Gou Raises Horses in the Beast Control Sect

The writing and plot, especially when it comes to women, are so disgusting...

All I can say is, come on, author. The creativity is very good, but some updates are indeed a bit slow. At this time, we should see how the Eagles will deal with it.

1. Do you think it is realistic for a mortal woman to dare to ask for this and that from a cultivator? 2. Are you still a lady who comes from a scholarly family and doesn't even have basic etiquette? 3. Why should the protagonist dote on this woman? To put it bluntly, this kind of woman is worse than a bronze spirit beast 4. The most important thing for an author is to distinguish what you write. You can write daily but not according to urban novels. What is the difference between this and a romance novel? You can also write the premise like this The girl must be helpful to the protagonist and be in cultivation or career, otherwise it will be very embarrassing. You can learn from the one written by Lao Ao next door. His heroine is similar to yours, but the heroine is very good and cannot be replaced. Your heroine gives people the impression that she does not have the destiny of wealth but has the disease of wealth. Let's change it now to avoid losing many readers.

The author is very ambitious. It seems that he wants to start a new school and become the founder of it. The protagonist controls animals and cultivates immortality. He practices according to the 12 zodiac signs and the horse is the same animal. The idea is great. But the author's writing skills are not solid enough. The protagonist's character is not likeable. He talks about being strict but is reckless when things happen. Although the writing is not very poisonous, it is a bit unappealing, but it depends on the genre.

I would like to make a small suggestion. The first few pictures are too rough for the transition to raising horses. I suggest you write a few more pictures. What kind of feed and bean cakes should be fed to the horses? How to grow the grass? What are the details? The proportion of the feed. For example, what is the function of fish bone meal in the feed? Use magic to bathe the horse, kill insects, and shave it. , Even use magic to slap the horse and massage it, so that the horse is in good condition every day to practice running skills. You can also use magic to nourish the horse to increase the horse's upper limit. The hair can be used as a talisman pen, the pony tail can be used as an erhu bow, and the protagonist can also learn musical instruments. The thinner the better. It's so easy to handle. You really can't imagine the big scenes. The sect should not have only one promotion channel. This is not good. The animal breeder relies on cultivating excellent animal pets and obtains the certification of the animal breeder. Then he can go out to take jobs and make more money. For most people, the sect is It's a combination of university and employment, giving you the opportunity to learn and grow. You work hard for the sect. Of course, ordinary people only have one life. There is nothing to regret. These are the world background settings I picked out from Fang Xiang's world of cultivation. I also have some magic modifications of my own that I hope will be useful to you.

Obviously the writing is good, but it's just because the woman's writing is not good. She is like a dog licker, with a strict wife control, and the grass jelly becomes all over the street. I am speechless.

Raise horses, but use deer as a cover. You are trying to be Zhao Gao, referring to deer as horses (∀(∀(∀*)

Now the recommendations are all gone. Sure enough, I'm a street kid. I can't write about women, but I still want to write about them. I told you that you should do it, but I said you should change it, but in fact you haven't. The women you write about are too disgusting.

Generally speaking, this kind of story without a heroine is straightforward. The writing style is definitely not good and the grasp is not good. The heroine is still useful as a main character in the plot.

If you see updated chapters, try to read them as much as possible. There is no way that I can keep up with the reading rate now. If possible, don't buy the book. The book will be gone as soon as you buy it now.

If you don't raise your horse well, it will wander out! The author can still afford this, otherwise it would have been sold out long ago!

Chapter 10-11 I'm speechless, don't the disciples of the big sect have sect clothes? Moreover, it is still a powerful faction that dominates the entire world. How can there be so much trouble once the identity is revealed? It feels like the author deliberately created conflicts and lowered the IQ of the characters, especially the supporting characters and the part about entering the city. A mortal dared to stop the immortal cultivator. I was speechless. It is recommended that you skip these 2 chapters, it is too intellectual. The whole character's IQ was lowered due to the force. What's particularly impressive is that there are several offices in that place that was said to be a sect, but you, a lowly person, don't even know the sect's clothes or features, and are speechless. Moreover, the big man looking at the city gate also glanced at the protagonist's beast. If you write this out, you will be speechless afterward. . . . It is recommended that you skip the chapters after Chapter 10. . . . .

The protagonist has no idea what kind of person he is, yet he still tries to test the humanity of others...

The setting is very innovative and very good, but the writing and plot are so disgusting and useless. If you write it like this, no one will read it.

The author writes a book just for fun. If you really want to write a book, you have to read the Qidian book review section. The per capita platinum master.

I suggest you change Chapter 33. In that chapter, I felt nothing but the incompetence of the protagonist. A horse that has been raised since childhood has developed such a habit. What is the protagonist if he is not a waste?

It is said that there is no harem, but Junior Sister Wang has already slept with everyone and has not said whether she is the heroine or not. She is obviously the mistress's son. The protagonist also sleeps with Tao Nu. She is speechless, and the writing always likes to add a bit of astringency. Originally, the life was full of life, and I quite like it... I understand! It turns out that what the author said about not having a harem means that there won't be a lot of warblers and jealousy. Those who can sleep will still sleep. OK, bye.

Are mythical beasts evolved from ordinary mortal beasts? Oops~ Forgive me, I just can't help but want to laugh

Among all the same starting point books, this one is simply a dark horse! It has the feeling of a big dragon dying, but the categories are different but both are innovative. But writing about the female protagonist was too disturbing, and it gave the male protagonist the image of a strict monogamist. Moreover, the female protagonist has no other characteristics in the book except cooking. It can be said that excluding the female protagonist might have better results.

The product was created casually. How long has the earth been developing? How long has the world of immortality been developed? Don't use the earth as a substitute for everything. It seems that the development of immortality for tens of millions of years has been all about eating and sleeping.

After reading a few chapters, to be honest, I really can't find where the female character Wang Yaoyao promotes the development of the plot. . . It's also very hard to write.

What did you write after it was released? Changed? Are you writing about Xianxia?

Just like a running account, the food is tasteless

Raising horses and stuff in the front was okay, but when Wang Yaoyao came out, she smelled like an old routine.

In a novel, you have to describe the details. This is exactly how a narrative is written 🤐

What is the name of the world, the sect it is in, what sects are around it, and the general state of cultivation? Raise horses as soon as you come here, you can't just write about this

I'm really sorry to have read Chapter 60. My education level is limited and I can't understand it. Don't know what the author wants to express? But you have straightened out the basic words.

There are too many typos here. Are the rest written by a machine?

If you didn't have so many typos, you could still read it. Please correct it.

I'm too tired to read it. If you have some free time, you can read this book