Start by Baking Gluten in Front of Tongfu Inn

It was quite speechless at the beginning, because when Big Mouth came, the protagonist saw Big Mouth and thought of the cook, so he chose the cook... If the game settings are to be followed, there should at least be a confirmation stage...

Then the culinary skills advanced and Tongfu Inn closed down 🙂

Author, there are too many irrelevant things. You, a cook, buy a house for 70 taels and then add a yard or open a small door in the inn to sell snacks. You join the inn after dozens of chapters and then become a part-time worker. There is also a protagonist who does not want to make money or work. He can open a small stall in the early stage, then open a braised food shop, a cold drink shop to gain experience, and finally a membership system, auction or private kitchen, several times a month. What a waste of craftsmanship

If you integrate the plot, you should go to the capital after all. After all, most of the other stories are in the capital, and the other plots have not officially started yet. It is most suitable for Xiao Guo to move to the inn when he returns to the capital. The subsequent plot can also be unfolded in the capital. The strength of the inn is really not weak, and it is not necessary to lose anywhere. At this stage, others do not know each other's details and are afraid of danger, so they dare not go to the capital. The protagonist is more stubborn, so he will definitely go to the capital in the future.

The golden finger profession I took was Buddhism. These days, the cultural level of the ancestors has become very high. The teachings of Buddhism on being unfaithful, unfilial, benevolent and unjust really discourage people from quitting.

There are too many messy plots integrated into it. It's very tiring to watch and not even fun at all. I'll call it a day. Goodbye!

Regarding the male protagonist being "I want it all" by the female protagonist. Forget it that the heroine is a widow (or she is engaged, so she probably hasn't tried it yet), I can tolerate it after skipping a few chapters. But for more than 80 chapters, the heroine secretly made a secret love for the hero. With both of them half revealed, you arranged for the heroine to cuddle and kiss the princess. After being bumped into by the hero, the heroine actually hesitated to choose the hero or the princess, and finally came up with the idea that I want them all? (Those who say "Isn't that better", I... Have nothing to say) Looking behind, the heroine and the hero also performed a series of "Who do I belong to you?" "Why do you, a cook, give her happiness?" "You are not qualified, you don't care about her feelings." What the fuck#%＄%... Am I watching the eight o'clock show, a romance novel, or a tea show? ! It's still a template for the female protagonist to be a scumbag and the male protagonist to be a bitter heroine! I'll do it! ! ! I'm really disgusted😡😡

It's too messy, and have the protagonists appeared in dozens of subsequent photos? They are all irrelevant plots, some of them are okay, but so many of them are too disgusting. There is no fixed narrative method, just a hammer here and there.

Wulin Gaiden is light-hearted and funny, but everything you wrote is wrong, and the world blends together very awkwardly.

I have a little idea and a suggestion. I have read Chapter 45 of this book, and I can't stand it anymore. The plot is okay, and the text is okay, but it incorporates too many worldviews. I have always believed that in this kind of fan fiction, the integration of each worldview is a kind of screening of the readership group, such as the popular Marvel fanfics, and other things in Marvel, which essentially put readers in On the basis of the Marvel fan group, other fan groups have been added. Of course, this is just a filter. For example, I don't watch Marvel Riga Paladin and Masked Superman because I don't watch Masked Superman and don't know what Paladin is. But I am a fan of Marvel books and I don't watch many movies. I basically understand Marvel plots through fans. The first time I read Marvel fan fiction was because I was a fan of martial arts and fairy tales, and I got started with Marvel's Sword Fairy or something like that. To go off topic, the basic fans of this book are Wulin Gaiden fans. Later I saw Ouchi Secret Agent and Medical Hall Laughter. I can still accept these two. I have read them both. As soon as the painting came out, I felt that the style of the painting was a little wrong. Now Soul Jade It's out again, and there are also the legendary kitchen utensils and magic weapons from Xiaodangjia. Oh my god, the painting style is a mess. There are also many characters that look like they should be characters in other works but I didn't recognize them, such as the Xuanwu. It seems from the comments It is a villain. I feel as if this page and the previous page are about different novels. The transition between familiarity and strangeness is so abrupt. Maybe if all the worldview works that the author has been integrated into are familiar, there will not be such a sense of separation, but I am not, so I say that the integration of every worldview is a kind of screening. People like me are the ones who are screened out. Goodbye, I feel that this Wulin Gaiden fan is well written and has good ideas, but it is not suitable for me, thank you.

Why is your cover a razor head?

I couldn't stand it. I couldn't see what the protagonist was going to do throughout the whole process. It was just a blur of dozens of chapters, and the protagonist only missed a few appearances.

Madam Qian, the first choice in Wulin Gaiden, found a way to learn Kung Fu

I don't know what it is about. Have you read the book written by the author yourself? 🙂

Why does your cover look like a razor?

I guess there must be a lot of people like me. At first glance, I thought the cover looked like a razor. 😅

This book is so overbearing. Crumple it into a ball and throw it in front of you. Come and read my novel Chaos, Hot Wheels, Bulls, Ghosts, Snakes, Gods, Chaos, Light-hearted and Funny Homely Dinner, You Come and I Go, I Open a Shop, Lucky Uncles, Aunts and Uncles, and I Come to the Inn. . . . . . . . Die

Wasn't it a monk at the beginning? Fahai Tang Monk Jigong, isn't it good? How did you become a cook? So confused (✪▽✪)

The cover of this book, a razor?

As a new author, the plot is quite confusing, but it would be nice if I wrote more and sorted it out.

When I saw Chapter 77, I was really confused.

After reading Chapter 10, there is nothing sinister about it. I just don't know whether the hodgepodge that follows has been handled well!

That... The cover is... A razor...

To be honest, I couldn't stand it any longer and just read a few chapters. What is written here? What the hell did you write for a Wulin Gaiden with a happy everyday tone? In-depth speculation and over-interpretation! Even though this is a hodgepodge world, doesn't it mean that any plot corresponds to any tone?

It was okay in the beginning, but the author had to risk his life and make a hodgepodge.

Why are there only 69 posts! Hahaha, it's red, it's red, it's red, it's red, it's red, it's red

This book feels like a mess. The characters' appearances, descriptions, and events are all added in a hurry before the characters' appearances, descriptions, and events are explained clearly. Also, the upgrade is too fast, and the reason for the upgrade is a bit inexplicable. There is no event to support it. It feels like you can upgrade at will.

When I saw the title of the book, I wanted to ask if there was any recommendation for a delicious gluten shop. Although it might be far away, I just wanted to ask. When I was a kid, I ate a very delicious gluten dish once. When I took a bite, spicy juice flowed out from it. It was very delicious. Unfortunately, I couldn't find it anymore. Then I found that the gluten now is very dry. I have found a few delicious gluten, but it just doesn't feel like it did when I was a child.

Prices are confusing, I looked at them for a while ๑_๑

It's so messy that I can't stand it anymore. Bye👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻👋🏻