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Uh, how should I put it, Zanpakutō Totama is a female, so I'm going to make myself look like a girl, and depending on how the tone of voice will relate to the protagonist, I'm going to make myself look like myself? The protagonist is so ruthless that he not only transforms himself into a girl but also makes fun of himself? ? ?

Can't you write something about our country? !

It's good in all aspects, the protagonist's mentality change is reasonable, and the protagonist's hang-up is also reasonable. If the protagonist's interest is not given to the protagonist, it is likely to be buried. After all, the entertainment in the parallel world is underdeveloped and the imagination is insufficient. But I still have a few suggestions. I am not teaching the author how to write a book. It is not a malicious suggestion. It doesn't matter if you adopt it or not. 1. Is it really okay to use the real name for the nickname of the extraordinary game world?(This article was deleted because I haven't had time to name it yet, but it seems that 2 is not wrong, the name is already known) 2. Deduction skills may allow the protagonist to have Give a sense of participation, for example, the protagonist falls into a mysterious and mysterious state, and then deduce the ability, otherwise it will feel that this talent is not like the protagonist's own power and can be easily withdrawn 3. After choosing a profession, you can combine the genres to regenerate skills, which can enhance the protagonist's skill diversity 4. Even if it is an official, you should not ask about the highest level of privacy issues such as talent level. This is a taboo, isn't it? What's more, the protagonist is the first character to establish the sect, and everyone should know the talent level. 5. The deduction is inherently idealistic. Maybe it can be set so that I don't need to know the principle, as long as I think about and have the energy system with the ability. The energy system can be deduced by thinking about it. But as for ability, considering that at this stage, if I really just think about it, I can deduce the ability that the protagonist wants. It is too buggy to write down. I have two options for adding settings: (Based on having the energy of the system (chakra, spiritual pressure, internal force)) a. The protagonist can deduce the ability he wants as long as he thinks about it, but the deduction needs to consume the system or other energy. The more powerful the character is, the greater the consumption. The protagonist's current energy is not enough to support the protagonist's ability to deduce the powerful character. As the protagonist becomes stronger, he can deduce various awesome abilities. b. As long as I think about it, I can deduce the desired abilities, set levels for Xuanji Xingyan, and then set levels for each ability. For example, setting the Sharingan, Zanpakutō, and some relatively useless Devil Fruits to level 3 abilities. Xuanji Xingyan can deduce abilities that are 2 levels higher than his own, so the protagonist is currently a level 1 Xuanji Xingyan and can deduce level 3 abilities. (Sharingan, Zanpakutō, and Devil Fruit abilities have unlimited potential and cannot only be level three, but the strength that can be cashed out at the beginning is only level three, so they are classified as level three abilities) 6. It is recommended to update more every day to better retain people. Again, these are just suggestions. If the author has his own plans, don't ignore them and follow his own plans.

Can't you write about our country? As for copyright infringement, who told you to only write about anime? Can't we write about mythology, fairy tales, and fantasy? Where does the infringement come from?

I wrote about a bunch of women, just to make things ambiguous. It's not impossible that the liaison officer is a woman, but her character is really unlikable (very annoying).

Can't cultivate immortality? Can't practice martial arts? Make a crap Zanpakutō.

It deserves to be a daily guide. At this level, it would not even rank among the average at the starting point.

Go back to where you came from, what the hell?

The writing is so confusing. What are the situations? The plot is so confusing.

A bunch of Japs' belongings slipped away. I don't know why, but it makes me sad to see them.

This book is suitable for reading without thinking, even if it is read without thinking 😒

This book is very messy and very uncomfortable to read. There is no main line.

The previous plots looked pretty good, but I gave up as soon as I entered the dungeon plot... The dungeon plot was too abrupt... It was like an inexplicable insertion of a story in the middle of other novels... It made me confused. There was no story background or timeline. I just started thinking about it... I don't know what writing technique or other ideas I wanted to use... When I saw the dungeon plot, I felt like eating ice cream and suddenly eating gall in the middle...

Can you really write the introduction carefully? Put up a brand of strategic flow. Why write an introduction of an invincible flow that a sow can climb a tree for?

It's best to use fewer uncommon words, and the settings should be simpler, otherwise it will look laborious.

??? A group of cuties ran to the flower shop and asked why they didn't sell fruit. Are there any roadside fruit stalls that want to buy fruit? Are you here to make trouble?

To be honest, hypocritical. All kinds of dead words, all kinds of fancy descriptions.

Why can't we deduce a method of cultivating immortals? There are so many legends in our country, including imagination in novels. The upper limit is ridiculously high, right? All kinds of abilities in Japanese and American comics are just spells.

The writing is really bad, the dialogues are so embarrassing to me, even the simple writing can't compare to it.

There's nothing else about it, it's just too messy and I can't use many of the skills. The map keeps changing and I can't tell the difference.

They are all Japanese animation skills, so I have no idea. 88

Self-pleasure diary. Fellow Taoists, please do not enter.

Rubbish, the male protagonist split his soul to create a Zanpakutō, and the Zanpakutō is a woman, yes, it is a woman. Why not write about women? Don't you know how to write about women? For me to be a man, I want to see the passion and blood of a real man, not the rubbish of a girl.

No more updates? There has been no update for 16 days

I think it's okay and I have the desire to continue reading, mainly because of the 4th natural disaster.

Do you plan to stretch this copy to a hundred chapters?

Damn it, consider making arrangements?

Can you write a book without using uncommon words? This does not show how educated you are and will only make reading tiring.

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