of professional fiction... Don't you know that professional fiction also falls under the category of urban fiction? Your writing is all about competitions or the journey to competitions... Why don't you just write slice-of-life stories? 😰

I didn't want to watch the World Championship after it started. I can tolerate other minor mistakes, but the fact that the official S7 ban on Ornn wasn't even properly investigated shows that the author didn't do any research and didn't even use their brain. They probably just searched for match videos to create a story.

This is utterly disgusting. The protagonist travels back in time and all he does is play video games. He doesn't mention anything about drafting, tactics, game awareness, or rhythm. It's like if you travel back in time and know there will be an earthquake tomorrow, you don't say anything and wait until the earthquake is over and the houses have collapsed before digging up your family members. You have to be a savior to play video games.