The Immortal Cultivation Family That Begins from Yutan Mountain

What the author wrote is okay. But the protagonist's behavior and words are too out of the ordinary. Rather dramatic. Change it more. It should be said that he was still a cultivator in two lifetimes. The character should be relatively stable. The kind that is based on planning and then deciding. Or maybe the author's writing style is not good.

I'm a little disappointed with the main character, he's like a supporting character, much worse than that Yao Yao

The protagonist's behavior is a bit vicious. A person who has experienced severe beatings on earth has traveled across time and his behavior is still so childish.

I feel like the author has written a bit too much. There seems to be no limit to the family's purchase of golden elixirs. You can buy them if you save enough. Are you kidding me? Not to mention that the Zhou family buys golden elixirs too frequently now, right? This was after the family was able to support five Golden Core cultivators without having third-level spiritual veins, and the clan leader's cultivation was promoted to the eighth level of the Golden Core, and was now impacting the ninth level of the Golden Core. Is there no bottleneck in cultivation? What's more, the Zhao family has just emerged. Isn't there anyone targeting the Zhou family to prevent the Zhou family from becoming the second Zhao family? If the royal family can still suppress the whole country, it can also be explained by the fact that under the rules set by the royal family, they cannot blatantly attack the Zhou family. Now that the royal family has become a Jindan force, I don't understand why several Nascent Soul forces let the Zhou family grow. What's more, why can such materials as Jinjie Dan be purchased in large quantities at auctions? With the strength of the Zhou family, they can buy one every few decades, so there are so many established Jindan forces and Nascent Soul forces who should be able to buy more. What's more, why do these Nascent Soul forces sell Jiejin elixirs so aggressively? Shouldn't this kind of resources be completely controlled and used to allow the affiliated forces to work hard for themselves in exchange for it? Now as long as you save enough, you can buy it at the auction. Doesn't that allow the affiliated forces to accumulate strength?

The Zhou family is so useless, they feel like the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. They have to endure it all the time. They have to endure it when others snatch their marriage. Why does this family keep it?

The beginning of the writing is inexplicable and a bit involved.

It's good, but isn't the family affection too cold-blooded? Without any warmth of family affection, it feels colder than the sect. Family affection is very important. How can a family be full of all kinds of conflicts and suspicions and stay in this world of immortality for a long time?

I still hope for a novel with a family + sect structure. Novels based solely on family lack color. Without the protection of the sect, it is difficult for a family to grow and develop.

Practice your writing a little more, or rewrite urban cool articles. You don't have high requirements for writing.

The main character is really poisonous. There are cheats, so you always have to fight hard and take risks. She is also very desperate for death, and her life is too satisfying, so she has to do something about it. Endure one, endure two. To tell the truth is a good book. But the protagonist has lived two lives and behaves more foolishly than an 18-year-old. I really can't stand it

What's going on now! What a waste of words!

Cutting books is addictive. You can finish writing slowly before cutting.

After reading three pictures... I don't know how to use the golden finger... I'm convinced...

The combat power is a bit strange. Two Nascent Souls at one level cannot beat one Nascent Soul at two levels. It's better to focus on the front, middle and later stages. Layers 1-3, layers 4-6 are about the same, and layers 7-9 are about the same. Otherwise, it would be too much of a show to beat two early stages in one early stage.

Why are you always writing about trivial details? The main plot is stuck at chapter 7 or 8. The plot should move forward.

Except for this golden finger, everything is the same

It's good. There is also intrigue in the family. Like those people, if they have no desires or desires and act like a saint, then what else is there to watch?

I would like to recommend the new book "The Supreme Cultivation Family" by an old author. Thank you!

There are too few words. Can a million words be enough?

There is a recent book shortage, do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

Brother, I know why the setting is very good, but the results are very poor. It's because the love triangle between mother-in-law and mother in the first few chapters is too poisonous.

Can't the jade slips of the exercises be copied?

The author's writing style is not good, and he cannot write in detail. From the beginning to the development, he uses irrelevant words to get rid of the water. It is easy to make a scene.

This protagonist is so smart. He has been born in two lifetimes. Why is he so childish? No, look at the thread.

Is this a joke? Why are the people inside so stupid! Still cultivating immortality! ! ! !

I know that my gold finger consumes a lot of money, so I don't focus on profit-making industries. I don't want to make the plate bigger every day, so I just want to eat a few more bites on the existing plate.

The book becomes more and more boring as I read it. When I stand up, I kill all my previous opponents, including sects, etc., And then I start my own country, and then go to the Immortal Sect. Will I be so sentimental?

Book Recommendation: Gathering the Crowd to Become an Immortal

Are there any other maps? It will be finished soon.

Why does Zhang Jie always repeat the previous chapters and then appear later? Is this a poorly edited book? Or what? Or didn't you go in with all your heart? Spending money to read a book and having to read it over and over again is too troublesome and makes me feel uncomfortable.