The Whole Sect Has Been Reborn

Please write less about favoring boys over girls. In the world of immortality, where strength is the most important thing, there is still a place where boys are preferred over girls, working as female workers and so on. The portrayal of the villain is too blunt

How should I put it, the text in some places cannot be read carefully. Once you read it carefully, you will find that some sentences are in the wrong order, and the wording in some parts is not appropriate enough, and even some of the logic is a bit weird. Also, I wonder if the author has read the article on cultivating immortals? As for the improvement of cultivation, which is the most important aspect of cultivating immortals, he has only touched on it in a few strokes, focusing entirely on some aspects of daily life, and only scratches the surface on the improvement of strength. The world of cultivating immortals is all based on strength. I have read dozens of chapters, but they don't have the feeling of cultivating immortals. It is almost like writing other types of novels in the skin of cultivating immortals.

Some people say that vicious female supporting characters are their own abilities 😁... Just targeting the heroine for no reason is not a good thing. If there is a conflict of interest, forget it. If there is no conflict of interest, then do this.

It's really a new round of chronicles, rescuing people, meddling, encountering things that are not big or small, turning danger into safety, or saying something that feels like the truth from God's perspective, what kind of love is, harm... Although meeting the Wuji Sect soon will fulfill the ending, but also go to practice, do all kinds of things every day, save this, save that...

The character of Yu Duanruo is so successful that it makes people sick. I'm really speechless, she was actually reborn, it's hard to accept.

Just look at the characters, half of them are disgusting to death, the characters are clichéd, the plot is clichéd, there is no place in the world of immortality that does not favor boys over girls, the disparity in status is too great, and the villains are brainless and evil.

Ah! Why should I discover such a beautiful book? Still so weak! ! Not enough at all😂😂😂😂😂

Just sauce

I feel like reading this book is too suffocating. There are too many disgusting people. None of the protagonists have a highlight moment. I feel that all the highlights are given to these disgusting things. There are obviously elders, but the people of the Wuji Sect live so tiredly and are careful to live another life. It's true that good people don't live long and bring disaster to the rest of the millennium. The seniors of the Wuji Sect have been guarding that world for hundreds of thousands of years. They are obviously people with great love and righteousness. Those who enjoy their protection are not only ungrateful but also plot against the juniors of other sects. I feel so aggrieved.

I originally thought I could see more exciting plots by changing the map, but ended up starting a new round of running accounts 😅

Now that I have seen this, I would like to ask if it hurts in the face of the sect's pampering that Yu has been saying in book reviews all the time because of his own abilities? Do you still like vicious female supporting characters? I'm speechless for such a rotten and disgusting female character. I can help her wash her before. 😁 Anyway, I think the author's writing is very good and his imagination is also very good. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good work.

I feel that the author wants to write a bit too much. Everything I have encountered so far can be seen as what I want to express. But the main line of this article is to cultivate immortality and take revenge. There is not much cultivation plot, the advantage of the reborn prophet is basically non-existent, and there is no clear division of force and how strong the protagonist is. There are more than 300 chapters, and I just wrote about the life experiences of the senior brothers and sisters. Then there are those who are nosy and those who are forced to be nosy. The main character Tuan Genzheng Miaohong is fine, but the mainstream of immortality writing is probably about cultivating immortals. So far, the strength has been improved in a few strokes, and the stories of other people encountered are quite detailed. It is about to be written as "Travel Notes of the whole sect traveling around the mountains and rivers in order to train the little junior sister Genzheng Miaohong and encountering injustices on the way"

Eager to start a new book? 😏 It's a bit top-heavy. They were in such a mess in the beginning, went through all the hardships, and finally found the backer of the Wuji Sect, but how come the villain was killed so easily... There may be some foreshadowing, so why don't we write about how they became immortals? It's over?

When will the people from the Wuji Immortal Sect see Xiao Qi? The people from the sect who were seen before finally know the truth. I'm so excited! Fortunately, the sect master went early, otherwise he would miss the truth again. No matter what, I hope that Yu Duanruo can be tortured more in the finale. It is really disgusting. Since reading her, I have become immune to the villains in other books. No matter how hard I try, she is not as disgusting as her. By the way, Xiaoqi's parents are also tortured!

Love it, love it! The plot is not corny, thank you to the author! Not enough to watch every day😭

The vicious female supporting role will definitely make Lao Wan and Asura regret it. Especially Asura, when will they be in bad luck?

I think Wujimen's logo setting is a bit weird. It actually uses a red dot on a white background to indicate that the red sun is about to fall. Isn't this the Japanese flag? Then it always reminds me of Japan's penetration into China and I can't stand it anymore, but it's actually quite well written.

I'm so angry. If you're not dead yet, please die soon.

There is indeed something wrong with Lingyun Sect. It is best to destroy it later. It is a selfish sect that repays kindness with hatred.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I felt that the heroine was a bit "precocious" at around the age of 15. Although she had experience in the Demonic Abyss and some experience, these experiences were not enough to support her high sensitivity to some things or phenomena in the fairy world. She had no knowledge reserve! Is it all based on talent? Secondly, the heroine has no one to guide her on the path of immortality and magic. She has not encountered any setbacks so far and has easily started! ! ! ? ? ? Isn't it said that "everything is difficult at the beginning"? In addition, except for the heroine, did the seven masters and apprentices spend their previous lives in vain? They have not experienced the maturity and stability of life and death. Although they will be jealous in front of their junior sisters, it is a bit excessive and becomes a bit childish. The memories they have of past lives don't seem to be of much use. It's quite disappointing. In the end, most of the work still relies on the heroine. The seven masters and apprentices just dote on the heroine and don't seem to give the heroine much help in her cultivation. But! ! ! This novel is quite creative! For example, the rebirth of sect characters and the existence of the Northern Snow Tribe. In short, I think this novel is very creative, but the characterization is not deep and reasonable enough, and the plot setting is not reasonable enough, and it is a bit excessive. Finally, this is the comment I wrote when I read about a hundred chapters. If there is something wrong in what I wrote, I hope my friends will point it out, and I also hope to discuss it with my friends. {"TopicId":"575911170507276 288","TopicName":"New Book Recommendations"}{"TopicId":"762325716749713408","TopicName":"Save the Summer Book Famine"}

Let me first talk about my personal evaluation of online articles: Collection (articles that can make people cry and read over and over again) > Excellent works (with vivid characters or imaginative plots or metaphors worthy of careful consideration) > Excellent works (clear themes, sincere language, vivid descriptions, overall flaws are not hidden) > Fast food (expressions at the level of normal people, the plot is clear and slightly routine, and can be used for leisure time Pastime) > Garbage (the theme is vague, the characters are flat, the expression is not smooth, and there are too many logical loopholes to be self-consistent) > Toxic and harmful pollutants in garbage (the three views are incorrect and deviate from the core socialist values) This is the 281st online article I have read. Overall evaluation: It tastes good but it did not leave a deep impression and I will not think about it again. Plot: After recovering the memories before rebirth, the protagonist group avoids enemies and looks for opportunities to develop, interspersed with dungeons based on the tragic experiences of certain characters, and finally kills the mastermind behind the tragedy and ascends. The logic of the story is smooth. But I am dissatisfied with the outcome of those who manage their children but not their children and do not receive appropriate retribution. Writing: A normal person's level of storytelling, early emotions, and a good sense of rhythm. There are typos, but most of those pointed out have been corrected, and there are no excessive flaws. There are a lot of descriptions in the narration. Characters: The protagonist group and the main supporting roles are well portrayed. But the villain is too flat, too mentally retarded, and lacks the sense of urgency to meet his opponent. The last big boss is not very powerful in front of a group of ancestors of the Wuji Immortal Sect. Reading experience: 1. The emotional expressions in the first half of the book are very good, some jokes are used, and the scenes are vivid in language. However, the plot after the heroine accidentally arrives in the fairy world feels like reading another book, and I have no idea what it is writing. Why do so many new supporting characters appear in the last chapter 160, and even chapter 795 is all about new supporting characters? I can't understand the role of the Si family's plot on the protagonist. What is the significance of the drama between the farmer and the snake? Is it for reflection in chapter 820 to enlighten readers on the principles of life? The protagonists have all left, and the perspective is still largely focused on the discussion of established facts within the family of the supporting characters, which is very strange and makes the reading watery. 2. Searching for the word "Jun", the word "Jun" appears 149 times in the whole text. After removing the noun attribute interference, handsome, handsome, handsome, handsome and handsome still appears hundreds of times. The repetition rate of some words in some descriptions is too high, which makes it a bit visual fatigue.

Two chapters a day, can I resist reading it tomorrow?

Such a beautiful book, it would be nice if it became more popular

Oh, I didn't expect it, it was also unexpected

I hate the end, but the end is normal ~ Forget it, it's over, eh

Romance novel? , Who is the male protagonist? , I only see chapter 112 now

It was okay so far, so I subscribed. It started to get wet almost halfway, it was so bad!

Eating without knowing the taste, tossing and turning, everyone in the book has a happy ending, but in reality everyone also suffers a lot.

I come back to read it from time to time, and I can't bear to put her in the completion file, but the reality is that it will eventually be put in another folder to gather dust. Reading a good book is like meeting a loved one, and the ending means breaking up and ending. It hurts!

Bai Yao won't be swallowed, right? Wouldn't it be so disgusting?