The Heaven-Defying Gun God System

This book is quite good (≧∇≦*). The large amount of data is very refreshing. I prefer this kind of book.

I feel like the running account accounting mode seems a bit dry

The plot develops too fast, and it feels like it's not a novel but an introduction. Writing only the ending without writing the process is too rushed. Your novel of 200,000 words could be written in a million words if the number of words is not enough. There is so little dialogue that there is almost no dialogue. There is no date, weather, character, tone or character description, let alone scene description. The novel written by others is a world, and the novel written by you is a diary. You only write an outline without details.

Oh my god, after reading eight chapters, I just killed a few zombies, got a few points, redeemed a few things, and then killed a few more zombies. There was no plot or dialogue at all.

I always hear the main character's name as Teddy. And I suspect you are keeping a diary.

In fact, the writing is pretty good, and the creativity in the early stage is also very good. It doesn't matter if you play it alone at the beginning, but there is no main line as a whole, it is strengthening. You are cutting leeks in each world to strengthen. I can't stand it when I enter the game. I don't look forward to the following plot. Anyway, it is just cutting leeks to strengthen. Isn't strengthening to fight the boss? There is no main plot or villain. It is a one-man show with a female protagonist. I don't pay attention to it. Anyway, the total description is less than 100 words and everyone dies in the end. I have no desire to continue reading. If there is a main plot later, please reply me after reading it and I will subscribe.

It's a stand-alone game. The NPCs are zombies. I'm always enjoying myself. I'm afraid I won't be invincible until chapter 10. The subject matter is pretty good, but the writing ruined it.

A little more eclectic, not so much nonsense. The first three copies should be for accumulation. I hope the main plot behind it can be described in more detail.

I thought it was a clichéd system that is modern, but I didn't expect that I am using 3 versions of the system 😅. It's great in every aspect. Come on.

Congratulations to the author for capturing the soul with one shot, killing countless readers instantly, and becoming a solitary person.