One Person Cuts Through the World

I really can't stand it when I see the help of the Zhou family. I feel like the pig's trotters are becoming more and more like a double-labeled dog. I have grievances and I have to take revenge when I am bullied. Others have been bullied by the Zhou family and I want to seek revenge from the Zhou family. I feel that the world should be like this. The chapter before it was released was so poisonous. Isn't it a waste of book money after it is released? Pig's trotters can kill decisively and even cruelly. But as a double-labeled dog, to be honest, I really can't stand it.

I am a female reader That is to say, I would like to express my suggestions mixed with daily life. Every fifty or sixty chapters, add a warm and funny life chapter to adjust it. Fighting and killing every day is really tiring. There is no sense of time transition either. The role of Li Zi is very nice. Let's have some more confidants. There are too few confidants who can stand alone. (You should give more effort to the other characters. Compared with Li Zi, he is too dull. He doesn't have the feeling of being the protagonist's confidant and has no taste.) Can you not just be happy for the sake of being happy? Can you pay attention to the narrative technique? Old man Yu was really angry when he died. It's too frustrating to just kill the male protagonist without cleaning him up (occasionally, I'll ask someone to give me some talk/explain to me before killing, is it OK to slap him in the face?). Please don't be happy just for the sake of simple pleasure, okay? (There are many kinds of coolness.) Can the story structure be changed? Can I have some more confidants? Add some fun. So boring Can that system have a stronger sense of presence and make it more interesting? Just making up the word count for that task is no different from not having a system. Just one and two, is it okay to do a daily mission, is it okay to talk about personal things after the system is upgraded, is it okay to turn into a humanoid weapon and serve as the male protagonist's subordinate. Can the male protagonist save others, Ang? Also, can the introduction be changed? That Jianghu is killing gods. Still drifting in the world. I know that the author wants to retain previous readers and is afraid of losing their subscriptions. But can we make a breakthrough? Too solid.

The first part is pretty good and bloody, but the second part is just a pure villain, bandit and scumbag. Every time the protagonist kills someone at a higher level, he suddenly adds more points to kill one with a knife. How has his combat power collapsed?

My writing style is not very good, I can't stand it.

There is no problem with this book in terms of process. Everyone must follow this process when writing a book. However, I am sure that this book is written in a very impatient manner. Then I checked the author's rules and found that he is also an old author who has written many books. But in my personal opinion, he is too impatient, and he does not have the foreshadowing to connect the past and the future. Everything is too hasty and the content is too crowded. My personal opinion is that you should not think about how big a climax you want to give readers. You should first find a way to use understatement and familiarity to make people not hate your book, and then when the foreshadowing is successful, give them a climax. Your current conflicts are just countless small conflicts. In addition to making people look irritated, they will not attract readers at all. I don't represent other readers, I only represent you as an individual. If you want to get to a higher level, or make your book more readable and immersive, your current impatient writing method will only make you rush into the street and waste your talent and brainpower. You can never be impatient when writing a book. The more impatient you are, the more likely you will fall into a trough. The peak will not last long without paving the way. I saw this place. The moment Shijia appears, you are still in the impatience period of writing a book. If you don't stop and slow down, it will restrict your efforts a lot, but you can't improve your grades. Believe it or not.

The only advantage of this book is that it kills decisively. It is never holy, and there are never too many BBs to kill. This is how it feels.

Please have a great time watching it, okay?

To put it simply, this book is old-fashioned, refreshing, and straightforward. Skipping to read it will not affect the experience at all. The comments section is too violent - it is not recommended to open this chapter and say that it is a good story to vent negative emotions. That's it.

The rhythm was good in the front, but started to feel weak in the back.

Great book, I haven't seen such a crisp and clear book in a long time.

Not enough

I have generally read all of Que Yue's works. My eyes lit up when I saw "That Man in the Jianghu", and the subsequent "He Walks in the World" is even more reminiscent of excellent and related works such as Jin Yong's "The Condor" and "The Divine Condor". Unfortunately, martial arts eventually lost to reality. Good works have not encountered good times. A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people, but martial arts are dead. The new book inevitably falls into a cliché, but it is still good among books of the same type. I hope that one day in the future, I can see real martial arts.

Looking through the book, I didn't expect that I still have the complete version Let's take a look

This book is too violent. It is a good thing to kill decisively in the rivers and lakes, but you cannot kill for the sake of killing. Bad people can be killed, but good people can also be killed? When the master of misfortune comes to seek revenge, you kill him for your own benefit. Then you can kill all the enemies in the house, but those servants are also poor people who can't survive, such as selling themselves or working as long-term workers, so why should they be killed. When you meet a young chivalrous person who doesn't understand the world, you can teach him a lesson, but why bother killing him. Did the author grow up in Mexico?

I said these books are studio assembly line products, give me a 50-year ban 😂

I feel numb... This kind of book has become the first in the category? Do you guys like this now?

Stand as evidence

It mainly uses the same routine... I just skipped it after watching it for a while, always looking for trouble to kill people to level up, and then looking for bigger things to kill more powerful people on the way to a more powerful level.

Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs but died after reading Chapter 5

I'm a little speechless. This force persecutes the protagonist, and then the protagonist fights back, and then the next force, and then the next force, and then the next force, and then the next one. Are you leveling up across the nesting doll? Don't you get tired of this back and forth?

The financial power is not in my hands, and the family of five is waiting for me to guard it. The five hundred reward is all I have, and I don't ask for praise or anything. I only want the best posts to contain whatever the author wants.

You can cut down the world, but you can't cut down Pinduoduo

What do you say about this book? There is only one word in the whole book, kill, kill if you don't like it, kill if you are disobedient, anyway, keep killing. From the beginning to the end, the opponents are forced to do it. All the plots are also to prepare the protagonist for killing. Each opponent is only a little stronger than the protagonist. If he appears, he is higher than the protagonist. When reaching several realms, the protagonist must have (character experience card) (realm improvement card) and the like in his hand, and then he will kill and kill again, without considering the consequences of killing people at all. He just kills for the sake of killing. It is really a mindless killing throughout the whole story, and there is no nutrition at all after seeing it.

After reading Chapter 60, I can summarize it for you in just 4 words: Killing Levels Up. There is no foreshadowing at all, and there is no plot at all. In short, it is just a four-word killing upgrade. Kill whoever you see, and basically kill everyone who has any intersection with the protagonist. He killed those who were escaping together, as well as a pair of young ladies and maids he met on the way. After entering the city, he joined a gang. He first killed the deputy gang leader, then the gang leader, and then fought with the gang next door. Basically, all those who opposed him were killed in one or two chapters, and then the system set a new opponent for him. I'm afraid this author must be so depressed that he can vent like this. After reading about 60 pictures, all I saw was a few words against humanity. Anyone with a normal mentality would feel uncomfortable reading this book. Don't talk about dark flow, that's not how dark flow is written. I wonder if this kind of book can pass the review.

No heroine, no heroine, no heroine

I was also recommended by the leader of the Vajra Indestructible Village. I'm too young.

To sum up, the battle is similar to the size, and the process can be ignored. The plot is that the protagonist's strength is 4, and someone suddenly pops out while walking on the road, and a 3 appears to kill the protagonist. The protagonist comes out of the 4 tube, and passersby say you don't dare to kill me, because my backstage strength is 6 greater than yours. The protagonist upgraded to level 5 regardless of killing, and also exploded a strength 7 experience card. The background shot a 6, and the protagonist used the experience card to play a 7 and killed it. He upgraded to a 6 and exploded a 9. Jump a few experience packs in the middle for the protagonist to kill, and the protagonist will upgrade to 7 after killing them. At this time, an 8 pops up from the backstage, and the protagonist kills with a 9. He upgrades to an 8 and explodes a 10. Anyway, the cycle is like this. When the background is gone, change the map and start again. The current progress is the 4th picture

This is how you can collect 30,000 yuan and travel to Sanjiang. I laughed after reading five chapters. Did you travel back in time and write a novel ten years ago 😊?

After reading more than ninety chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. If nothing else, it has many advantages: it is decisive in killing and not sloppy. It is in line with the characteristics of a refreshing novel, and it will not stop you from taking action just because it is a woman. But I really can't stand the shortcomings. I can tolerate the villain's lower IQ, but lowering him to a fool is too much. From the young lady of a wealthy family to the servant of the head of a noble family, they all want to kill the protagonist as soon as they see him. They even threaten him when someone grabs his neck. Then all the young ones died and then the old ones came, and the backers died and the backers came. The IQs of the good guys were as if they were eaten by dogs. With the IQ of the villain in the novel, I wanted to know how he managed to survive before meeting the protagonist! I don't ask you to write a villain with a higher IQ. After all, it's a cool article that can be understood, but at least the IQ must meet human standards, right? How about the title of the book: One Man Cuts Down a Slaughterhouse with a Knife? Apart from being able to speak human words, none of them seemed to be anything like normal people.

Finished reading it in one sitting! Those who say they don't look good! Maybe I don't read enough books! It's rare to find such a beautiful book! The author's writing is not very good! But at least you know your shortcomings! Try to write less and more plot! Just have fun along the way! ! ! This is something many authors can't do! There are so many starting points! People who are not good at writing! Everyone feels like they are a great god! Various scenes and various plots! I can't control it! Reading it makes me vomit blood! ! ! The author's next book will be as good as possible! You can slow down the pace a little! Slow down your upgrade speed! ! ! Keep this style of fighting all the way to the end! You can add a little! Such as disguise to kill! Poison and the like! Otherwise, they will kill a group of people every time! A few seconds! It will get boring after a long time! The heroine can arrange some! Tired of killing! You can relax and unwind! Otherwise, too many chapters will be killed! Anyone who reads the book will be obsessed with it.