Dimensional Invasion: I Can Fish the Sky

Damn it, it's too watery. The female PU protagonist in Chapter 158 can't bear this. She gives back the Nikka fruit in exchange for Kati dog. The protagonist is a fool. Isn't that the one who is more valuable? Can't you tell? Don't tell me that this is to provide emotional value to the protagonist, bah, ordinary Pokémon will be very powerful in reality, no matter how powerful it is, can it be as powerful as the Nika Fruit? The author sees something wrong and needs to overwhelm the combat power, otherwise I will trade him for the Nika Fruit and eat the Thunder Fruit. The protagonist is purely a Shabi, so Su Mengyao is also a Shabi who doesn't know anything and just makes random guesses. Look at my bad temper. If I don't teach her a lesson, am I still a man? She is purely a Shabi who has been deceived by the aura of subjugation, and deliberately helps the protagonist to open a harem. The protagonist seems to have no feelings for this aspect, but I bet that he will be forced to open a harem later. Summary: The beginning is good, but the pure water story later adds a lot of Shabi and intellectual elements. It is recommended to read a few chapters and quickly change the book.

The protagonist often disappears, and there are too many descriptions of supporting characters. It has tended to be a group portrait article. Moreover, it is not a well-written group portrait article, and there are no supporting characters with vivid images Daily writing, I can't find half a chapter in three or four chapters.

The second time it happened, I wanted both. The first time I said I had nothing to do and went to school to experience it, but later I realized it was a test or I wanted to show off, so I stopped going to school. This time, he said that "the limit" only needs to wait for a while and then emphasized that he is not short of time, but he wants to challenge the limit and play the game of life and death. Are all Qidian books a template? Every pig's foot is as if someone is chasing after it and can't stop for a second? After one thing is over, no matter whether there is another thing or not, the pig's feet have to be taken care of. How interesting is this kind of immortal cow and horse?

In the first few pictures, everyone who sees the protagonist has to comment on his clothing. This kind of physical description is too much. The setting is really stupid. Since you let the whole world know that there is a so-called "template", you should also write some niche works, which are all popular works such as Pirates, Fox Demons, Marvel, and Super Heroes, and then spread to the world. The setting is too big in space, but the writing is too small. I already have superpowers and am still going to school. It feels like the whole world has been invaded by cosplay, but my daily life has not changed.

The writing of this novel is good. But the theme was wrong. A novel with a theme like this will definitely collapse in the later stages. It's so messy. The practice method has special powers, plus the templates and props, the writing is actually pretty good. But the author shouldn't have added that this character from all worlds can also travel to the protagonist's world, and added this setting in the later stage. It will definitely be messy and messy.

The protagonist who was thought to be down-to-earth at the beginning suddenly turned into a person who forced himself to drink. The author gave people a sense of superiority that his ideas were higher than ordinary people. The novel gave people a sense of preaching, and he outputted his ideas crazily. The setting of the novel itself has loopholes. Even the free chapters are like this, so just pay.

Extremely poisonous, The author assumes that the protagonist possesses a template from the period of the Mask Group of King Quan Hegemony, and also obtains three thousand starry sky flames, as well as the rat talisman to activate the full version of Bengyu, constantly improves his swordsmanship, and also comprehends the meaning of King Quan's sword. It is a royal sword that is stronger and more awesome than the anime. He also uses the rat charm to activate the swordsman from all over the world to fight against the protagonist. Comminicate. Study. Enhance the protagonist's sword skills. Originally, this setting is normal, but the protagonist summons a bunch of Japanese swordsman warriors. As we all know, Japanese swords are indistinguishable. Strong swordsmen in Japanese comics all use swords. Originally, this was okay. There was nothing wrong with discovering the weaknesses of one's own swordsmanship in a sword duel and improving it. But the author doesn't. He keeps praising the opponent's swordsmanship and how awesome it is. Even if he tries to cheat, he can't catch up. He has to work harder to learn the opponent's swordsmanship and try harder to cheat. That's the problem. The author does not distinguish between swords and swords, so does the king's power and hegemony also do not distinguish between swords? Doesn't the king's power and sword intention also distinguish between swords and swords? The protagonist gives people the feeling of evolving from 5-jou enlightenment to 2.5-Jou enlightenment

What fishing in the heavens. Fishing in Japan is almost the same

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the synopsis, I knew that I was going to jump into the game soon. The background of the story is numerous and confusing, the protagonist has many skills, and the power system is also messy. I couldn't finish writing it at once.

After reading a few chapters, I found it to be quite good, but the title of the book has a bit of a useless donkey style. I think the good thing about the setting is that everyone knows about anime, and it feels like you are the only one in the world who knows about it.

Once I was young and frivolous, and I could do anything, but I realized that people will eventually come to an end. Although Huaizhu is a concubine, he has no wife in his hegemony, and his head is white in the world, but he can live up to his true heart.

The world of Nitian Poison is like this. If you just get the method of cultivation and don't practice it, you still go to an ordinary school to continue studying. Nitian, didn't you go to school in your previous life? Even if you miss out on the nine-year compulsory education, you don't have to stop practicing cultivation and go to a regular school at this time, right? It's poisonous

First, and most importantly, Tai Shui, some things that did not need to be emphasized repeatedly were described to him repeatedly. It took two or three pages to describe the protagonist doing one thing, but he spent five or six pages describing why he did it and what he was thinking. Second, the protagonist pretends to be inexplicable. What about "You can withstand my own strength without dying, your defense is good" and all kinds of actions and words are full of chuunibo pretentiousness.

In the latest chapter, the state agencies are so stupid that they released the information of a child who may become a Snow Mastiff Armor in the future. They are afraid that he will survive, right? Are they afraid of assassination or kidnapping by other countries, or some people have ulterior motives, just to give the people confidence? What kind of confidence does it need to rely on a child, and it's not like the Emperor's Armor Summoner.

I've read 20 chapters, 20% of the plot, 80% of the psychological activities and settings, it's so outrageous, how can I watch it? Farewell

This understanding that a kilometer radius is a god is rubbish. Does your god's destructive power count in meters?

I suggest the author change the paragraph where the Japanese character teaches the protagonist the way of kendo. After all, the swords used by the Japanese are exactly swords, and what they use can be regarded as the way of the sword instead of the way of the sword. However, the Japanese do not understand the difference between the sword and the sword at all, so they always think of the sword and the way of the sword as the sword and the way of the sword.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. The subject matter is very good and the author is very good. 1. Every action, every line of dialogue, and every plot must be described with a lot of inner explanations, which is exhausting to watch. 2. The author did not grasp the progress of the protagonist's personality change. In the first chapter, I was still lying flat, with a dull mentality, but in the next few chapters, I started to show off, deliberately portraying an invincible, aloof character, and seemed to have a condescending tone towards everything.... The above is my personal experience after reading more than 30 chapters. Maybe it will be better in the future, but I slipped away~

Can you stop worrying so much about Ultraman B?

It's too watery, wheel talk, explanations over and over again, a spiritual energy tide is proposed, the person who proposed it explains it once, the protagonist explains it again in his mind, and the two of them discuss it again after the end. One chapter has passed, and after a few chapters, it is explained again. The same goes for the King Power Hegemony template, which is repeatedly said to be awesome.

Isn't the God of Death blowing too hard? You, the author, want to write. Can Jian Xiu write well? Why are there so many complicated things in the residue? When Rat Talisman came out, I had a premonition that the plot would go crazy. And he also pretends to be X for readers to see. . Yes, it feels like it's specially staged. After all, there are no other supporting characters to watch, it's just for the readers to watch. It's not okay to play tricks. No beginning or end. But it is definitely a second-grade novel. If you read it as a second-grade article, it will be fine. . In short, there are some things in the settings, the framework and content are not allocated well. To put it bluntly, the combat power is greatly reduced.

The article about the Rat Talisman was abandoned directly.

Those who have no symptoms of illness can gather great achievements, while those who are incompetent build a platform for self-exaltation.

I was instantly poisoned after reading the beginning. Anyone who can finish this book is already immune to all poisons.

There is still a market for this kind of novel where water is written on the face. Everyone is guilty.

Looking at the introduction, what the Yanwang Emperor template can hold is a bandage.

Chapter 180 started to get messed up. The main character Shen Yin, I like water people so much. Why didn't I write about the behind-the-scenes drama? It was withdrawn.

Three chapters have passed and I don't know what you are going to write about in this book. Five chapters have passed and I haven't seen the main line at all. It's all water. Ten chapters have passed and I still don't know what I'm reading.

I canceled it and unknowingly subscribed to Deacon. I feel like my money has been wasted. The content is ridiculous. There are long paragraphs of meaningless sentences in one chapter, and there is no serious content.