
I Pick up Pieces in the Ninja World
我在忍界捡碎片
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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After reading Chapter 47, what you said, author, does make some sense. However, you also have to consider other factors. For example, the taste of readers in our country! The four high-ranking officials of Konoha, Sarutobi, Danzo, Monoyan, and Koharu, are quite popular among readers in our country. There are many reasons! For example, many readers in our country read novels with their IQ in mind. Another example is that there were several well-written Naruto fanfics in the past few years. It is set that Hokage Sarutobi, Potato Danzo, consultant Men Yan and Koharu are black, and many readers accept it. Why? Apart from the reasons why Naruto fan fiction is well written. You will find that throughout the entire Naruto anime, there are not too many problems with this setting. And connects the entire Naruto series together! To be honest, I didn't accuse them wrongly. After all, the four of them have the most power in Konoha Village, and they basically have the final say. Think about how White Fang died? He is Hokage! Think about how Neji's father died? He is Hokage! Think about Naruto's childhood? He is Hokage! Think about how the Uchiha were exterminated? He's the Hokage and all that! It's not unfair to them. After all, Konoha Village mainly has the final say among the three Hokage Sarutobi, Pot King Danzo, Advisor Men Yan and Koharu. Who would believe it if you said they were unaware of and had no involvement in the above things? So, author, you want to reshape Sarutobi, the Third Hokage? It's really hard! In this environment where many readers accept that Sarutobi, Danzo, Monoto, and Koharu, the four top leaders of Konoha, are Kuro, the author, you insist on washing out the behavior of Sarutobi, the third Hokage! Personally, I think your efforts are in the wrong direction. The harder you work, the more you fail!
The protagonist has such an awesome system, but as a result, he has to suppress his attributes and can only cultivate the fire attribute. I remember that there are many ways to have other attributes in Naruto?
You haven't watched Naruto at all, right? Or maybe you have only a little knowledge about how chakra can break through?
There is a reason for jumping on the street, but unfortunately you won't change it even if the reason is slapped in your face.
I just read a few chapters. The author writes about the Uchiha clan as civilian ninjas. The Uchiha clan is basically a chuunin after awakening the Sharingan, and the amount of chakra will also increase. This is the benefit brought by the blood inheritance limit, and the genin is just a professional title. Sasuke's first mission in the land of waves. Just seconds after Zabuza followed his Kijin brothers (all Chuunin), Sasuke, as a genin without the Sharingan, also has the frontal combat power of an average Chunin. The protagonist opens his eyes at the age of 13, and after returning to the clan to train normally for one year, he can become an elite Chunin. Is your plug-in slower than the normal procedure? ?
I can defeat them, why do I need their fragments! What kind of logic is this?
Even though he was an Uchiha, Qin Yi and Qin Yi kept yelling. Are you so stubborn? The sense of immersion has been smoothed out, as if I was watching Conan, who was dubbed in the middle, and what he is is what I am. I have seen so many time-travel Naruto movies, but I have never seen anyone with a Chinese name who can feel a sense of immersion. Don't write a time-travel Japanese comic novel. Isn't it good for a person to time-travel?
The main character's name is so ridiculous. In the Japanese comics, he insists on calling him Qin Yi, and he keeps writing it.
Shukaku fragments sometimes cost 200 and sometimes 1000. The essence is sometimes 1,000 and sometimes 10,000. What the hell are you writing about? I have a bad memory and am writing blindly.
If there were no settings like those of the first generation Otsutsuki, then there would be no problem with the settings of the third generation. However, after the subsequent big bosses appeared, the settings of the third generation were no longer tenable. Looking at the events from his rise to power starting from White Fang, then it is normal to hack him, rather than judging by the settings. After all, the author of the original work cannot come back, so there is no need for readers to stick to the setting to determine whether it is good or bad.
The protagonist is an Uchiha Hiruzen
It should be a product of the studio.
It's an inexplicable waste of promotion. If you just forget it and write it out, is this screening readers?
Didn't the author read it himself after he finished writing? No matter who he is, he calls the protagonist Qin Yi. What does the author want to do?
Because the third generation is getting older, they have begun to maintain stability strategies! Because Danzo has always longed for Hokage, he went further and further off the mark when doing things! In fact, no matter whether it is black or not, logically speaking, the third generation is old, so he is timid, Danzo wants it but cannot get it, and his behavior begins to be extreme! During the Nine-Tails Rebellion, since only the fourth generation could fly the Thunder God, could we expect the third generation to protect Kushina? The Yondaime died because his wife exhausted too much physical energy after giving birth, and because Obito was causing trouble, he couldn't recover the Kyuubi, so he didn't want to live anymore. Fortunately, he gave half of the Kyuubi to his son! As for why Danzo's roots are not there, that's another story!
White Fang and the Sannin have just become famous, Minato has not yet disappeared, and Kakashi has his own training ground. How embarrassing.
Ninjas don't fight for no reason. Even in times of war, they fight because they have missions and objectives, such as protecting a medical base to prevent enemy sneak attacks, or conducting reconnaissance and assassinations, or capturing strategic areas, or going deep behind enemy lines to destroy supplies. However, the author writes that as soon as he travels through time, the protagonist will fight non-stop every day. There is no mission goal assigned by a superior, so the team goes out to find the enemy independently every day. It's too poisonous. Is this a war? This is the protagonist playing an online game. The enemies are all wild monsters in the wild. You can kill them whenever you want! Part-time job is brainless!