Traveling Across the Heavens: Marvel's Mechanical Hunter

The subject matter is quite good, but the writing is really rubbish.

Isn't this name too girly? Can the author change the name of ABB? !

First I have to say something. The first world was a bit awkward, and I couldn't watch the rest of it, especially the heroine of the first world. So embarrassing. Secondly. Xiuer. Now that we have the blueprint for a mechanical dog, we still have to use the dog's soul. After being created. It's actually classified as a pet. . There is actually a quantity limit? ? ? If I hadn't finished watching the first world. I really thought the drawings were consumables. There are also things for technology testing. Development does not rely on analysis and analysis. It's a fool-proof operation. Okay, admit it. But the drawings given do not come with knowledge? I really have been relying on the system and not improving myself. I'm really numb.

I'm really confused. Every one of these American comic writers writes that the protagonist is Chinese. Can't he be mixed race or Native American? You write about a Chinese man doing chivalry on American soil. What do you think about becoming a superhero? Do you want to show loyalty to your American father? What's the difference between writers like you and Shang Qi? And your protagonist who traveled to the past was afraid of Ancient One, Odin, this and that. I'm so fucking confused, it's not like I'm wearing something so cool. Are you still afraid of this and that? What's wrong with Gu Yi? Gu Yi is so awesome and knows that you are not an aborigine even though he can't even see you from thousands of miles away? What if she sees you? How can he be more advanced than your golden finger? Can you see that the soul inside you is not original?

Although the protagonist has obtained the system, after all, he was just an ordinary person before. He needs a world to transition to and adapt to combat to train his mind! It is also a process of accumulation! As for the length of the collection being too long, there is nothing we can do about it! After all, when you enter the world, you have to do something! For example, completely destroying the Salvation Army is one reason! The world behind will gradually improve. After all, it is not necessary to obtain the mechanical drawings that the protagonist needs! As for increasing intelligence, this is to prepare for the protagonist to modify the mechanical pet in the future! After all, if you don't have enough accumulation, it's impossible for the protagonist to modify the machine out of thin air, right? Again, I would like to thank the readers for their suggestions. I will work hard to write a plot that satisfies everyone!

Well, if you don't have the creativity to play with machinery, just throw it into a machining center with a drawing. What's the use of pig's feet?

The main world is Marvel, and even geniuses like Tony are often abused. You can suppress the golden finger of the protagonist, which is unparalleled. It's simply disgusting that good technology adds all kinds of restrictions.

Not to mention anything else, everyone in Marvel is afraid of Thanos and Ancient One, and some of them are afraid of Odin. I guess there will still be people who are afraid of the Celestials in the future. Let's not talk about the rest. You are afraid of Thanos, a hammer. As long as you are not stupid and don't try to fight Thanos, he will kill you later. How about that? Are you coming back after five years? As long as you weren't jumping off a building or something like that at the time, you wouldn't die. As long as you make sure that you won't die if you suddenly appear in the place where you stay five years later, or that you have basic life-saving abilities. Oh, you are afraid of being killed by Thanos, so you go and kill Thanos? Ning is the mobile insight plan? There are so many Marvel articles. Let's not talk about whether the contents are similar. Can this reason be changed?

The introduction is well written. But when I started writing, I was a little overwhelmed. The first world of The Walking Dead, what do you think? It took me so long to write.

To be honest, the zombie setting in The Walking Dead is too weak. I don't even know if those who survived the initial virus outbreak have collectively lost their wits. How can they be bullied like this by those weak chickens? Is it the screenwriter's demand?

I guess the author's surname is Ye and he is 16 years old this year

Kill decisively, even killing a dog is hard as hell

The protagonist has never seen a woman before. He knows that he only has one year in the world of the walking dead, but he just wants to get a girlfriend as soon as he meets her. Moreover, this woman is not very beautiful, nor is she very capable, so you just lick her.

To be honest, it's really rubbish 🤐🤐. It's obvious that its characteristics are IQ and machinery. I don't see it at all if I have a high IQ. It's okay to play with machinery, but you also need a soul? Do you think it's Warhammer 40K? The machine soul of others. It is based on a huge population base and can be continuously manufactured. What do you have? One or two big cats and kittens? As for Mechagodzilla, don't say that you will put Godzilla's soul into Mechagodzilla when the time comes. I'm afraid you will be confused into the ground by a face-to-face encounter. 😁😁😁

What kind of heroine should I write in the first zombie world? The key is that it is disgusting enough and does not help at all. You can give me a dark protagonist. Also, if you take the mechanical route, what is the quantity limit? Even if we take the elite route, does your mechanical dog count?

I feel relieved when I see so many people criticizing the author.

The name of the protagonist is so annoying

You can travel across the world without fear of Thanos snapping his fingers. When he snaps his fingers, he goes to other worlds and then comes back. I am really speechless.

It's really not very good-looking, it's a pity for this subject matter

Poison, pure white text. The writing is not good. Messy

This equipment at the beginning, pistols and shotguns were picked up for free, plus the gold finger processing workshop, and the United States was still in the peaceful homeland. Give me two thousand dollars to directly arm myself to the teeth. As a machinist, I have no sense of autonomy at all and rely entirely on drawings.

When I saw the pet and mount functions in the system at the beginning, I immediately deleted the book.

The author wrote two books, both of which were The Walking Dead. Logically speaking, it should have been written by an old fan. Why is it written so ugly? The character changes are messy for you, and everyone is smart. I don't understand, I don't know how to write but I have to write

Hey, it would be nice if the protagonist were a little tougher, but he's a little too useless and can't control his own destiny.

Seriously, cut it out, the author. It's really not good. This is someone who has written a few novels. It's too embarrassing. People who are embarrassed can't even read it. Please change it and repost it. The writing style is the same as that of a poor student in high school. It's too noob.

Do you want to die by teaming up with Spider-Man? Spider-Man is the lone star of the evil spirit. He defeated his girlfriend and his father, his parents and the relatives who took care of him. He defeated his friends and even Iron Man. Spider-Man is still a virgin bitch

The protagonist is from China and gives some technology to the country. Does the protagonist have a chance to become one of the five members of the World Security Council? Regular version of mechanical dog, trap and chip! Once you become a director, no one will deal with you openly.

Iron Man's dog licking, these technologies are given to China, Shenmao Bureau can beat the purple sweet potato spirit into a dog

I have seen the source of fire in the Marvel world, and I also know that Ultraman also has robots

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them, or you can just brush them off in one stroke Is it interesting to forcefully make them awkward to death and use brainless wisdom?