I Have the Game Board

The beginning is so frustrating. Not to mention that the protagonist's tenant is the director and can't afford the house. The excuse the protagonist gives is too stupid.

Ten years ago there must be fire

Stop writing and go to the electronics factory to tighten the screws 😁 It's okay to be incorporated, the system is still very good. Childhood sweethearts but don't know each other's existence 😅 Do you have a different understanding of this idiom 😒 The father is the director's son but he doesn't know anything, there is no clue at all 😁 What a fool! Creativity is okay. The whole book would be better to be overhauled.

Well, the daily dialogue and the dialogue in the story are exchanged back and forth. One second it was a story, the next second there was an old man, there was nothing to eat, and the next second it changed again.

Let me just say one thing, the protagonist's tenant is his senior sister, and she is the director of the Bureau of Investigation, okay?

The plot logic is outdated. It was considered excellent a few years ago, but now it's just passable at best.

Creativity is okay. What the hell did Naihe write? It was officially incorporated as soon as it came up. . . There is no reason for poor grades

Looking at the first three chapters, the writing style and creativity are OK, but the characters are too silly and unreasonable, and I really can't stand it.

It is recommended to refer to the "Demon Hunting Cooking Manual"

Reading this book reminded me of the few novels I read more than ten years ago.

In Chapter 3, I saw a tenant who actively contacted and showed concern for the protagonist was the director. I really didn't know what to say. The director rents an ordinary house and does not work at home during the day. I can barely understand it as hiding his identity, but what is the reason for his inexplicable enthusiasm for the protagonist? Why is it such a stupid plot?

Stop the water! Stop the water! Who likes to pay money to watch you suck? This is not because of poor writing, but because it directly drives away readers!

It's completely different from what I imagined 😣

The plot is too sudden and lacks foreshadowing, giving people a sense of dissonance, and the characters lack description and are not three-dimensional. The golden finger stretches the crotch too much, which makes it not look any better. The male protagonist's IQ is normal but not outstanding, so it's not that cool either. The idea of ​​adding a childhood sweetheart and a yandere at the beginning is a good idea, but it does not fit well with the identity of the director. Let's take care of it for a while, author, come on. (○｀ε´○)

Chapter 4 at the beginning is too awkward. It doesn't feel right. Come on, author. I'm going to find another book.

It's so poorly written that the person who used the plug-in actually contradicted the official version for no apparent reason. I'm speechless.

It's not easy to find a book these days that has a review section full of negative reviews, so do it and cherish it.

The plot was so inconsistent that a writer whose level was not even level 1 was dismissed!

First place

Sorry, I got poisoned and died in the second picture.

All I can say is, come on, author. . . .

I feel weird, as if all kinds of worlds are mixed together.

What kind of thing is written 😥😥😥 I find it baffling. Can't appreciate it. Goodbye to you

Why not choose a recipe? Can't you make delicious food by yourself if you have a recipe?