Little Fatty's Notes on Cultivation to Immortality

The early stages are a bit goofy, but the plot is compact and interesting to watch. After all, it is just foreshadowing the rest of the story, which is about fifty chapters. The plot becomes a bit unfocused later on, and I personally don't think it's as interesting as before. Moreover, there is no description of the environment and the like, and the time changes are not obvious enough, which made me a little confused. Furthermore, why don't you have a good friend who is also Sunshine? Either the vengeful and ruthless senior sister cultivating the Dao Dao, or the little sister who is easily provoked, the other one who is careless and has an affair with that Sima at a glance, and the last beautiful little sister is a demon cultivator who is much older and has a son! Look at you, you have a lot of blue-faced confidants, why can't you have good gay friends? Is Lily Army vegetarian? ! Don't you have many close friends? What a death! There are no good gay friends who are whole-hearted! So angry! Finally, I like the plot to be more compact, the main line to be more obvious, and the development of things to be clearer, thank you! Great support for the author😁

I really can't understand the heroine's character. She has lived for so long and it feels like she has lived in vain. It's so stupid. When her parents died at the beginning, I really couldn't feel her sadness. If it's because she time traveled not long ago and has no feelings for her parents and just treats herself as a bystander, I can understand it, but Why do you have to write about being reluctant to leave your parents to die, shedding some crocodile tears, turning around and being the Virgin to save the culprit? I was really convinced, and I didn't feel sad at all afterwards. Moreover, when a person in her twenties came to this world in her previous life, she felt stupider than a child of a few years old. Is this to show her cuteness? Is she stupid and sweet? ? ? I am not Sister Li. . I don't know what will happen next, but the front is really trying to persuade me to quit.

I don't know if Nan Sheng's children can see this comment. It's been two years since "Little Fatty" ended, but I can still see your comment. Thank you very much for your like. Your recognition is the greatest encouragement to young writers. It seems to be getting further and further away😊, well, to get back to the subject, before the new book "Big Brother" is finished, the stupid author, well, will not consider writing the second "Little Fatty" for now. If there is a fate in the future, there may be a second one for everyone. (PS: The stupid author's voice is not pleasant, so I won't speak anymore to avoid being disillusioned😊But I will definitely reply after seeing the question, thank you for your understanding~)

He Ying is very good at making small moves without being discovered next to a person who is just a god, and she even deceives him. Is this reasonable? This is very reasonable, and it is reasonable if the author thinks it is reasonable. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤭🤭🤭🤭

When I saw the introduction, I was thinking, does this mean I want to jump on the street? Haiyan, what about your introduction? Do you think readers will read the text directly without reading the introduction? After reading the introduction, I will send you a recommendation vote. Bye bye.

There are only 7 members in a small cultivating family. The head of the family actually has the same cultivation level as his younger son in the early stages of the Golden Elixir. The eldest son is indeed a mortal. How long does it take for the younger son to practice Golden Elixir since he was a child? The eldest son, a mortal, neither ages nor dies, and competes with monks for opportunities. It's really full of flaws!

Is there really no male protagonist? If there is no male lead, I will chase him! ! ! The introduction looks good. I hope there is no male protagonist.

Isn't it bad for an ordinary little girl to cultivate immortality? Just like mortals cultivating immortals, they have different lives. This novel makes people speechless. An ordinary little girl feels that the world revolves around pig's feet, Mu Yunsheng, and mountains. This is the biggest failure! A good novel doesn't need such rubbish plots and character settings.

Here, other people's backers are their backers. Only Pig's Feet's backer is the waiter. Only when Pig's feet are fine is Pig's Feet's backer or parent. When something happens to Pig's feet, the waiter's backer or parents don't know where to hide. Let's look at other parents who will hunt down pig's feet as long as something happens to their children. The parent who gave the pig's feet didn't dare to fart afterwards, and the parent who was beaten by other people even bowed his head and licked his feet when he came home. I just want to ask if the ancestor the author wrote about is not the strongest on the surface? The ancestor of this pig's foot is 250. This ancestor does not dare to kill anyone and does not dare to offend anyone. What can such a person do to become an immortal? What are you doing as a cultivator? What does the ancestor who doesn't work write about him? A mortal and a pig have a stronger effect than the ancestor of the pig's feet.

Why are they all jumping around? Where did the separated chapters go? I was baffled and couldn't follow the plot at all.

I don't understand if I am an immortal or a female cultivator, would anyone really like being so fat? When I was a little chubby, I was cute, but if I'm 10 years old and still fat, I'm afraid even a dog would dislike it.

Seeing how miserable the protagonist is in the introduction, I don't dare to fall into the trap. Friends who have been trapped in the pit know this.

Very well written! Come on! ! ! !

Is pedicure the fruit of life? A little blood can give life to human flesh and bones. I don't like that the whole novel is a conspiracy theory. There are not so many conspiracy theories in the world, only vicious people with impure thoughts like the author.

There are too many shortcomings in this book. The author is a woman who has a really big face. For example, wherever the pig's trotters go, elders and geniuses have to give pig's trotters a face. Please don't be too big-faced.

So what? It's not easy for the author to write so much. Just persistence is very impressive. But I suggest changing the introduction. Most readers still prefer cool articles. Life is already difficult, so don't let the novels be full of troubles. Come on.

In order to save Xiaopang, Elder Lin sacrificed his life for another, but he still lost all his cultivation.

Is the heroine really called Xiaopang? How can any parent give such a name to their child or daughter? It's not her biological child, right?

I saw this book accidentally, and naturally I became more and more fascinated as I read it. Until now, after reading it, it was the first time I saw that the main character who cultivates immortality has an ordinary appearance and a round body 😁, but he is still very charming and attracts the admiration of many male partners with celestial appearance. Of course, the heroine has a strong body. There is a path to peace of mind, and I no longer fall in love with the relationship between men and women. The heroine's road to enlightenment is very difficult and bumpy, and the process is too tragic. It makes people feel ups and downs when watching it. The ending is still perfect, and the author's explanation of the ending is very complete. All important characters have been given extra twists, and the meaning of watching is still unfinished...

I just want to say that after reading this introduction, I feel like I have finished reading the book. . . .

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

I want to say that the author has such a big face. If he writes a novel, everyone will give him a pig's trotter face. Is he making the pig's trotter face too big? Incarnations also need to give face to vacations. This author has the same thinking as a novel I heard before. Loose cultivators are in trouble.

Maybe this novel would be better if the face wasn't so big!

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It's so well written, and it's so sad to read. Please keep up the good work and update it!

I hope Xiaopang will rely on his own strength to take revenge instead of relying on Elder Lin