
Life Hunter
猎命人
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- Eastern Fantasy
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It looked pretty good at first, but as it went on, it became more and more weird. This is writing a novel. You said you want to write down the principles of life in your novel. This is acceptable, but is this a point for the author? He uses the dialogue between characters to write crazy short stories to tell big truths. One chapter is a short story. It is said that it can be exaggerated to the point of being more than half reasonable. Even though the author was suffering from literary illness, he still felt that he should have higher artistic pursuits. However, I have not seen any literary award awarded to such a straightforward and reasonable book. Don't make sense for the sake of making sense. This is really nondescript.
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The author has considerable understanding of traditional culture and related Taoist classics. It is not limited to the flow of luck, but also explains the influence of fate and luck on the character from the perspective of Taoism. 2.High text density (approximately 400 chapters ago) Keep reading. If the quality of the whole book were as good as the first four hundred chapters, it would be enough to dominate the list until the end, but it is a pity that it cannot dominate the list 😁 3.The characters are vividly portrayed (about 400 chapters ago) The first volume has more than 20 important supporting characters, but the characters are distinct and the action decisions are reasonable. Even if they appear again after a large gap in chapters, the readers will not feel confused about the characters. 4. The protagonist has a clear mind (approximately 800 chapters ago) The author describes the protagonist's near-death encounters time and time again, just like a novice guide to the game, teaching readers how to use fate and tactics. The title of the protagonist "Sunshine Boy" has also become one of the hot spots in the early stages of the book. 5.The clues run through the whole book (about 800 chapters ago) The low-grade observation of people, the middle-grade observation of situations, and the high-grade observation of the world by Mingxiu correspond to the protagonist's journey from night guard to observe fortune and survive, to Qiyuan City to observe the situation and determine the outcome, and then to call himself King Xian to subjugate demons. Therefore, the structure of the early and middle stages of the book is quite reasonable, and the plot arrangement of the whole book is generally consistent with the title of the book "The Life Hunter". Summary of shortcomings: 1. Unfinished It's hard to say that the unfinished ending and the eunuch are very bad, but the middle-aged life magician and the story of the Xian Wang in this book can be done in a slow and fast manner. Therefore, as a reader, I think this book is not as good as The Eunuch, and maybe it can be the next Qin Shi Mingyue 😟 2. The Immortal who descends from the gods As the name suggests, he really descends from the sky. Not only the gods but also the demons. The protagonist and the supporting characters cannot fight, either calling them daddy or not recognizing their daddy, which is pure feudal legacy 😅 3. Unclear In the part about the young life magician's trickery, although it is quite long, it still serves the practice of fate and luck. The interweaving is basically appropriate, and the existence of trickery can be regarded as a check and balance on the imperial power. However, there were too many private goods in the later part of the plot and it was not enough to serve the main plot. The protagonist was exposed to gods, demons, and plots. Since then, the main plot has been in a mess, and it has become further and further away from the path of a life magician. This is even more true after going north to eliminate demons. Basically, it relies on the upper realm skills to win over people's hearts. There is no longer a wonderful game, but it is like a game played by gods and gods in the human world. The third grade to the first grade passes in a hurry, and the middle-aged and old people have few lives. In the end, the plot and combat power collapse together 😓 4. The Reasoning Immortal The book gets out of control after the first explanation of the principle of "accumulating one and all solutions". It first elaborates repeatedly, and then criticizes current events. If it ends here, it is still acceptable, at least the principles contained in it still have considerable practical and spiritual significance. But then it started arranging a copy for a reason, and then started to moan without reason, and inserted reasoning without reason, and finally evolved into the point where everything that can be said must be explained first, and every reason must be explained in two chapters. I personally think that novels should not use thousands of words to explain the truth, but should use a few sentences to talk about the spirit. However, the author's attitude towards scripture annotations is still very reasonable 🔨 Save time: Read the beginning rather than the end, saving time and money🤓
Prediction of combat power system
According to the content of the first chapter, this book should include the Confucian and Taoist system of "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism". It is unclear whether Fang Yun will come to join in the later period. In addition, there are common martial arts, Taoist cultivation, and a new system-the art of fate. According to the name of the book, the protagonist should choose this system, and the "Destiny Instrument" that looks like an armillary sphere may be the golden finger similar to Fang Yun's Qishu Tiandi and Su Ye's Altar? The protagonist's original body before the soul was transported has practiced the "Qi Watching Technique", so will the fortune master profession be similar to the Feng Shui Master? Is it a profession that can use the celestial phenomena or the earth's energy to launch attacks?
Just write something
This book is finished Disadvantages: Bad ending warning! Open high and go low warning! Too much preaching warning! Warning for the sudden disappearance of a popular heroine! Warning about huge pitfalls left unfilled! ... Advantages: The world view is good, the early writing is at its peak, the early plot is at its peak, the villain is not brainless, there are character arcs, many characters are almost vividly drawn, have their own thoughts and core, and you can learn something. The above content is given to viewers who have not read this book yet, and also to all viewers who have stayed with me until the end. If there are any omissions, please add them. Let me talk about what I want to say next. If you don't want to be spoiled, don't read it. Oddly enough, I have read Lao Huo's first two works, Confucianism and Taoism and Gods of Gods. They are good works, but the endings are unsatisfactory, but this book is the one that I find most regrettable, the most difficult to reconcile, and the one I want to polish again. In the early stage, the plot was almost polished to an extreme. Even things like eating bowls of noodles were so dazzling that it was almost too dazzling. But in the later stage, like a 35-year-old programmer from a big factory who was defeated by life, he kept the threshold of 20 points every day. Should it be called clean self-discipline? Or are you simply overwhelmed by life and living on a dead salary? I always thought that Xiao Yi would appear in an unexpected way, maybe playing a small game with the mother of ghosts, like a paper wedding dress, unraveling the mysteries and clues at leisure, and finally marrying Xiao Yi in the ghost world. However, in the ending, Xiao Yi did not show up. Maybe Lao Huo felt that the plot of "the most important occasion, a pair of gods and goddesses work together to defeat the bad guys and save the world" is too vulgar? But at least the character's experience or follow-up must be explained The other one is eating books. As mentioned before, a good fishing rod is exclusive to the protagonist. How come it becomes a competition event later? The other one is the ending. Alas, the ending is almost terrible. It lacks core characters, lacks plot foreshadowing, lacks smooth transitions, and lacks character arcs... In other words, is Lao Huo so anxious to open a new book? Well. In general, it is not satisfactory There are too many unsatisfactory things in life. Watching a masterpiece that may be famous all over the world slowly fades away, alas——
Alas, let me talk about the issues that I personally think about. It's 2,000 words. I hope we can discuss it rationally.
I stopped watching Life Hunt when the General King was offline. I still remember how the five super-level monsters' combat power collapsed. I feel that this book is still suitable for hiding behind the scenes and secretly planning the layout, rather than standing in front of the stage to build a strong force. But Fate Magic has become a practice school, and every Fate Magician has the potential to plan. It doesn't show why the protagonist can surpass those great Fate Magicians. A life hunter alone should not be enough. Moreover, there is always a strange feeling of stealing in Life Hunting. After all, it is not your own, so it is difficult to use it as the basis of strength, and it does not give readers a good impression. So later on, I had to use Zhao Yishan's learning method "accumulation method" to use knowledge as the foundation to become a great destiny magician. This path itself is not a problem, but it is actually a bit similar to the goal of the gods to "become a legend". However, the choice and consistent attitude are not as obvious as those of the gods (the plot of the fate drama is reflected, but the big plot and layout are not as good), and the intention is not as good as "Only by working hard enough to make your hair stand on end can the future give you strength". But on the other hand, at first seeking self-protection, then seeking revenge, and later repelling the demon clan and killing the demon sect, there is a process of ideological change, and it becomes more like a living person than an omniscient and omnipotent god. Then let's talk about the conflict between the outline and Golden Finger. Originally, each faction was working on its own and could not unite to fight against Emperor Taining and the Demon Sect, so Li Qingxian needed the buffs of Wenxiu (Gang Feng, Uncle Chunfeng) and Dao Xiu (Young Concubine) to unite; but this ran counter to Golden Finger, because the life-hunting one had to stay behind the scenes to observe fate and layout, so the life-hunting god disappeared in the later stage. As for the other plug-in, Inner God, I don't even want to say that man's ability to conquer nature depends entirely on the upper realm (sweat) In short, the exploration and construction of the world view and power system were not done well. I feel that all books have to solve a core problem, which is why the protagonist is the protagonist. He must have unique characteristics that are difficult to replace. Different web text types have the logic of the text and the logic of the protagonist. Fantasy relies on skill plug-ins, infinite flow relies on the system, fairy tales rely on background skills, science fiction relies on knowledge, games rely on conscious operations, history relies on time travel or worldly knowledge, understanding of historical laws, etc. But Hunting for Life is like a hodgepodge of several books put together. I originally thought it would be a relaxing routine (you can tell from the titles of the first few volumes), plus some interactions with Brother Anbo, Uncle Zheng, the Afang Team, and life magician friends, and then secretly steal Ye Han's life star, and talk about love with the young concubine, the seventh princess, and Xiaoyi. But Uncle Chunfeng has to bear the hatred of the Demon Sect when he goes offline (I have no feelings for Li Gangfeng's cheap father); the strange rules are weird and the system flow completes the task; the exercises are modified by the inner spirit; the learning method is Zhao Yishan's...I feel that in the end only modern people's conscious sensitivity to class is left. Contempt for imperial power, resistance to oppression, and sympathy for the people at the bottom (The last thing the indigenous people also have, but the higher-ups in the Taoist martial arts community don't have this kind of heart and blood) However, purely emotional expressions and theoretical preaching cannot sustain a long novel. I remember when Gods finished Lao Huo, he said that he wanted to write a pure story and talk less about principles and truths. When Lie Ming opened the book, he said that this was just the story of an ordinary person, Li Qingxian. Lao Huo wanted to express some thoughts and themes through this protagonist, which is good, but it lacks a bit of spirit or boldness. As a fortune teller, I am used to being a master of the world. Without the courage to enter the game myself, readers will lack a sense of involvement, which is the main problem. It's just like the side description of the Death Demon Land. It's cruel and evil, but not intuitive. Watching Li Qingxian is like watching a drama, it is difficult to empathize with him. Finally, let's talk about the supporting roles. In fact, it still has great potential to develop into a group portrait. For example, Han Anbo, Zhou Hen, Ye Han, Duan Tianji... Written well: Uncle Zheng: Faced with oppression, he swallowed his humiliation, endured humiliation, and still couldn't survive, showing the helplessness and sadness of the little man; after Li Qingxian became a life magician (after the Qingyun trial?), He still refused to follow him, and only let his son go out to practice and practice his duties honestly. Overall, the portrayal is good Han Anbo: In the early stage, Brother Anbo had great hands and eyes, and was well-versed in human relations. He was the best in the version. It can be seen that Lao Huo has a clear insight into the world. Zhou Chunfeng: I don't have to say this, okay Female character: It doesn't matter if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, writing group portraits is pretty good. Without Li Qingxian, it would be more logical for Ye Han to pursue Jiang Youfei. Li Qingxian is either a thief or practicing fortune-telling. There is no room for emotional development. Readers cannot accept the forced matchmaking. He can only add a like-minded person later because of old things. Speaking of like-minded people, Xiaoyi is also a life magician (I wonder if Xiaoyi was swallowed by Senior Sister Zhao. Doge) Alas... Poorly written: General Wang: Only the power of a strong man, without the heart of a strong man, is far worse than Gao Tiankuo, the devil knows how to be superior. It stands to reason that it is indeed a tragedy to be arranged by Emperor Taining and plotted by the poisonous military advisor throughout his life, but it is a tragedy of being useless. In the end, there is no sense of heroism and fate at all. Reader: That's it? Gone? Ye Han: "The Man Against Fate" (if Ye Han, Li Qingxian, and Duan Tianji were the protagonists) (I wrote this on a whim for fun, please forgive me) The Hou family abandoned his son and was cautious, but when he saw the beautiful fairy, he was shocked to be a heavenly being. There was a down-and-out young man, Li Qingxian, who pursued the fairy and turned evil. Later, he fought openly and secretly, but his methods were inferior, so he was determined not to become his enemy. During the Qingyun test, he met the guardian of the Tianming Sect and learned that his destiny was his, so the strong man made a bet. The Tianming Sect wanted to be wise and protect themselves, but Ye Han was afraid that the Demon Sect would overthrow the world, which would be detrimental to the Taoist Sect and Jiang Youfei, and secretly wanted to escape his fate. When his fate was divided, he asked Li Qingxian to pretend to be the Emperor of Heaven to create changes in his fate. Cherish it in your spare time, restore the destiny god of disaster, keep the crape myrtle to look after you, and give you the chance to steal the sky and change the sun. After the Qingyun test, Ye Han retained his memory and realized the shortcomings of his fate. Qingxian was forced to leave Shendu, and when he became an enemy of Mr. Da, he was helped by Ye Han. The two attracted each other and learned from each other. Qingxian was considered a variable by the Tianming Sect and fell into a strange situation. Ye Han was entrusted to go to Dahe to assist the general Wang. In the final battle, when Li Qingxian lost to Emperor Taining's demon sect and the Destiny Sect was helpless, at a critical moment of life and death, Ye Han returned from the crusade against the demon clan: "His Royal Highness King Xian lent me a valuable treasure in the past, are you willing to return it today?" Li Qingxian stole the sky in exchange for the sun and returned Ziwei Zhaolin, which promoted Ye Han to the super rank, took charge of the overall situation of thousands of states and cities, and killed Emperor Taining. Luck fed back, Li Qingxian hunted down the Tianming Sect's layout, was promoted to Super Grade, and overthrew Duan Tianji to rebuild the Tianming Sect. Everything is part of the plan! Later, Ye Han and Jiang Youfei, Qing Xian and Shen Xiaoyi, and Tianji Zhao Qingchuan got married on the same day, and the whole book was completed. Ah, this is so exciting. Everyone here should be able to understand what I want to express. After reading online articles for so many years, the impression I have in my mind is that the characters have characteristics and charm, and the plot is relatively secondary (personal experience). Then, no, there is still room for improvement. Written at different times of the day, the logic is a bit confusing, so let's make do with it. Having written so much about the power system, logic, sense of substitution, character creation, etc., I still hope that Lao Huo/Xiao Huo can realize their own problems and strengths. That's almost all that needs to be said. See you in the next book.
Expect.
I feel that Lao Huo is a bit like following the path of Master Jin Yong. He started to create Confucianism and Taoism, just like the old man restarted martial arts after Gu Longda. Later, the period of the gods was like the last part of the Condor Trilogy: Heaven and Sword of the Dragon. It was criticized and criticized, but Mr. Jin finally moved out of "The Eight Parts of the Dragon" and no one has doubted the old man's skills since then. So I look forward to the follow-up of this book.
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After catching up on the latest chapter "Chaotic Porridge", I really couldn't bear it anymore. I needed to release my inner confusion and sullenness and write a post to record my thoughts. The following content represents my personal opinion only. The first part of this book is very interesting. In terms of settings: time travel, plug-ins, destiny stars, treacherous places, gods, etc. Are well integrated and very attractive to me; in terms of plot: the dispute with Ye Han, the adventures of treacherous places and the description of the destiny stars, whether I watched it at the beginning or have followed it now, it is a very exciting episode. It is worth reading. I also enjoyed watching it and scored very high. After the Ghost Champion, I felt that something was wrong with this book, although it was just a symptom - this symptom appeared earlier, starting from the beginning of reading this book: the description of the character dialogue made me a little bit awkward, but compared to the wonderful plot and novel setting, it is not harmful. But! As the plot reaches the middle and later stages, everything changes. I think the first part of the plot, storytelling, reasoning and other profiling is very well written! It's the icing on the cake for the main plot. I was quite moved after reading it👻. The more I wrote, the more addictive it became? Various stories emerge one after another: "My father/uncle/Zhao Shoufu once said..." "I heard such a thing..." Can't we continue chatting without telling stories? The description of the characters' expressions is just a few words over and over again: "smile", "nod", "silence", "wide eyes", "roll eyes", "sigh", "shake head". I really have a question mark on my face, it's very empty. The more I write, the more awkward it becomes. The previous plot is good, even if it is written like this, I don't feel it. But later on, the plot gets bigger and bigger and emptier, which is very obvious! A large number of useless supporting character dialogues appear, and the story changes from one person telling the story to everyone telling the story together. Even the description of the protagonist is becoming increasingly empty and empty. I don't know what moves and skills he has, and there are no time-travel plug-ins. The rest of the plot is purely watery and fragmented, with a lot of dialogue from supporting characters filling the plot. The plot description is very weird. It's not as good as it is, but it's not as good as it is. You know, that feeling of scratching an itch but not scratching the right place. For example, the protagonist's reasoning overwhelms all the demon cultivators, and the demon cultivator has nothing to say. The author can only describe it in one way: silence! Going up to the Demonic Mountain gave me five great gifts, but the Demonic Cultivator was powerless. How to describe it? Glare! 🐴 Yes, these five gifts are like debuffs. Even if the demon cultivator dies, you won't get any pleasure. Just write it like this: I invited the five great emperors to come out and kill the middle and high-grade demon cultivators with a move called Jue Tian Di Tong. The remaining low-grade demon cultivators turned pale with horror and trembled all over: "All the upper and middle grade demon cultivators are dead. How could Li Qingxian be so powerful? How did he do it!" Trembling, almost wanting to leave first, "Invincible, run! If you don't run, you will die!" When the righteous people saw Li Qingxian inviting the gods to destroy the demon cultivators, they opened their mouths in shock: "Gods from the five directions! King Xian can actually invite the gods from the five directions! No, the god is called Taoist Brother Xian Wang! What is his identity? Could the person who sealed the mountain god and mend the sky be King Xian?" I would rather the author wrote this! I would rather write in plain language so that I can feel that I am right and I understand, not that I am wrong and it feels wrong😅 The entire dialogue in these two chapters today has nothing to do with the main plot. From arriving at Qiyuan City to the death of the great general Wang, then going up to the Magic Mountain, and now preparing to cross the river, the writing is getting weirder and weirder. It makes me feel uncomfortable all over and I want to curse. The automatic subscription ends here. I won't follow it now, I can't stand it. 😂😂😂 This is just for one family😜.
Open high and go low
The setting is very interesting, and I was willing to leave holes in it at the beginning, but then I basically gave up on filling them in. It doesn't even look like it was written by one person. It is far inferior to the previous two books.
I'm just too stupid. I watched it for so long and didn't know what I was looking at. What does the author want to express!
Eight hundred words out of 1,000 are telling great truths. I don't object to the principle, but I don't like to see more than half of the bowl of rice in the noodle bowl. This makes me feel that it is better to go to the free ones and just swipe up when I see a lecture.
What exactly does Lao Huo want to write? If you look at the introduction, it looks a bit like the previous "fortune-telling" and "fortune-telling" modes, with an additional element of puzzle-solving. The previous settings of life magic, life stars, life buying, and life changing are all pretty good, and the writing of solving tricks is also readable. But in the few chapters before they were released, I didn't know why I had to arrange a war plot and defend the city. What about fate, what about Gui, why are you copying poems again? It's better to enter the department that specializes in solving puzzles, solve the problem, change the fate, and at least have something to look at. Write poems and copy poems, be a literary sage, change a poem to ward off the enemy, tsk, you haven't written enough in Confucianism and Taoism? Seriously, I've seen enough.
It's so cool. I planned to save the chapters and read them again, but now I've saved 36 chapters. I found that the title of the latest chapter is Night Guard Goes Up the Mountain. I didn't want to read it for a moment. This copy is so cool, I feel like I've exhausted my talents. . .
The settings like fortune-telling and fortune-telling are quite interesting, but the writing in the later stages is so rubbish that you'd have to pay to read a sermon.
You can't even write a preaching protagonist. Can your protagonist preach and be kingly at the same time? ? ? Can you be upright? ? ? A heretic A hypocrite Say one thing and do another behind the scenes
Later on, I felt that it was boring and the writing was broken. It felt like it was unfinished and it didn't fit in with the title of the book. I didn't know what I wanted to express.
To be honest, I am afraid that this book will be gone soon. The brothers mentioned in this chapter are really brave to say it
One destiny, two luck and three feng shui, whatever you write about the fortune teller is not worthy of being carried by the feng shui master.
The overall situation: the mysterious world, the upper world, Qi State, Dongding, the demon world, and the destiny star. Characters: Xiaoyi, Little Uncle Zhou, Song Baige and his son, Gai Fengyou, Xieshen, three Mingzong elders in Gui Town. These are all unclear. I was really confused at the end of this book.
Author, is your book becoming more and more contradictory? Compared with the previous two books, this work is really tasteless. Let's talk about fortune-telling. I don't see how magical it is. I can't compare literary studies with Confucianism and Taoism. The general feeling is that I want to add a little bit of everything, but nothing is outstanding. The story direction is too monotonous. The timeline is actually very short, and the halo of the protagonist is too strong. I have no education, so I just want to complain! For the next book, either focus on how to teach people principles, just like the gods, you can also think of a good subject. Or just focus on a system.
Cliff-like confusion
I pursued Confucianism and Taoism from the sage to the gods and then to the hunter. Although the ending of Confucianism and Taoism is a bit sloppy due to practical reasons, I can understand it as a book fan. I have read the book four or five times. The gods are somewhat similar to Confucianism and Taoism. I know that such a self-disciplined and uplifting article is difficult to write later, so I can understand it. But what happened to Hunting? ! The previous setting is very interesting. Similar novels talk about Feng Shui and physiognomy but not destiny. Moreover, the setting is grand, the imperial court and the martial arts forest include all the Sangha, fish and dragons, and are full of the atmosphere of rivers and lakes. However, after coming out of Guizhen, it fell off a cliff. What happened? I've been waiting for the second female lead to come out until the end? I thought I had missed it. There is no more plot in the back, and there is no relationship between the emperor and the emperor. Lao Gai is still waiting for you. This is not a trap. It seems that someone else has taken over. I can't think of writing it by force! I just couldn't help but read the comment section to see what everyone said, otherwise I would have thought I had read a book written by a fake veteran! It's uncomfortable to be uncomfortable. Since Huo Da said that the preparations for martial arts are better, let's wait and read the new book. As for Hunting for Life, I hope someone with the ability will pick it up and continue writing it. That's it... The last look is really as uncomfortable as the "Emperor's Holy Might"!
Is the style of writing from front to back too separate?
Don't make any grand narratives, don't make any big-picture views, it's too out of the ordinary, and the second half of the Destiny Instrument system is really not very useful. It relies on gods all the time. It's just another kind of fairy-cultivating novel.
Delicious in the early stage and lumpy in the later stage
This book is okay in the early stage, but a mess in the later stage. Compared with Confucianism and Taoism, Gods of Gods also stretched my hips in the later stage, but I can still read it. The more I read in the later stage of this book, the more uncomfortable it becomes. This is the last book I read by Lao Huo.
Lao Huo, if the sheep tribe is successfully suppressed, let's kill the great sage of the sheep tribe to sacrifice the spring breeze.
This book is quite a pity. I subscribed normally at the time, but then I saw the final review, which was very shocking! I have only seen the end of the seventh volume, and have not read the eighth and ninth volumes yet, because I am accustomed to saving two large volumes and reading them together. Also, because Ye Han, the villain, didn't feel like he was "sustainable" at the end of the seventh volume. As a villain from beginning to end, he still only had "good luck" by chapter 800, and his thoughts were jumping as if there was a straw in his head. Li Qingxian, who grew up under such an opponent, had some doubts about his strength, and wanted to stop at that time. As for what others have said, there is a discrepancy in the priority and proportion of the system of "fate magic and inviting gods" in the later period. I think it is actually due to the understanding of the relationship between humans and gods. The concept of "man can conquer nature" has always been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. There are gods only when there are people. If the proportion of inviting gods is too large, it is like having a "relationship", and all cats and dogs can show off their power! Of course, we hope that this book is a story about Li Qingxian, who conquers nature and changes his destiny through fortune-telling. The writing style of Eternal Fire is unquestionable and has been improving. In this book, the writing of entering the strange place and getting along with others is very bright and appropriate, which often makes people surprised! At the beginning of this new book, it seemed that it gave everyone the touch of witnessing history and creating a new system. Things backfired, and the general direction in the middle and later stages deviated. No matter what the reason, the problem cannot and should not be avoided. One of the reasons for writing a book review is to prove that I am not reading in vain, and the other is to tell the author that whether the writing is good or bad, don't write in vain. The days are moving forward after all.
Whether water is good or not is a matter of opinion, whether it is good or not depends on your heart.
Reading is a very personal thing. After reading books for decades, I often understand this truth better. Some eunuch books are still on the altar, Some eunuch books are reviled by everyone, The flood of books has been flooded for ten years, and some people will reward them with silver when they are popular. The books are updated every month, and every time a book is promoted, some people regard it as a treasure. Although I didn't mention anyone by name, I think all old bookworms should know what I'm talking about. Speaking of this book, Life Hunter, I personally like it quite a lot. I cannot exaggerate the advantages of the Chaotang chapter, many people also like it. After Uncle Chunfeng died, Sunshine Boy came to Qiyuan City. I read that the plot was weak, the progress was slow, and ghostwriters were everywhere. I don't think so. Li Qingxian is a time traveler. You may not say how deeply he feels about this place. Zhou Chunfeng taught him, loved him, and gave him a bond, but if you want to change the world, you can't always be arrogant. I think this experience is necessary and the second bond. It's not about going to Jiangnan to live in peace and quiet, but to experience the real joys and sorrows of the world. Who among the little people here is not carrying a heavy burden? Under Liu Yitian's humiliation and burden, every backbone disciple of the Shen Gong Sect has a sad past and his own story, which you can never feel with people like Ye Han and Shen Xiaoyi. Even if civilians have high-level destiny stars, they will be easily turned into idiots. Thousands of common people will die at every turn due to the games and plans of big shots. Every one of the people freezing to death on the roadside every day is a living person. The blood of my biological father was splattered on the golden sword, I was martyred like my teacher and father, I made close friends and fought against demons at the border, In troubled times, the lives of mortals are like grass. Such an environment and such empathy can make leisure more sparkling, and give us the determination and courage to change the world. I also want to watch fortune-telling battles, and I also want to see the magnificence and splendor. I also want to fast forward to holding the sky with one hand, and returning the world to a bright future. But Li Qingxian is still too weak after all, and this cruel world has just begun to unfold. Take your time, I am still looking forward to it. Seeing that Qingxian has solved one problem after another and managed Qiyuan City as his own base, Be more patient. I hope Lao Huo will get better and better as he writes. Finally, more updates! ! !
I actually saw the release of a new book on Weibo. Although I haven't started reading the last book "World of Gods" yet, I still want to continue to support the new book. Come on, fans of the book starting from "The Holy Sage of Confucianism and Taoism" 🤭🤭🤭
Portrait of Li Qingxian Sword of Truth on his head, life pole in his arms, Qiankun Ring on his left wrist, two tricks on his arms, covered with night guard brocade clothes
Building a building, ten coins for the first floor, one knot for 100 buildings, capped by the leader
🔥Get up Come on, old fire 2022-09-17 Settlement to the 150th floor 2022-10-01 Settlement to the 300th floor, come on the old fire 2022-11-07 Settlement to the 450th floor, come on the old fire 2022-11-23 Settlement to the 750th floor, come on the old fire
2.3 Update the latest situation of Laohuo
No eunuch! No eunuch! No eunuch! ! ! Lao Huo had an old problem before, but this time he became yang again. He was afraid of complications. The doctor suggested that he should be observed for two days just to be on the safe side. All book fans, please wait patiently! 🌹🌹 Update 2.3 Status
Life hunter? Please God!
Life magic? I still use it in the front, but in the back I rely on calling on the gods. When I encounter problems, I don't use life magic at all. I just rely on the existence of life magic like Guidi, which is like a copy of the gods' space. What's even more outrageous is that the gods invited here are all like licking dogs, asking for skills for skills and information for information. The protagonist, a sixth-level god invited by the gods, can fight according to the high-level. It is recommended to change the title of the book "I Dreamed of Becoming a Great Fate Sorcerer and I Relyed on the Gods to Unexpectedly Become the Strongest in the World". The Thunder Seed was just a by-product of a one-time prop in the beginning, and it became more and more awesome as it became more and more famous. It would be accepted by any god it pleases. . .
[Bookworm Contest] Random questions at random times, correct answers and prizes!
If Laohuo doesn't update and there are no books to read, I'll do the whole thing 😁😁