After Passing Through the Book, I Was Forced to Become a Fake System

The first 500 chapters of this book are quite good. I am following it sincerely. After Chapter 500, the plot becomes a bit too much, and there are some inexplicable clowns on the emotional road (not even stumbling blocks, just pure water figures). In fact, I think the double male protagonist is a big failure, because the original novel Xiao Shang obviously diluted the love of the readers' grandfathers for the male protagonist. I would like to ask which reader's grandpa doesn't like a beautiful and powerful miser who is so miserable that no one loves him? The male protagonist has been raised to be fat and white, and he is busy fighting for fame and jealousy all day long, exuding the aura of a king. He can no longer live a good life and only needs to be king and dominate step by step. In contrast, the small businessman in the original novel is tortured to the point where he is completely human-like. Can the reader's grandfathers' hearts not go to their armpits? Anyway, I don't really want to watch it now that the heroine can't travel to another world. The extra story also features a heroine from a parallel world and a small businessman from the original novel. The emotional line is awkward, and it feels like there are too many male and female protagonists (let's just call it four), which dilutes the love of the readers' grandfathers for the male and female protagonists. In fact, whether you can persist in following a book with millions of words really depends on the charm of the protagonists. And the four main characters created in this book are very unfavorable~

This book is really a primary school student's emotional line. It's a waste of time. It's good at the beginning, but there's really no growth at the end. The female protagonist is like a virgin, and she has to give medicine to the original male protagonist. What's the purpose? This emotional line is really sparse, and the literary love is really childish. I still hope that the male protagonist will have some growth in the back. There is no, the character is not clear, and he is just a tool for the plot. You can't read it at all.

The subject matter is quite novel. This is the first time I've seen it. In a novel about a male protagonist who travels through an invincible harem to cultivate immortality, the female protagonist wants to influence the male protagonist to prevent him from becoming a god and destroying the world. Then the male protagonist strangles her neck to death at the beginning. Then the female protagonist gets an idea and pretends that she is the system and signs a contract with the male protagonist to earn the price difference of the real system. The female protagonist publishes the tasks issued by the real system to the male protagonist, and some of the rewards she gets are given to the male protagonist. He warmly protects the male protagonist when he encounters disasters and is persecuted by bad guys, and also helps the male protagonist make friends. From being isolated from the male protagonist, everyone thinks that the male protagonist is a good person who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, not good at words and embarrassed. The heroine's little raccoon is so cute and plush. I love little animals. I really want to touch, kiss, hug and hold her up high. The hero dotes on the heroine, the heroine dotes on the hero. The hero treats the heroine as his only salvation and dotes on each other. Recommended❤️

This is the most amazing article I have read in 2022

The heroine is just like Jiang Zhi, and I can't stand it anymore. An adult's brain is the same as that of a World of Warcraft. I'm suffering from stupidity. Please🙏The heroine is a fake Warcraft, she is actually an adult of the new era.

It doesn't look good when you become a human. . . Especially the male protagonist is so oily. . . Why do you have to fall in love? . .

The lazy author ruins his updates Unpunctual updates ignore readers Xia Tiantianxiang is uploading his manuscript The wise and beautiful author's articles are so vivid and lively The writing is brilliant, the lingering sound is lingering, the wonderful book is worth recommending The hateful author breaks the chapter again at the critical moment The lazy author ruins his updates

The author should update it as soon as possible, otherwise today next year will be a taboo for you.

Isn't this book supposed to be a male video? When I read this book, I got the same feeling: A man licks raw fried food and is a born white-eyed wolf.

I came here from Douyin. I just want to say that I came to watch it after seeing the recommendation that the male protagonist was a black man. After watching it all, I found that the description in the recommendation was not there. I would really appreciate it. The front and middle are both very interesting. I finished reading it in three days, but I felt it was unfinished and the ending was too rushed...

I read the chapter names but didn't want to read the rest. The original novel, Xiao Shang, is dead... Give me a female protagonist, isn't she here to redeem the male protagonist? Doesn't this redeem the feeling of loneliness? The first few chapters also describe the experience of the original novel's small businessman. I was still thinking that the original novel was really miserable. Fortunately, the heroine is here and the male protagonist won't be so miserable. As a result, the original story of Xiao Shang was still miserable, and the ending felt even more miserable. I originally thought that the original work was about the male protagonist's previous life, and the male protagonist was redeemed in this life. After I wrote the original novel Xiao Shang, I felt that the heroine saved my loneliness... I will read the back part when I have time when it is finished, and I don't want to see the ending yet☹️

I finished reading this book in three days and overall I feel good. My requirements for the novel are not high. It has ups and downs, foreshadowing, and back-and-forth reference. The logic is self-consistent and smooth. I really like the interaction between the original world and the guide world, it feels relatively novel. A redemption-oriented story, but the ending is different from what I imagined. The male protagonist in the original world is hateful and pitiful. There is redemption and awakening but no compensation. I can only say that it has a happy ending in the end. There is love, friendship, and family affection in the story. The storyline of the protagonist and supporting characters is generally quite complete, but some details are wrong, but the overall story is good. A book-traveling fantasy novel that travels to the sea of ​​​​consciousness of the male protagonist, gives him sincere care in times of crisis, allows the male protagonist to form a correct outlook on life, and finally returns to the real world.

Big cheers for the author! The writing is super awesome⊙∀⊙!

Here is a long review dedicated to book friends and the author😘 I have finished reading it. Overall, this novel is quite good and worth recommending 1. Plot: It is quite special, with a cliché of time travel, but an unusual pretending to be a system. The real heroine has a really big imagination. It also seems to be quite unique among the many time-travel novels. (Because it is interesting and novel, I read it every night. Even two chapters a day are too few. But after that, when it reached more than 400 chapters, I lost the passion for reading the book. Then I hid it on my bookshelf for a while and waited until the book shortage. In fact, my review is already late, because most of me I don't remember much about the interesting points and details😅. But book friends, please rest assured that there are not many interesting things in this book, otherwise I would have stopped reading it a long time ago) 2. Characters: There are many small characters in the book, most of them are pretty decent, and a few characters really made me cry for sympathy. Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the small characters, and I don't really remember them after such a long time. But I still remember a few problems with the big characters. 1. The male protagonist, (why do you say there is something wrong with him? I didn't think so at first, but I thought about it later 🙂). The male protagonist is a bit like a tool, and he moves wherever he is needed. Because the author writes the female protagonist so vividly, with so much personality and soul 😌, it makes the male protagonist look like a tool, but this is not very obvious. Sometimes the male protagonist will be angry and happy. But this problem is particularly obvious when the college is framed by some deans or something. The atmosphere in those chapters is really depressing. Maybe it is too depressing, so I wrote several chapters about how the system can invigorate the atmosphere, and how the male protagonist can fight back. This part of the system has mostly active atmosphere, but the male protagonist is just a little bit (I think it's a bit stiff 😭). What should I say? The plot of the male protagonist is almost the same as that of Niu Chuanchuan and several senior brothers. (Quietly, the supporting characters in the depressing chapters are much more talkative and emotional than the male protagonist 🤫) 2. Female protagonist. The author of the system is very good (I will omit a few thousand words of praise for the system here), but I still have a small problem. The plot says that the Dragon Clan takes an expensive elixir every day. Because of the difficult situation, the male protagonist can only take one a month. As a result, the system gives out such a precious elixir. Just give it away. The person who gave it to you also punched the system (just when you first traveled to the original work, someone in the original work felt that the system was not a good person and seemed to want to kill the heroine), and the system also gave it away. Maybe it can be said to be a life-saving gift, but is it too much? Delivered every time. Systemically kissing your boyfriend only once a month! 😡 (But after seeing the finale, his miserable appearance was okay 😃) 3. Emotional line: I was still very excited about this at the beginning, (I have read the author's last book where the male protagonist was a horny little deer! [Fn= 1] I really liked the emotional line in the previous book!) This one was a bit exciting, but when I saw the business relationship they talked about after they became boyfriend and girlfriend, I was embarrassed 😠. Actually, this one was okay 😚, and it was over in a few moments. Okay, that's it for my long review.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I feeling feeling feeling coming over feeling feeling feeling feeling that feeling that I feel so good feeling feeling like feeling that it's time for me that the little raccoon girl is over and over with me, heroine, little raccoon!

Just tie up the author, I'll be relieved if she's half as good as the heroine

I just discovered that the heroine's name "Jia Xitong" is the "fake system"! ! !

Dad, I want to make you into a puppet and write crazy articles 😌

I saw Hanfu on Taobao, and I feel that this outfit is in line with Shang's aesthetics

I really, really like this setting of lasting love. I can understand the motivations of the heroine and hero through their interactions and experiences and gain a better understanding of the protagonist's character. The protagonists all come alive. Love at first sight is all about lust in my eyes. At the beginning, the male protagonist treats the female protagonist like a good friend and regards the female protagonist as his salvation. Later, when the male protagonist slowly discovers his feelings for the female protagonist, it is so cute. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist more because she is the female protagonist than because the female protagonist is good-looking (although the female protagonist is also very good-looking). Although the male protagonist is a bit yandere, he respects the female protagonist very much and is not the kind of morbid "you can only see me" kind of person. He will not hold the heroine to his own standards. I love this kind of male protagonist so much. I don't feel the love between the heroine and the hero yet (I haven't finished watching it yet). What's more, she likes the male protagonist's face and "the male protagonist of the novel". It's more like chasing stars and liking paper figures. But I really like the process of the male and female protagonists slowly establishing their relationship. I hope there won't be a bunch of bloody misunderstandings after the relationship is confirmed. I don't like to have a lot of misunderstandings after the relationship is established. If you don't trust the other party, it's better to break up. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you~

How can I put it this way? It's just a purely enjoyable article. If you like it, it's definitely enjoyable to read. If you think it's unrealistic, it's just annoying. I won't comment on this. The whole story is very smooth. The heroine is a complete koi. All powerful people like her or can be manipulated by her. Every good thing can be done anyway, but I personally feel... It is still too smooth... It feels really good when I feel good, but it feels really... The more I read, the more unrealistic and a bit uncomfortable. I think it is really hard to endure the hardship. It's quite important, except for the last and early stages, there are really no ups and downs, and to be honest, the final calamity is a bit disappointing. It doesn't reflect the personality charm of the male protagonist. He seems to have done nothing, just waiting, waiting for the lotus. In the end, the dragon or the devil did not come into play, and the heroine and the small businessman died together. In addition, the heroine felt that she was sometimes too smart and sometimes a little silly, and there was still a bit of ink in the final ending. What do you say about Xiao Shang? I feel like I have endured too much malice. It is understandable that the author prefers the male protagonist, but in the end I am really a little bit upset. If the female protagonist is the Holy Mother, then it will always be the Holy Mother. The ending makes the two male protagonists merge into one. If not, the Holy Mother's kindness to Xiao Shang in the early stage would always feel more cruel. She gave him hope but ultimately destroyed him because he gave too little, which led to the darkness. Forgive me for feeling that the female protagonist The atonement seems too shabby, not to mention that she paid for it with her own life. From an objective point of view, the heroine has always been happy with the hero, and it is worth it even if she dies. However, Xiao Shang feels that it is entirely because the heroine is a good person and he has an obsession. He is selfish and destroys everyone in another world without the heroine. He is still a god. The little happiness the heroine gives him makes him feel even more uncomfortable. It's better to have experienced it than not to have experienced it. I feel that this view is too nonsense and ordinary people cannot accept it. It's like pruning a small tree and pruning its leaves. After a few days of pruning, it becomes loose. After a while, it will grow crooked and it will be uprooted. There is no difference. Some people must say that you can write your own, and you come to criticize other authors. I think that when you write a work, readers must figure out the plot. Books such as "A Dream of Red Mansions" will be repeatedly scrutinized by the world. I believe that an author who can write such a male and female protagonist will not be too pretentious. Everyone's experience of reading the novel is different. I'm just putting forward my thoughts. I think the ending is a little rushed. As for the other three deans, I felt that there was a lot of momentum in the early stage. Later, at the end, as the male protagonist quickly became awesome, these people just ran away with the crowd. I felt that their characters were in vain. When Tiangong fought against the demons, they directly moved out Karl, the tallest man in the college. The three of them were so tossing that they felt isolated from the world. There are also endings. There are so many supporting characters in the early stage, and I feel that everyone is important, but the final ending does not reflect the role of those people at all. To be honest, it is a bit disappointing, and the personality charm of the male protagonist and female protagonist is not displayed. What theme do you want to sublimate in the end? Are the male and female protagonists stronger than each other? The heroine didn't recognize the hero, and her memory was tampered with, so in the end they couldn't bear to part with each other and it became modern. You talk about pity for life? The biggest villain, Xiao Shang, has not been redeemed. The solution is destruction. The male protagonist is a bit weak in resurrecting people. In the final analysis, he wants to resurrect the female protagonist. How much mercy can he have in the end? And his rating should be a clue throughout the whole story. Then this pit was abandoned directly? You said it was the relationship between faith and gods. I felt that there was too little foreshadowing, sometimes it was about the Talisman God, sometimes about the Dragon God, and I also forgot about the sharks and the academy. In short, the author just wants to describe a utopia. I feel that the writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good. Otherwise, I would not be able to read every chapter without stopping. However, I think it can be more exciting. There will definitely be trade-offs in life, and you will cherish what you have when you have to lose. The male and female protagonists have everything. One person has fallen, and one person has not died. There is no pity, it is all beautiful. The demise of the small business is the disappearance of the last scourge. In the end, you can still wear ancient and modern clothes casually. I really feel that having everything is not very exciting. And it's getting more and more tiring to watch like this. There are no twists and turns. The characters and novel settings are really attractive. The original basis can really be better. If anyone thinks this is a cool article, I don't want to read it, and I don't want to read anything else. I still express the above point of view, and I don't agree with it. You are right, you are the most successful, you are the best protector, and the patron saint of male and female protagonists. But! That's what I think, that's it. If I feel that I don't understand or am not satisfied with the novel, I should point it out. I think readers' opinions are very valuable. Nothing is perfect, but the author can make progress based on this improvement. Reading without thinking is really better than reading with thinking. I'm happy with it! Internet trolls who have the ability will bite me to death (😛)

I can't stand Chapter 39 anymore. The heroine looked very affectionate in the past, but she is actually just as ruthless inside. In order to straighten the hero out, she asked him to make friends. The heroine saw her friend being tortured and skinny, but she didn't feel any fluctuation in her heart. , Without giving any attention at all, it was very bland. When the male protagonist refused the "friend"'s request for help for the second time, he even instigated him to kill someone. Finally, when the "friend" was at his most desperate, she asked him to be loyal and never betray, but the female protagonist actually still complained about it? ? ? It feels like someone is laughing when someone is about to die :)

It's been so long since this book was finished, I still think about it often. I really like the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. I personally don't like the plot of abuse for the sake of abuse. There are no messy male and female partners to cause trouble between the male and female protagonists, and there are no messy misunderstandings. Overall, it is a sweet story. The male protagonist, to outsiders: communicates with a mask, but is indifferent inside, but to the female protagonist: sews bags, trims fur, has a business-style aesthetic, the contrast is really amazing! I personally think the heroine is quite cute. I love the little hamster hoarding goods. It is basically a koi carp. Many times the heroine can solve the dilemma by accident. I am a female protagonist. Generally, as long as the female protagonist is not abused, I feel more comfortable watching it. It's just a small business that abuses men. Many people are unhappy with him, and some readers even want him to merge with the male protagonist. But I personally don't agree with it. Not to mention that the two of them are essentially two people. Xiao Shang has hurt many innocent people and committed many murders. It would be unfair to the male protagonist to merge. Moreover, the female protagonist has always liked the male protagonist, which is also unfair to the female protagonist. And I don't quite understand that many readers feel sorry for Xiao Shang and put the blame on the heroine. Just emmmm. Without the heroine, Xiao Shang will still go dark. Even if he becomes a god, he will be destroyed. His experience is indeed tragic, but more ordinary people died innocently because of him. There are many miserable people in real life. The children in the orphanage have no parents, and I have never seen any of them take revenge on society. I have never seen any of them complain about the orphanage when they no longer enjoy welfare when they grow up. The tragedy of small businessmen, I personally think, is still a problem of character and education. The values ​​​​that have been introduced since childhood are family, various interests, and the law of the jungle. Before he was killed, he was cold and devoid of warmth, which made him even more indifferent to life after his darkening. Normal people are grateful when they encounter warmth. When they encounter warmth, they complain that what others give is not unique and not enough. Of course, this novel is not perfect. Although I like the male and female protagonists very much, there are still some clichés in the novel. The male protagonist is really a popular standard character. He is beautiful, strong but miserable. He only feels warmth from the female protagonist and only sincerely treats her. It is very happy to be the heroine, but it is really unrealistic and, to put it bluntly, not down to earth. Although I do like this type, I have to admit that I have read a lot of this kind of male protagonists, and there is basically no difference. Emmm, they can be seamlessly connected in the stories I read. The heroine's halo as the protagonist is really great, and the people she provokes are all big bosses. In addition to being a sweet article, this article is also a refreshing article. It contains all kinds of slaps in the face, and there are too many villains with facial makeup, which makes me a little tired of reading. Looking at the whole article, I personally like the first part better. Later, when Wanzhi appears, it feels like the plot is being forced to advance the plot. It's quite strange that I keep emphasizing that Wan Zhi is not a good thing, but I still keep it, so it feels like the style of the painting is a bit fragmented? It's like the protagonist's halo suddenly doesn't work? Personally, I really like the author's light-hearted plots, but the more serious plots give me a weird feeling. The same goes for this survival game. I am willing to play through dungeon plots, but I don't want to watch the main plot after the destruction of the world. I don't know how to describe that feeling (my vocabulary is limited), it's like the feeling of separation that I kept describing how strong that person was before, but later found out that it was nothing more than that. Sometimes there is no need to emphasize it too much, but the rhythm of the climax in the later period may still be a bit problematic.

😭 Recommend a complete replacement for me. I finished it in one day and scratched my head.

God of Talisman, God of Talisman, please bless me to successfully make the talisman (the author turns into a big octopus)

The plot is quite interesting, but the female protagonist is too kind to the male protagonist. It's so heart-wrenching. Not even the production team works so hard.

Fifty chapters in and there is no positive female supporting character. Did the author come from a male channel? This book is what female competition is like 🙂

When the reader asked the original male protagonist if he was miserable, could he give him some warmth The author asked the female protagonist to give the original male protagonist more help and endure more hot faces and cold butts When the female protagonist was with the male protagonist, she slowly treated the original male protagonist (the same person as the male protagonist in another parallel time and space, but He is much worse off than the male protagonist) and invests more and more effort This leads to more and more involvement. When something goes wrong, he cannot easily withdraw and quit He can only fight for another man and empty out his own precious possessions Is it because the original male protagonist is pitiful? In everyone's opinion, there is no problem It is okay to help poor people, but there should be a limit Anyway, it feels very strange when I see the heroine putting more and more effort into the original hero, and even going to the extreme (although the author may be To foreshadow the meeting between the original male protagonist and the current male protagonist later) But maybe I have a personal relationship with mysophobia, and I feel that this is like the heroine cheating The heroine puts another man who has no relationship with her in the same position as the male protagonist (a bit like empathy)

The female protagonist keeps calling the male protagonist my host, is she running Taobao...