The Treasure Bowl Begins in a Siheyuan

If you don't want to jump on the bandwagon and ride the wave of popularity, you don't have to write about courtyard houses. But if you do write about them, don't be so self-important.

Dude, why don't you change the protagonist's name back? This doesn't look right; this is fanfiction.

The first few chapters made me want to vomit. I've read so many books, but I couldn't even finish a few chapters of this one. Qin Huairu having three daughters means she needs an IUD; she's donating money with an old man in the middle of the night; Sha Zhu can sneak a whole chicken back from the cafeteria. I'm a kid born in the 80s, and we barely ate meat a few times a year. They're all scumbags.

After reading two or three chapters, I really couldn't read any more. In those days, a young man in his mid-twenties who didn't work and just stayed at home all day, and even bought a bicycle, must have been deaf and blind to everyone else.

One sentence was all it took to turn it off; it's incredibly naive and utterly illogical, completely ruining the characters' personalities. It's just pure wishful thinking, utterly naive.

I've read hundreds of novels about courtyard houses, tried four different websites, and couldn't finish a single one. I've read almost all the prehistoric fantasy novels. Of all the genres, I like Xianxia and Xuanhuan novels the most. Having read novels for about twenty years, my overall rating for this novel is failing. The "golden finger" setting is good, but the writing is too naive.

Freebies for a limited time are all poisonous; I can't even stand watching free content anymore.

With such a powerful cheat code, all he does is do shameless things.

The Chaos Treasure chose such trash.

Others write three golden chapters, but you write three chapters that make people give up. This is not how you do it. You can have your own ideas and which character you like, that's your business. If it's well-written, everyone will read it. But can you please not write about life so casually?