Beast Control: My Pet Can Travel Through Dimensions

Forget about water, that's the character of a rabbit. I'm really speechless. Just change it to another one.

How should I put it? The writing is a bit messy, there are too many jokes and jokes, and the plot advances a bit slowly. Since it is a beast, the cultivation and interaction are not written in detail.

How should I put it, after reading so many chapters, there is a lot of nonsense. The introduction to galaxies is very comprehensive, all for the sake of word count. Who wants to learn your knowledge about galaxies when reading this book? The cultivation of pet beasts is all mentioned in one stroke. I don't know what to write.

Oops, there are so many categories of pet animals, can you finish them? I'm tired after reading the introduction.

The protagonist's personality is not likeable and is seriously watered down. The world view is introduced in more than ten chapters, and it is not complete, such as combat, high-end, and life.

I have some comments There are too many confusing settings It's useless The author wants to build a living world But the writing style can't control it

The author watered it too hard. The synopsis of the story is pretty good, but it's too watery. The content of one chapter fills 3 to 4 chapters. And it's all bullshit.

I feel lonely after watching it. It will be released soon. Novice Village has not started yet.

The large number of settings shows that the author wants to conceive of a complete system, but what about the plot and the interaction with the pet beasts? There are so few that there is no need to throw out the settings all at once. Take your time and step by step. Personally, I quite like the setting category, but don't ignore the main body.

Your protagonist's character is a bit hard to describe.

I think it's well written, but the world view is too big. Can the author handle it?

It looks a bit messy, and the presence of plug-ins is a bit low.

The setting is quite good, but the two-dimensional style of writing is too strong, which makes people look very theatrical and embarrassed. I feel like I can't stand it. I hope it can be changed.

I love watching the Pokemon-type setting so much that I can't stand it 😭. It's watery and boring. There are also some jokes that I can't understand. There are too many jokes and I'm tired of it.

The idea is very good and the writing is very good. Overall, I don't recommend it.

The author is going to start wearing women's clothing, otherwise there will be no comments

I didn't understand what a sexy move the rabbit was doing when he pooped into the protagonist's mouth at the beginning.