Mercenaries of the Heavens

... Brother, have you forgotten that the protagonist can have telekinesis? How can 1,000 kilograms of telekinesis carry four people in the team to fly together? Apart from anything else, isn't it impossible to think of it even if you're on the road with your mind?

In the third golden chapter, Shennong was persuaded to quit at the beginning, and Shennong had no cure.

How do you continue reading such a novel? It is no different from the plot of the movie, and the writing is much worse than the movie. The plot is dry and speechless. . .

The power system is so complicated that writing the attribute panel almost takes up a chapter. The protagonist's telekinesis also makes him use it like a lump of stone. People's telekinesis can fly, fight, prevent, and control, which is very convenient, but the protagonist is so powerful. All he has to use is a half-baked telekinesis shield. Especially when robbing the king's tomb, you have to fight with recklessness, climb the mountain, and use a dagger to poke the Muchen Bead there. If you can't poke it in or pull it out during the fight, you can't use telekinesis to control the sword? You don't know how to use your telekinesis to get the Muchen Bead? I really asked him at that time whether his mental power had increased due to food.

Whether the protagonist knows the plot or not, it feels completely similar to the original work, with no changes. Is it still necessary to read your book? It's better to watch

The protagonist is forced to reduce his IQ and becomes a robot. He must follow the settings. This book will be useless. Don't come here. This is just to reduce IQ...

Time travel is something that one can do alone. When traveling in a team, something will happen if someone is careful.

Sincerely, the progress is too fast. Basically, there are about 10 chapters, one world and one plot, and then the next one is gone. It is completely like an assembly line of big data, without any emotional investment. Nowadays, novels are all based on the idea that they will be popular if they can be popular, and they will be mixed if they can be mixed. Not many of them can write carefully.

This is the third time I have seen such a bad book

Like most movie plots, the ones that have been changed are all insignificant plots.

Kill decisively without dragging out the plot. Great book!

For mercenaries, don't write about martial arts resistance. It would be great to write about The Bourne Supremacy, Mission: Impossible, Suicide Squad, The Fast and the Furious, The Machinist, etc.!

I can't stand it any longer. I don't have to use it now that I have the ability? ? ? I don't understand. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. If you think your ability is too buggy, don't write about it. If you write about it and you're afraid it's too buggy, just write about the advanced world. You're too good at it, you're so awkward.

Is this a mercenary? Not World JC?

At the beginning, you have super out-of-control telekinesis. The system gives you time and you don't develop it, but you immediately enter the dungeon! Then just don't use it! Just play! Beyond the limit of physical fitness and special forces skills, he can't defeat an ordinary mercenary!

When I saw the sword, I was speechless. What did I write about Li Yunlong? Although he is thick-skinned and wants to take advantage of every advantage, it is not like this. Also, after the protagonist's special ability was obtained, he only used it once to push away the rocket, and it was useless after that. Does he need a gun to have this ability? Bringing some razor blades and needles can kill hundreds of little devils at night. The more you write, the more rubbish you get.

Laughing to death, I'm afraid the protagonist's ability is something that makes the author forget what the protagonist's abilities are.

Readily! Just a little less! Come on💪…

When I saw Chapter 10, the police took out shotguns from their clothes and grabbed them, I was speechless.

I thought, I wanted to read it, so I scrolled through the book reviews, and found that 9 out of 10 of them were scolding,,,,,, it's scary. . ,,, I want to buy a ticket and run away overnight.

I've seen more than 100 pictures, and I can't stand it anymore with just two words.

It's really rubbish, the writing is like that of a primary school student

It's like his mother is reading a script.

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The author's heart: mmp, I want to know so much, why would I write a Hammer novel🤭🤭

How can you still write so much if you are so poisonous🙂🙂

If the author doesn't know how to write a digital protagonist, don't write random things. If the memory is bad, don't write data that changes at any time. If the writing is not good, then... I can't stand it anymore. I can't stand it anymore. I have to get the other half of my brain back!

This is not an ordinary white text, it was written by a machine, right?

Bad review of the heroine. There are so many beauties in the story world, and your original writing is not very good either. There is no sense of immersion at all.

Does the author know how many Browning series there are? Pistol, rifle, light machine gun, heavy machine gun. Is it a gun called a Browning?